A$y@ / k@bhi SS Finally Found You **** link to thread 2 added at pg 1 - Page 55

Originally posted by: -CrazySobtian-

Hii!!

Finally done catching up with this SS 😃

Once again, beautifully written. I could imagine everything as you express your thoughts via writing so well.
hey mally😃 thanku so much yaar
aah so finally ur here😆 at finally found you😉
thanku that's abig compliment if u can imagine via my writing coz that's wat i feared
but here u r boosting my confidence
m glad mally and happy as well😃

Coming to part 1: Asad's pov was nicely written and lol the girl is so stubborn xD During the wedding she had to add her tarka by dancing. I guess it was Zoya cuz who else says Allah miya other than her 😆 [Psst! It has to be Zoya okay?] Asad was all lattu over her or what? 😕

Aww poor Asad couldn't find Zoya 😭and he still loves her
hehe...yes it was zoya😆 who else?
asad ke dil aur dimaag pe cha gayi vo gracious girl😳

 

Now part 2: They finally met 😃 and of course it had with their infamous argument 😆 and he is attracted to her but she jerked him away. Gosh! He needs to hurry up and dig up everything about her. 

Part 3: Omg I wanted Zoya's pov while reading part 2 and now here it is :D The situation is like they are so close and yet so far 😭 The pool party scene tho! *_* His thought about her getting into the pool while wearing those see through dress xD and their little self talks.
haha...ya i felt the same that without her pov...
readers wud make her a villan so had to give it😆
glad u like the part😳

Lastly, part 4: Again well written part! And finally Asad knows his mysterious girl's name. He should've told her his name as well and lol zoya called him mr. tattoo lover? XD And of course the twist was the slap 😲 😭 Poor Asad!

Do update soon 😃

Originally posted by: JazzyM

Fantastic update...loved your narration

I never liked Zoya's dad's character, so making him suffer cancer, made lots of sense to me...😉

Poor Asad but at least he got to know who was haunting his day and night...👏

Originally posted by: swapno

again Zoya lost it...

Originally posted by: Linsie

Originally posted by: -simmi-

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That was fantastic sue 👏
Aww my poor asad
🤣 🤣
Srry just imagining zoya's face when she'll come know about asad lol
Gaffur's cancer waise b i hate people who smoke
But cancer se queen yaad aa gyi
"bechare gupta ji..."lol 😆
asad's new name suit him and zoya's dance when i was reading it I first thought that asad will dance too like varun but u planned something else 😉
Good job sue 👍🏼

Originally posted by: shailu123

Hey sue awesome update update yaar n i love that song one of my frvt😳 n love asya moments but then u runied that 🤢 choti devil 🤣 n zoya slap him 😲 but poor zoya she lost her dad😭 but she don't know that he is asad her asad when will she know that? Continue soon 😃

Originally posted by: sweeetyrocs

That was just an amazing update... 

Finally asad knows who was her dream girl...

Loved both asad n zoya pov... 

Continue soon N Don't forget to pm me...