A$y@ / k@bhi SS Finally Found You **** link to thread 2 added at pg 1 - Page 23

Well written. Story progression is good. if you do not mind my saying it The grammar need to be corrected as a wrongly phrased or in correct verb form is like a stone in a mouthful of delicious food. 

Yay a fight, loved it...

OMG

Kitni ajeeb hai na zindgi.. Edited by Niya_789 - 8 years ago

hehe nyc updt!!!

Nice update dear
Asya story without their bickering & fight, not look like their story. Wanted them to meet & get to know abt each other. Update soon plz. Thanks for pm

wonderful

Originally posted by: jayasree.rao

Well written. Story progression is good. if you do not mind my saying it The grammar need to be corrected as a wrongly phrased or in correct verb form is like a stone in a mouthful of delicious food. 

I hope i did not hurt you by the comment.If so pl.excuse me.

Waiting for the next part.

thanks😃
and not at all dear...y my feelings wud be hurt when ur helping me improve😆
i appreciate that u opened up and trust me i felt this too while writing that maybe m going bad somewhere..😲
ohk u'll see the changes in next update for sure😊
stay tuned😊

Awesome update yaar asad fithing for a silly reason lol n he is missing zoya so much awww n they are ending at same place 😉 they are so cute continue soon 😃 Edited by shailu123 - 8 years ago

Exclusively awesome n wanted