Hi dear,
What to say? really brillant update and well written too. the first part of Zoya's pov was really wonderful described, reading those words touched me really deep and I understand every of her word and turnoil. I could have said the same.
The part when she described her mother and Humeira as selfish person hurted me, we can understand why she was so obsessed to find Asad, because he gave her what she didn't get in her family and it was love. And as duityfull daughter, she did what she had to do but in the same time, her behavior increased this rift between her family and her. Who was to blame? i guess no one.
Coming to Asad's pov, it was also nice. It took him two days to confess, why men are so slow π? Anyway, I can understand that he didn't want to receive another slap from her. But it was worth to wait, seeing how hapy you describe her once she knew who it was? She didn't ask any proof, like she felt it. It can sound quick while i read it but it sounds correct too for her to accept this stranger without clear proof.
It was really a wonderful chapter and finally they met to never seperate or did you plan to add other masala π?
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