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"kuch khaas hai kuch kuch paas hai kuch ajnabii ehsaas hai.. kya yeh khumaar hai? hmmm hmm hmmm hhmmm" Humming the latest song he heard few days back, he tigten his belt standing infront of the bathroom mirror and smiled at himself looking at the mirror..

"Ahhh!!" With a loud roar, she fall on the ground with her heel breaking off and that dog jumping and chasing her too stopped and barked."Bhaoo.."
"Maa.. mumma!!" The voiced betrayed her going off with fear and few fresh tears formed inside her eyes.. She was hell scared of dogs and here one was literally chasing her.. Taking her sandles off she threw one by one over the dog to shoo him away and somehow gathering all her courage got up over her feet and ran!! Ran as fast as she can.. The dog again started chasing her..
It was a dark lane with no of houses, finding one of the gate open she ran straight inside.. Holding he breath, she looked around only to hear the same bark and dog at the gate... "Ahh.." She cried and straight away ran over the lawn where she found another glass door opened leading to someones bedroom.. Without a second thought, she ran inside and shut it off immediately..
"tch!!" He chuckled looking at his deoderants, which one to wear? America returned very particular about what he wears and what not, he narrowed his eyes at one and started sparying it all over his maintained well tonned body..
"Huhh!!" She heard some sound of spray and realized someone is inside that wooden door on the side which must be a bathroom... scared that whoever it is might come out any moment, she quickly hide herself behind the curtains..
Putting the spray back to its place, he opened the bathroom door and got out to get a shirt.. "Hmmm.." he led out a deep breath and walked forward to open his wardrobe.. "Oh no!! yeh to koi ladka hai.." She bit her lower lip nervously.. "Bhao!!" She jumped up hearing the bark again.. that stupid dog was now at the lawn door surely searching for her..
"Yeh yahan kahan se agaya??" The man done with his shir arched his eyebrow on seeing the door.. "gate khula reh gaya hoga!!" He shook his head making an assumption and took a step towards the door when he saw the guard appearing from somewhere shooing it off.. "Hmmm.." He smiled as work was done and turned back when he noticed something...



"Muskaaan!!! Utho yaar!!" Geet slammed a pillow over her.. she was done playing nice and requesting her to get up from her beauty sleep.. "Yaar sone do mujhe neend arahi hai!!" Muskaan made a face turning her side..
"Fine!! Main he ja k chai bana leyti hun aur main he shopping pe bhi chali jaati hun akele!!" Geet gritted her teeth.. "Pleease.. coffee achi banati ho! chai ta to beda ghark he kr deti ho!! aur mere bagair tum shopping nahi kr sakti.. you don't have that fashion sense!!" Muskaan mocked over her face..
"To phir uthooo!!!" Geet kicked her off the bed.. "Faaltu mein kab se bakwaas kiye ja rahi ho!!" she yelled..
Geet and Muskaan were identical twins born in a Handa family.. There father, Mohinder died long back after which their mother Rano took a step and moved in to Dehli.. City where she thought she can raise her children better and free from any royality.. Two identical daughters and one young son 'Arjun' it was hard to survive but with a smart mind and smart daughters all the well..
Arjun was a bright student and now done with his boards.. Geet and Muskaan finished off their studies and now doing an advance cource of IT just to be safe on their part.. Being identical twins they have few weird drawbacks aswell.. some soul connection where what one feels other get effected too..

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"Why the hell are you smiling so much??" Rahul narrowed his eyes at Dev.. "Raat ko mera bhai araha hai!! i am super duper excited!!" Dev almost danced around all over the canteen.. "Excited hona alag baat hoti hai aur pagal hona alag!!" Rajveer rolled his eyes looking at Dev..
"Seriously maan is coming back?? You mean he is done with all he wanted??" Rahul again asked to conform... Back in the school days, Rahul used to be a neighbour of Dev and Maan and so he was kind of a best buddy of Dev and a good friend of Maan aswell..
"Yup!!!" Dev pressed his lips togather..
"Hahahaha!! Tumhara to hogaya kaam!! you are officically doomed!!" Annie started laughing over him..
"Kyun bhae??" Dev frowned at her..
"Its because that you dear elder brother is now a great doctor! Aur yeh to tumhare papa tum donow k liye apna itna bada business chorr k gaye hain jisko tum kab se akele handle kar rahe ho abhi bhi akele he handle karo ge!!!" Annie giggled... "Point! ab doctor medical reports dekhe ga!! Balance sheet aur income statements thodi dekhe gaa!!" Geet added winked at Annie.. it was becoming fun to irritate Dev..
"Tum log to naa bharr mein jao!! koi achi baat mat karna kabhi!!" He pouted..
"Did we miss anything??" Sapna inquired as she and muskaan just walked inside the canteen only to see the bunch of their friends laughing..
"Dev apne bhai k ane ki khushi mein parson party de raha hai!!" Rajveer announced..
"Huh??" Dev's mouth hungup..
"Really dev??" Muskaan asked mischeviously...
"Haan! tum muft khoron ko aur kya chahiye hoga??" Dev pouted only to make others burst out into a huge laughter...



"Rahul k bache!! you are so hell interested in Geet!! tum ussko bata kyun nahi dete??" Annie asked while walking along back home with Rahul.. she used to live in a hostel and Rahul's studio appartment was just opposite to that..
"Haan bilkul!! you so want me dead from that sarcasm queen!!" Rahul gritted his teeth eyeing Annie.. "Well! Muskaan sweet hai!" Annie chirped...
"Just because they are identical and you cannot differeciate easily until you talk to them... Doesn't mean donow mein se koi bhi chalega!!" Rahul rolled his eyes...
"O bhae!! to tera dill geet pe kese agaya phir??? You are so reverse!!" Annie shook her head.. "Reverse??" Confused, Rahul asked..
"Haan.. dekho naa, poore campus mein log Geet se door aur Muskaan k peeche bhaagte hain!! Lekin tum Geet k peeche bhaag rahe ho!! kasam se jis din pata lag gaya naa usko... maza ajayega!!" Annie jumped in the air..
"Aur main tumhari jaan le lunga agay tumne kisi ko bhi iss baat ki bhanak lagne di to.." Rahul warned her stopping at the gate of Girl's hostel..
"Huh!! Aisse to kabhi nahi galne wali tumhari daal!!" Annie stormed her heel against the ground and walked inside... "Pagal!! marwaegi kisi din mujhe yeh.." Rahul sook his head..

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"Bhai!!!! Dev jumped waving at Maan outside the pessangers boundary at the AirPort... Finally Mr Maan Singh Khurrana was returning back home after becoming a high Qualified Heart Surgeon...
Maan and Dev Khurrana were two brothers who resides in Dehli along with their mother Annanya.. Their father died few yeara ago leaving a business empire enough to let his children grow up healthy and fit.. Annanya faced a hard time taking care of both her sons and the business ofcourse which practically she has to learn..
Being the elder son you do have to make few sacrafises and take few responsibilities which here was reverse... Maan never wanted to do a business neither these Asset+Liability=Equity gets into his head.. He wanted to be a doctor by profession and even wanted to go out and study..
Dev on the other hand choose his path to learn and takecare of the business making things settle down for Maan and his mother... Maan finally got the permission to go out and study whereas Dev took care of his mother, house and Business..
"Finally Back!" Dev smiled wide looking at Maan who was now standing 2 steps away from him.. "Finally!!" A wide grin dropped down at Maan's face aswell and stepping forward they both hugged eachother tight!! "Missed you yaar!!" Maan patted Dev's back..

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"Ahhh!!" Muskaan got up in the middle of her sleep all shaking.. "Don't tell me yaar!! phir koi ootpatang khawab agaya tumko.." Geet rubbed here eyes in her sleep...
"Maine dekha k..." Muskaan tried catching her breath..
"K tum ek deewar mein bund ho rahi ho! phir main tumhe bachane ati hun... Aur phir tum uth gayi!!" Geet blabbered with her close eyes...
"Tumhe mazak lag raha hai!!! Mujhe kyun yeh ek he khawab baar baar ata hai??" Muskaan started hitting Geet with the pillow...
"Kyunki tum pagal ho gayi ho!! chalo ab so jao!!" Geet pulled her back on the bed with one hand... "I Promise to take care of you! okay?? Good Night!!" Geet repeated the same thing she does everytime Muskaan gets such idiotic psycho dreams...



"So! Its party at 8.. Don't be late!!" Dev did kept his promise.. It was a small warm gathering at house Khurrana's were holding in joice of Maan's return.. Dev was having a nice breakfast along with Annanya Maan and was also messaging everyone he wanted to invite..
"Kya kiya hai tumne apne saath Maan??" Annanya hit her head against her palm on watching what Maan was eating.. "You look like a fitness freak!!" Dev commented...
"Wahan maine masti mein gym join kiya tha.. But phir jab my body actually started looking good i thought why not to maintain it?" Maan chuckled...
"Bana li naa wahan body?? Ab khao chup chaap yahan dhung se khana!!" Annanya scolded him putting white bread in his plate... "Kya mom!! ataya he jharrna shuru kar diya aapne.." Maan pouted..
"Tumne bhi to harkatein shuru kar di atay he.." Annanya retorted back where as Dev was just enjoying today!! For a change he doesn't have to listen any of the morning scolding from his mother!!
"Mom! ab shaadi bhi kr he dijye isski.. jaan choote!!" Dev added more fuel in the fire..
"Dev main tumhari jaan le lunga!!" Maan hit him under the table..
"Haan bhae! bahu chahiye ab to mujhe bhi!!" Annanya joined Dev's team..
"Mera filhal kuch khud ka Hospital kholne ka plan hai... so, no chance for shaadi!!" Maan acted quickly..
"Lo... hogaya kaam!!" Dev held back his laugh.. It was like was was saying that he will get married in is 40's..

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"Ruko yahan par!!" Muskaan asked the taxi driver to stop.. "Humne gift to liya he nahi.." She looked at Geet!!
"Abay yaar!!!" Geet hit her head against her palm.. "Late bhi ho gaye hain!!" Geet bit her lower lip..
"Ek kaam karte hain!! tum jao.. aur main wo saamne mall se koi gift pakar k peeche k raaste se pohunch jati hun!! shotcut haina?" Muskaan suggested..
"Pagal ho kya?? Andhera hogaya hai aur tum aise akele?" Geet arched her eyebrow..
"To kya hogaya?? pass mein he to hain.. late hona bhi acha nahi lagta naa.. Annie k bhi dekho abhi tak kitne message agaye hain.."Muskaan pointed out..
"Hmmm chalo theek hai!!" Reluctantly Geet give in and let Muskaan go...

It was hard to select and Muskaan finally stopped at a nice stylish watch in her budget.. "Huh!! yehi ley leyti hun.." She smiled and ased the sale man to pack that up...
Life seems dangerous when you bump into wrong creepy people who aggrevate you to such a high extent that you end up doing something you will regret the very next moment.. Just when the salesman was packing the watch, some random goon sort of maan interrupted and yelled that he wants that watch...
"Excuse me!! main khareed chuki hun!!" Muskaan narrowed her eyes at him..
"O to hum tujhe khareed leyte hain!!" The man smirked at him.. "DIsgusting!!" Muskaan shook her head and quickly taking away the watch left only to feel that idiot following her... As soon as she got out of the mall, he grabbed her hand trying to force her leaving no other option for Muskaan but to push him away and slap him hard...
She ran ran ran as faST AS SHE COULD TO SAVE HER LIFE... She knew she has messed up with a wrong person.. Wild dogs on street do follow you and ran after you when they feeli like you are running away from them and same started with Muskaan..

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"kuch khaas hai kuch kuch paas hai kuch ajnabii ehsaas hai.. kya yeh khumaar hai? hmmm hmm hmmm hhmmm" Humming the latest song he heard few days back, he tigten his belt standing infront of the bathroom mirror and smiled at himself looking at the mirror..

"Ahhh!!" With a loud roar, she fall on the ground with her heel breaking off and that dog jumping and chasing her too stopped and barked."Bhaoo.."
"Maa.. mumma!!" The voiced betrayed her going off with fear and few fresh tears formed inside her eyes.. She was hell scared of dogs and here one was literally chasing her.. Taking her sandles off she threw one by one over the dog to shoo him away and somehow gathering all her courage got up over her feet and ran!! Ran as fast as she can.. The dog again started chasing her..
It was a dark lane with no of houses, finding one of the gate open she ran straight inside.. Holding he breath, she looked around only to hear the same bark and dog at the gate... "Ahh.." She cried and straight away ran over the lawn where she found another glass door opened leading to someones bedroom.. Without a second thought, she ran inside and shut it off immediately..
"tch!!" He chuckled looking at his deoderants, which one to wear? America returned very particular about what he wears and what not, he narrowed his eyes at one and started sparying it all over his maintained well tonned body..
"Huhh!!" She heard some sound of spray and realized someone is inside that wooden door on the side which must be a bathroom... scared that whoever it is might come out any moment, she quickly hide herself behind the curtains..
Putting the spray back to its place, he opened the bathroom door and got out to get a shirt.. "Hmmm.." he led out a deep breath and walked forward to open his wardrobe.. "Oh no!! yeh to koi ladka hai.." She bit her lower lip nervously.. "Bhao!!" She jumped up hearing the bark again.. that stupid dog was now at the lawn door surely searching for her..
"Yeh yahan kahan se agaya??" The man done with his shir arched his eyebrow on seeing the door.. "gate khula reh gaya hoga!!" He shook his head making an assumption and took a step towards the door when he saw the guard appearing from somewhere shooing it off.. "Hmmm.." He smiled as work was done and turned back when he noticed something...

Feeling a tap over her shoulder Muskaan opened her eyes only to see two other eyes glaring at her.. "Wo... wo main uss kutte se bach ke..  i swear i was doing nothing, wo mere peeche bhaag raha tha and i needed a safe place.." Muskaan in a breath tried to explain before the person infront of her ook her wrong at as theif..
"Appko chot lagi hai!!" He stopped her as he saw few traces of blood on her hand.. "Nnnahi main theek hun!! i should leave.." Muskaan shuddered... "Relax!!" He tried calming her down and brought her out from the curtains.. Making her sit of the couch forcefully, he took out the first at box and started with his work...
"Dekhiye its okay!! i just need to go.." Muskaan once again pleaded..
"Will you please shut up??" He glared at her making her quiet and started applying the medicine.. "Sss..." She grabbed his shoulder tight unvoluntary as the anticeptic hurted.. "Relax.." He repeated once again looking up at that scared face with close eyes and he forget to blink... Nervous, scared, taking deep breaths, pure beauty!!
"Ahhh!!!" Her groan brought him out of trance and he immediately removed the cotton swab from her wound.. "AP.. Apko jaana kahan tha??" He asked casually while taking out the bandage next...
"Actually mujhe khurrana house jaana tha.. Aurr raaste mein.." In a go she told him the details of dog chasing her before he misunderstand her again as a theif.. "Oh!! tab to app ghalti se sahi ghar mein agayi hain!! Hii I am Maan Khurrana!! Dev ka bada bhai.." He smiled standing up infront of her...
"Jee??" Shocked, Muskaan got up too... "Jee!!" He smirked.. "Aur mera gift??" He forwarded his hand as if in damand of his gift from here..



"Wah!! Tum donow behnow ka kuch nahi keh sakte..." Rajveer shook his heas at the two.. There Muskaan hurt herself while running on the road and here Geet fell down hurting herself same...
"Issko wireless connection kehte hain!! tumhe samajh nahi ayeii!!" Annie chuckled... "Shut Up!!" Both geet ad Muskaan rolled her eyes..
"Hey Guys!! Thats my brother.." Dev brought maan to introduce with his friends and there Maan his Khurrana got a shock..
"Wait a minute..." He looked wide eye open at Muskaan and Geet...
"Yeh Muskaan hai!!" Dev pointed at the girl wearing blue anarkali frock who was the same one Maan just met in his room.. "Aur yeh Geet!!" Dev next pointed at the girl in same pattern but white color Anarkali suit..
"Locha-e-ulfat hogaya!!! πŸ˜‰"



Don't Read ArSh version of it because this one of going to be a bit different!
Sameera😊

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Posted: 8 years ago
hi thanks 4 updating! fab start! well written. Geet n Muskaan r twins! they have some connection! Maan is back! update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
Fabulous update
kahin muskan aur maan ki connection ;) ?!?!
Loved it
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nice update
geet n muskan are twins
maan got shock seeing both geet n muskan