Originally posted by: asadzoyaquboolAnother gud update
asad is distracted by zoyazoya too misses asadwant them to meet sooncontinue soon
Originally posted by: radadolcevidaSorry for the delay,
For chap 1Really beautiful chapter and the story was going really well. So Asad lost Zoya and it has been 10 years that they are seperate. He was smitten by this new girl and didn't know that it was the same girl that he was thinking about. However, Asad seems loyal to Zoya and he didn't forget about her.I really love this chapter, it was really poetic. Asad didn't take his eyes from her but she didn't give him any attention, she was lost in her old memory of love. Even, if you didn't give ZOya's pov I can imagine her turnoil, seeing this man watching her intently.I really love your story and I can't wait to read more and to see how they will meet.Chap 2So finally they met and they argue already. Asad likes her already and her audacity, he was using any excuses to talk to her. It 's funny to read that she noticed him already but stubborn and loyal toward her lover, she jerked him and pushed him away from her. It was heart touching to see that she considered herself in couple and I felt sad when she said that no one will bring him back. I felt for her poor girl. Destiny put them in front of each other and Asad tried to fight his attraction toward this mysterious girl.Really nice update and I hope soon we will see Zoya's pov.
Originally posted by: ajanshulAmazing updat
Get well soon quickly geeta nd come back soon smiling
Originally posted by: jas91wonderful updt Sue
Asya phir mile phir jhagde😆Asad loves Zoe & feels guilty whenever graceful girl comes in his mind& our Zoe new about Asad staring her both met times again but fought onlyoutside d disco I m sure she was missing Asad only her BF😉nxt time can u give 1 part wid Zoe's POV😳
Originally posted by: MayurChan
Brilliant work Sue.
AsYa's scenes were wonderful...and entertaining to read also...
Asad's monologues ke saath Zoya ka bhi POV bhi diya kaaro..
Continue soon.
Originally posted by: -ABI-Update
Hope Ull get the amount of LIKES U desire&give Zoyas POV also yar
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Originally posted by: -Crazy4AsYa-well written update
well asya are new tom n jerry in the town!
tie lover 🤣
cont soon
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