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OS: The Stolen Moment (Page 2)

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Posted: 02 May 2015 at 8:02am | IP Logged
Originally posted by iamcurious

Originally posted by poetic

I am totally curious now. Smile
This is so BEAUTIFULLY written ... WOW! I was upset when the story ended. Actually. I felt as if I could read it forever. 
It was a moment so had to end...sorry! LOL

Closet huh? Really romantic.

Bingo! Closet it is WinkLOL


Dr Khanna definitely has the patience of a kid and/ or baby goat. LOL
The best things come to those who wait...so there he has to sehnofy the judai a while more.Embarrassed

Now waiting fervently for day after next. Wonder what Nachiket is pealing. My poor Ragini ! Embarrassed
That I haven't thought of, and wont it be unfair or rather rude to invade their privacy and disturb them?

By the way I plan to sit there with the invisibility cloak on? LOL





I want to be in that Invisibility Cloak as well. No two doubts about it. LOL

But you should really think about giving them a closure, if at all. Let's see how romantic Nachiket can be? LOL

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Posted: 02 May 2015 at 8:03am | IP Logged
Originally posted by poetic

Originally posted by iamcurious

Originally posted by RaginiluvsNR

Oh my my! This was so romantic! Perfect this was! Their 'stolen moments' are indeed lovely. Their secret affair is so so CUTE!
Please continue this hotness!


I too love the idea of romancing secretly. Honestly I don't mind forgetting the fact that they are parents to grown up children LOL

Thanks for reading!


They should forget it themselves ... Nachiket will be already, Ragini is the question mark? 


Let Nachiket take the first step, she might just follow, dekha nahi aapki story mein LOL

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Posted: 02 May 2015 at 8:09am | IP Logged
Originally posted by poetic


I want to be in that Invisibility Cloak as well. No two doubts about it. LOL

But you should really think about giving them a closure, if at all. Let's see how romantic Nachiket can be? LOL


Come along, we'll all fit in...my god what have they done to us ROFL

As for closure, honestly even this I had to do it with a little help, I haven't written anything like this before, so it gets very difficult to write something descriptive which you all write it so beautifully.

I rather promise you another SS, the first part is almost done...will post it once I have the story in mind clearly. Big smile

Thank you very much for reading always :)

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Posted: 02 May 2015 at 8:54am | IP Logged
Got to admit .. You're quite a 'romantic' writer ... You're taking people to the 'next' level Big smile Too much romance for me to digest .. 
Unlike @poetic .. I'm  glad the story ended .. Many more things would have happened(at least to me!!) , had it not ended .. Thanks to Ashaben LOL

I guess, this is your 5th or 6th fiction ..

I'm sure you're following it up with an Update ..

Keep writing ..

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Posted: 02 May 2015 at 10:29am | IP Logged
Oh god this was amazing...
You guys r giving me heart attack... After reading this even I becm breathless

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Posted: 02 May 2015 at 10:38am | IP Logged
Wooo

You are such a romantic person

and you are right... they are hot Wink

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Posted: 02 May 2015 at 2:56pm | IP Logged
its an awesome one...
do continue!

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Posted: 02 May 2015 at 6:07pm | IP Logged
Twentytoo much HOT to handle in one go Wink

U shud have cautioned us to drink cold water or sumthing very cold before reading Blushing Embarrassed

Yes like everyone said "U must b a romantic person and so a romantic writer"
and now I M Curious about wats gonna happen in next update Embarrassed

Write more and write soon dear Smile

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