I was waiting for this chapter and I am really happy that you posted it finally.😃It was really interesting to see her pov, she looked more touched by this miss than Asad, maybe women emotions contained more words than men, who knows?
it was beautifully written and well described. Her obsession about Asad, spending years waiting for a dream, it keeps her alive and in love for so long, that she missed many things. She loved to stay alone and she satisfied herself with his image. I can understand and in this you really nail it. The intensity of her need and her hope was perfect.
Well coming to her present, she was obsessed by his eyes and he sounded familiar to her, his touches, his look, but still not his face. So as I guess, she ignored him the first time she saw him in the wedding, he wasn't so discret afterall, men 😆. I can't blame him, his soul recognize her but not his eyes.
It was really nice that you show in this chapter, the parallel of her feeling with this stranger, like Asad had with her, but both were still loyal to their old love. Asad saw her tattoo and she saw the same, but thought it was an N. Really nice detail, I must say. They did it after they left each other? or maybe I miss one point.
Anyway, it was really good chapter, full of her heart, emotion and intensity, she looked strong and confident as an artist, but so devasted inside. I love how you portray her character, I love this kind of women, who knows what she wanted but still was fragile inside due to emotion.
Beautiful chapter and really well paint, continue soon
PS: so sorry, that i didn't comment earlier, i was a bit busy those days 😕
Edited by radadolcevida - 8 years ago
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