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Posted: 8 years ago
sweet OS
funny u should mention hum tum was just watching it for first time last night
liked how Dev couldn't see Radhika hurt
the way he stopped dancing with Annie when he saw Radhika made me smile
could've killed Radhika though for always pretending to be angry
she nearly ruined Devs confession the poor guy was gutted for second there
at least she realized n confessed herself b4 he left upset
thanks for pm n plz keep em comin
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Posted: 8 years ago
Thanks for PM,Dear.😊
I'm sorry for late comment,Busy in Project Work,Please forgive me...😭
Thank You so much for dedicated this Chapter to me also.😊
It was So Lovely OS.😳
I love this Dev and Radhika Couple.😳
They were looking so Cute.😳
The whole part was so Beautifully explained.😳
The Pics were so Nice.😊
Please Write like this.😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
Thanks for PM,Dear.😊
I'm sorry for late comment,Busy in Project Work,Please forgive me...😭
Manav and Archana Os was so Beautiful.😳.
The pics were so Nice.😊
I like this Couple also.😊
The whole os was so Lovely explained.😊
Please write like this.😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
WOW!! it was beautiful dear...lovely moments...
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Posted: 8 years ago
Beautiful OS
Thank You for writing this story on Dev and Radhika
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Posted: 8 years ago
hi thanks 4 da pm n beautiful OS! well written
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Posted: 8 years ago
Superb and just Fabulous Update

Radika and Dev beautiful couple indeed
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Posted: 8 years ago
awesome os...
love d story...
nice title...
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Old is gold(OS series on old TV couples)Episode 14 (Shravan Sanchi)
 
Thanks to the picture editor
 

 
 I dedicate this to  zebali and Sydell who wrote specifically that they want to read on Shravan Sanchi

I love you ghost




Shravan Sharma,the great business man moves to a bungalow he bought recently.He bought the bungalow as it was an antique  and beautiful.Shravan whose passion is music is a good musician too.He takes his guitar and tries to compose music.He realizes that he is failing in composing music.He hears a girl humming.He searches fot that girl.But he does'nt find her.

"It may be my illusion.But the music Ifelt  is beautiful".

He hums it.
But he next night also he hears her voice.He gets a glance of a girl walking.
 
 

 
 


 
.He is startled by her sight.
"Who are you?How did you get inside my house?Yesterday you only sang here.Right?",he asks.
"Yes,i only sang.I just helped you to compose music",she replies.
"Who are you?"
"I'm Sanchi".
"How did you come inside?Why are you here?"
"I can enter anywhere.I'm here,because it was my house before".
"Your house?I heard that no one has stayed here for the last 20 years".
"Yes,you are right.I stayed here 20 years back".
"What nonsense!Were you a kid then?"
"No,i was a teenager".
"Shut up.You are so young.If you were a teenager 20 years ago you should be atleast 40 now".
"You are right.I'm supposed to be 40 years now.But i'm not.Because i died when i was very young.So i did'nt grow old".
Shravan got scared,but he hides his fear.
"What are you saying?"
"I'm a ghost".
Her revelation gives him shock and fear.
"But don't be scared.I'm a harmless ghost.I'm here only because i'm attached to this bangalow.I will not harm you anyway".
Shravan is relieved.
"How did you die?"
He is curious to know about her past.
"I and my family were killed by our own relatives for wealth.But i did'nt come here as a ghost to suck their blood.Because my parents taught me to love instead of taking revenge"

"But they killed you and your family.Still you did'nt punish them though you are a ghost?"He asks.

She replies,

"Who am to punish them?God has already punished them.They died in an accident".
Shravan smiles.

"They deserved it".

Sanchi is sad.

A cute friendship gets formed between Shravan and Sanchi.Sanchi and Shravan spend nights together by composing music.
Shravan realizes that he is falling in love with Sanchi though she is a ghost.
He extends his finger to touch her face,but he can't as she lacks a body.
He is sad.
"Nobody can touch the ghost without it's permission.Now i'm ready.If you want you can touch me now".
Shravan is excited.He touches her face slowly and is very happy.
Sanchi looks at her deeply.

Thode bheege bheege se thode nam hai hum,
Kal se soye voye bhi to kam hai hum.

She speaks in a soft voice,
"If i was alive i would have fallen in love with you.Because you are my dream man".
His heart is filled with the joy of love.
Thode bheege bheege se thode nam hai hum,
Kal se soye voye bhi to kam hai hum.


"Why don't you love me now?I don't care if you are a ghost.I'm already in love with you",
Shravan confesses his love for her.

Thode bheege bheege se thode nam hai hum,
Kal se soye voye bhi to kam hai hum.
Dil ne kaisi harkat ki hai,

It leaves Sanchi in shock.
"Do you know what you are saying?How can you fall in love with a ghost?My time is limited.I have to go back to heaven soon.We can't unite".
Shravan's eyes welled up with tears.
"No Sanchi,you can't go away from me".
She is upset.
"But I am forced to go Shravan.I can't help it.God controls me".
"You are not the usual blood sucking ghost.You are a pure soul.Won't God allows you to stay with me?"
"Shravan...I am a ghost.Ghosts have written destiny.It can't be changed.I have to go".
"Then please Sanchi...tell me one thing.Do you love me?"
She is silent.
"Tell Sanchi.My heart is beating fast".
She weeps,
"Yes,I love you Shravan".
He is very happy.Her eyes are full of tears.
He extends his fingers to touch her face.His fingers just touched her skin.

But suddenly she flies away from him with tears.He is helpless and weak.
He screams loudly..
"Sanchiii"

Shravan walks along the road like a mad man thinking of his huge loss..losing his beloved forever.Suddenly a lorry hit him.
Shravan's soul is free from his body.
"I got salvation.I'm free from this world.I can be with my Sanchi now.She will be waiting for me now".He jumps with joy.
Shravan flies to the heaven.As he expected Sanchi is waiting for him with her shining eyes and beautiful heart.
Sanchi who is dressed in a glittering white saree looks pure and cute like an Angel.She extends her arm with a smile.Shravan holds her arm with a smile and pulls her towards him.
Pehli baar mohabbat ki hai,
Aakhiri baar mohabbat ki hai,
 
"Now there is no obstacle.Nothing can separate us",Shravan says confidently.
She smiles.

They rest in each other's arms.

Pehli baar mohabbat ki hai,
Aakhiri baar mohabbat ki hai...(Kaminey).
The end
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Posted: 8 years ago
Lovely os

Loved it
Keep smiling