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Posted: 21 May 2015 at 5:51am | IP Logged
Well written. Story progression is good. if you do not mind my saying it The grammar need to be corrected as a wrongly phrased or in correct verb form is like a stone in a mouthful of delicious food. 
I hope i did not hurt you by the comment.If so pl.excuse me.

Waiting for the next part.

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Posted: 21 May 2015 at 7:22am | IP Logged
Yay a fight, loved it...
Beautiful update.
Waiting...

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Posted: 21 May 2015 at 7:38am | IP Logged
OMG
They are so silly
ROFL
Lol
Loved it
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Posted: 21 May 2015 at 7:56am | IP Logged
Kitni ajeeb hai na zindgi..
Jin se hume dur karti hai unse milati hai..
Aur jab milati hai tab iss tarah milati hai ki hum unhe pehchan hi nahi pate..
Inn dono ko hi dekh lo.. 10 saal pehle se ek dusre se pyaar karte hai aur abh ek dusre ko pehchan bhi nahi pa rahe..
But agar love story itni simple hogi toh vo apne bachon ko kya sunayenge ? Tongue
Abhi jaldi jaldi update do main wait kar rahi hun..
And don't worry Gita bhi jaldi theek ho jayegi kyunki usse aake hume cute cute se update bhi dene hai na Embarrassed


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Posted: 21 May 2015 at 8:19am | IP Logged
hehe nyc updt!!!
wat a superb writing allha miya !!!
updt soon!!
n thanks 4 d pm sue!!
Aresha

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Posted: 21 May 2015 at 8:21am | IP Logged
Nice update dear
Asya story without their bickering & fight, not look like their story. Wanted them to meet & get to know abt each other. Update soon plz. Thanks for pm

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Posted: 21 May 2015 at 8:32am | IP Logged
wonderful
thanx for pm

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Posted: 21 May 2015 at 8:34am | IP Logged
Originally posted by jayasree.rao

Well written. Story progression is good. if you do not mind my saying it The grammar need to be corrected as a wrongly phrased or in correct verb form is like a stone in a mouthful of delicious food. 
I hope i did not hurt you by the comment.If so pl.excuse me.

Waiting for the next part.

thanksBig smile
and not at all dear...y my feelings wud be hurt when ur helping me improveLOL
i appreciate that u opened up and trust me i felt this too while writing that maybe m going bad somewhere..Shocked
ohk u'll see the changes in next update for sureSmile
stay tunedSmile

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