Sorry for the delay,
For chap 1
Really beautiful chapter and the story was going really well. So Asad lost Zoya and it has been 10 years that they are seperate. He was smitten by this new girl and didn't know that it was the same girl that he was thinking about. However, Asad seems loyal to Zoya and he didn't forget about her.
I really love this chapter, it was really poetic. Asad didn't take his eyes from her but she didn't give him any attention, she was lost in her old memory of love. Even, if you didn't give ZOya's pov I can imagine her turnoil, seeing this man watching her intently.
I really love your story and I can't wait to read more and to see how they will meet.
Chap 2
So finally they met and they argue already. Asad likes her already and her audacity, he was using any excuses to talk to her. It 's funny to read that she noticed him already but stubborn and loyal toward her lover, she jerked him and pushed him away from her. It was heart touching to see that she considered herself in couple and I felt sad when she said that no one will bring him back. I felt for her poor girl. Destiny put them in front of each other and Asad tried to fight his attraction toward this mysterious girl.
Really nice update and I hope soon we will see Zoya's pov.
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