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SwaRon OS:Quietus (Page 3)

Nicky-nish IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 05 May 2015 at 7:25am | IP Logged
Yr y u write such an emotional stuff...
M still cryng
It ws amazng..
Luvd it

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Posted: 05 May 2015 at 11:50pm | IP Logged
Emotional OS.. But very beautifully penned down. 


"He always told her to win over her fears in life. Irony was that heights intimidated her all her life but when it should have intimated her she jumped off winning over her fear just as he wanted."

Great work!! 
Keep writing! 
Thanks for PM

Shivani. 

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Posted: 06 May 2015 at 12:48am | IP Logged
Are you guys on some sadist spree? Though I am Sadist, I am loving it, but spare others xD
Firstly Nishi with her heart wrenching Needles & Medicines & now you.
Beautifully described the pains & aching Swayam is going through. Broken Swayam trying hard to get away from the memories of Sharon, his love of life whom he loved till death was no more with him.
Sharon couldn't conceive a baby which damaged her inner self. She wanted to complete their life but she just could not. Love can make you do things you know are wrong but seems just right at some particular instances.
Personally loved the lines below-:

"He always told
her to win over her fears in life. Irony
was that heights intimidated her all her
life but when it should have intimated
her she jumped off winning over her
fear just as he wanted"

Keep writing. 

-Ayushi

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Posted: 07 May 2015 at 5:53am | IP Logged
Yeah, I hate you too. Stern Smile I can't believe you put all the blame on me and made me face all the fire. Like it was my fault you posted the OS you had written ages ago. Admit it, you are a sadist too.  Pig

Your sad one shot's have a heart wrenching, beautiful touch to them. This one was no exception. Swayam's pain on losing Sharon was very well penned, it hurt the reader's heart. I loved the irony you showed in Sharon's choice of suicide. I wonder how people gather the guts to jump of buildings though. Ermm

Ah well, great writing but F grade for humanity. Clown

Cheers.
Nv.

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Posted: 08 May 2015 at 11:44pm | IP Logged
Very Emotional.Cry
Bt awesome as always..
Beautifully written.


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Posted: 11 May 2015 at 6:44am | IP Logged

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Posted: 11 May 2015 at 8:53am | IP Logged
Beautifully written. 

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Posted: 24 July 2015 at 2:04pm | IP Logged
Nicely written 

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