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Akdha SS - The Deal. ||Chapter-3 Page-39|| 13/01/16 (Page 22)

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Posted: 09 May 2015 at 1:15am | IP Logged
new story hhmmm.. congo..
will read soon 

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Posted: 09 May 2015 at 4:44am | IP Logged
Originally posted by aisha...11110

Originally posted by ...Anushka...

So well.. Mine is the first comment here!!!Day Dreaming Yea.. and we know how! right?LOL Are you trying to make me feel embarrassed?Shocked But anyways Ill take it as a compliment!LOLCan I just do a small yippe dance!!Dancing akele...akele?  Tu bhi aaja!WinkOf course I can!! Yeah! I know how much crazy things I did, just to comment first here..!  But still, I feel its all worth it!Embarrassed obviously!LOL Being first is awesome!Cool
I mean can I just fall in love with each and every word you typed out!Day Dreaming awwie!! I am waiting for yours! Heart Yrr tu ne bhi kiska naam le liya LOLAs it is, I've always been a fan of your writing.. Like I am a fan of yours?LOL  Really?ShockedShockedbut now.. like seriously, it has improved and spectacularly at that!Big smile It feels so great listening that LOL  Its true!HugI wasn't really thinking to comment now, you know, how lazy I am..LOL Yea! I am now quite habitual with this.LOL !I don't know how are you dealing with me and my laziness!Shocked But then, can I stay away from this story of yours??!! Heart I love you!Hug I love you more! Heart Naah.. me more!Hug
Now, I really don't know what to say.. I've gone through the chapter again right now so that I don't miss out on any point..But you have missed two points...the CPR one and the 'syphilis' one LOL  Syphilis LOLand I have like zillion things to say!! But but.. I don't know how to say them..LOL I feel tongue tied! really!!Shocked Yeah!!ShockedI hate you for that!!ShockedShockedLOL But I've promised you my biggest comment ever.. soo.. here it goes! Ready for a long lecture??!!LOL I am also promising you mine biggest comment on your new one! Heart Aww!Hug
So the story starts off with the diva, the girl who is obsessed with popularity, the ever ready argue girl.. Shivani! LOL She is like ahaanaLOL Ohh..LOLSo well, I am not really a fan of her..but yeah! I like it how she is crazy for her makeup! Quite good for a 16 year old!Big smile  Yep! make-up is normal for a girl whose obsessed with popularity. LOL Obsessive Popularity Disorder!LOL
Okay yeah.. the daddy of all is here!Cool An over-protective dad who is scared that someone will impregnate her daughters LOL Like really..LOLLOLNow how can YOUR story miss out on fun? That 'I delivered a set of twins to a teenage girl.. and do you know what she said? Do you know?' Oh god.. it was ROFL And it that was ROFL, then Shivani's reply- that protection one! Oh god! What do I say?!! It just made my stomach hurt!ROFL Oh my goodness!! I hope it was not that badLOL It was awesome!LOLI was already having headache and now stomach ache too! I hate you!LOL I love you too HeartLove you three!Hug
Now to my fav.. the ever frustrated, mysterious Jodha Sharma, 17, smart, sharp tongued, and sarcastic!! This is the first time I have made my Jodha like this.LOL A hit change!Day DreamingI mean I love her ever ready for a fight kinda nature... I don't know why but she resembles me.. and you too!LOLLOL Yea...mixture of usLOL And this reminds me of the fights we both picked against others LOLLOLSo there is practically no similarity in the sisters, except their haughty nature, and of course, the no dating rule!LOL yep! you got it!LOL Daddy cool!LOLSo yeah.. I love daddy for this!LOL 'First rule- no dating till graduation .. second rule- no dating till graduation!' Oh god!LOL It was a good one..right?LOL You killed me with thatLOL
Now I am sitting here with my laptop, dad's crying watching some show.. and its totally funny here.. !LOLLOL what?LOL Yeah.. He is watching TMKOC and started crying.. and I said... isn't it supposed to be a comedy show?LOL 
God! I forgot to bow down to you for your extensive research on the streets and corners of London! Tu es le meilleur! (You are the best in french!)Wink I know a lil bit of FrenchLOL I should learn a bit of Sanskrit in upcoming holidays..seriously!LOLI mean Greater Manchester, Boston, Brentford ( if thats what it is LOL) Like seriously? I told you...I want this story to be my best.LOL It will be!Heart
Okay now.. to the lover boy Ryan!LOL So he was a treat to read! And Daniel too.. what was his full name? Yeah! Daniel Gingell.. LOL Gawd!! I hate his surnameLOL I love it!LOLI mean I loved it.. he just fell for Shivani.. love at first sight!!Day Dreaming like wow!LOL Aaj kal ke fast forward baccheLOLThe 'you're welcome' thing was awesome!LOL And Shivz being Shivz didn't even utter a thanks then! Way to go, girl!LOL She's somewhat like you!LOL I do think of thanking you sometimes.. phir I feel lazyLOL
Wait a second! Did Ryan wet his pants in second grade?ShockedShocked Gross!LOL seriously!! Yukks!LOL God!LOLShivz, best of luck babez!Wink now do I need to say something for the mysterious bike rider and the haughty Jo? Their first meet was fantabulous!  Like purrfect! Embarrassed Oh my goodness!! So much of praises. I am flattered.LOL Then update!LOL
A question now.. is Ross your personal favorite when it comes to last names?LOL Devin Ross, Ashley Ross.. woah!LOL Wait. Katherine Ross in UL.LOL Oh yeah!LOLNow comes the Barrett siblings.. Sofia and James.. creepy!LOL Haww.. You are in the bad list of Sofia's. LOL And you are in her good list?LOLI mean what do I say for Sofia? She's one arrogant head... and James.. modern version of Shariffudin!Dead  Ah! I liked this...modern shariffudin!LOL !Yucckss.. I hate the word shariffudin!LOL I mean yeah I don't like Shivz but so what? I won't let her destroy herself with this guy!  Ryan is her prince charming!Day Dreaming Yea! the guy who wetted himself in 2nd gradeLOL Are you trying to make me have second thoughts about Ryan and Shivani?LOL
The library thing was funny.. Jodha was literally boiling.. like about 6 seconds away from slapping you so hard that your teeth will bleed.. woah girl!LOL So me!LOL Yeah! Your anger is tauba tauba LOLLOL And the way Daniel got scared like a kitten... Ryan just guessed it that she is her sister! That's what I call, the genes... Jodha and Shivani have the main things same, okay at least some of them!LOL  They are polar opposites.LOL And I thought opposites attract. yahan toh!ShockedLOL
Oh my god! Jalal was naked in the basketball court! Not naked! Half naked!LOL  Naked word aa raha hai na.. bass!LOLSeriously that guy, and flirting with a 40+ lady, He wasn't flirting, just having fun. Yeah.. with his counselor!LOL whats more, a counselor!  I am sure he's got hit on his head by a basketball!Shocked A bad guess!LOL I guessed it right, okay?LOLDetention was deserved..LOL How much Jodha nd Jalal like each other naa!LOLLOL Like really!LOL  So much in love!LOL'Stupid Girl'LOL I would say Jalal was right there! What? You called her stupid! LOL No she is Einstein!LOL
Now now what's left! Oh yeah! Shivz's acting skills!!Star Kudos to you girl! Her mascara, cockroach thing. The car thingLOL. Haan haanLOL how about joining the theater group at your school?LOL  popularity and Shivani are synonymousLOL  Correct! LOL I am always right!LOLTwo silly girls are together now! Shivani and Sofia.. S,S you see!LOL  I seriously don't see the point of Shivani going with James, I mean a boy she just met!Shocked The story is taking place in London.LOL  But still!LOLbut then again, she's crazy.. and a teenager.. and teens have the right to do anything!Cool Correct!LOL I can do anything!Cool
So now comes the climax, at least of this update!LOL Jodha is such an awesome sis na!LOL Way too nice! LOL  Like the perfect sister!LOLimmediately spilled the beans.. my ever frustrated lady!LOL The perfect word for herLOL The awesomely frustrated girl!LOLShivani would have been like what the hell when she told her dad..ShockedShockedLOL you know what, I kinda like this daddy.. LOL he's funny!Cool Yea! The dad is hilarious.LOL I like him!LOL
So yeah.. this is it, I guess... I am so glad you started this story yrr!Hug Thenkew! For you know trusting me Heart  I'll always trust you!HugI remember when you were sceptical about starting it, and now I am soo happy that you  did! Everyone's loving it!PartyDancing I hope so!LOL Tu hope karti reh.. I am sure!Big smile  So the update was like... oh god I am short of words!Shocked Oh come one! you weren'tLOL  Oh god! I wrote my biggest comment ever when I was short of words! Someone call genis book of world record!LOLI  mean every one in school thinks I'll never be short of words.. and here... urrgh Aisha!AngryLOL  I love you!! Heart I know.. and I love you too!HugLOLAnd the thing that you think I am worthy of being cherished.. oh god.. I am so in love with you!Hug  Save it for your price charmingLOL Kahan.. LOLYou are a wonderful friend and person.. and I hope you'll always get the best not because I want it to happen, but because you deserve every bit of it!Heart Aww!! that was so sweet of you! Heart Btw. I too think I am a deserving person. LOL You are, really!Heart
So was it long?? Extra largeLOL Dekha mera stamina!CoolGod I am really hoping it was.. wait I didn't say much about Jalal.. haawShockedShocked so yeah! I loved him.. he's awesome and really cool!Cool (like me!LOL) Me tooLOL Like us!CoolJust day (or nightLOL) dreaming about them being together..! both are so crazy, what will happen when they come together!ShockedLOL Oh god!LOLLOL You are dreaming a lot!LOL I know...LOL
Now update soon... because I really can't wait anymore! Embarrassed But yeah! Its UL's turn and lets be fair.. I want a shayari in that one basss...AngryAngryAngry I am confused regarding it!!!LOL You are giving one in the next chapter, alright?!Angryotherwise!Angry Then feelings and then this one!Day Dreaming Wow! everything is scheduled by Ms. Anushka Agnihotri Oh god I love you! I mean so many people mess up my surname.. Someone called me Agnihotra and I was like yukksLOL And yeah! I know you are confused.. how will you manage three stories?! Don't be.. your heart wanted it to be the way it is now.. I know how excited you were for this one. . so just leave it on the future! Thanks! Heart like dil seLOL  Arre..Hugeverything will fall in place!Star Just be calm, and crazy like you are always!!Big smile
Now what.. I love you a lot!Hug me more!Heart Naah.. me more!HugAnd yeah, take care and update soon!LOL (oh god, soo cliche linesLOL) Naah!LOL They weren't?ShockedLOL
Naam pata hai na?LOL Erm...Anushka?LOL How do you know? Oh god you are stalking me???!!! Help!!LOL
I love you! Heart
I love you too!Heart

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Posted: 09 May 2015 at 4:51am | IP Logged
CONGO FOR THE NEW SS AISHA...Hug

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Posted: 09 May 2015 at 4:53am | IP Logged
@ Anushka! It's weird i always love your comment LOL
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Posted: 09 May 2015 at 4:55am | IP Logged
RES...Wink
WILL COMMENT SOON...Big smile

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Posted: 09 May 2015 at 5:06am | IP Logged
Originally posted by aisha...11110

@ Anushka! It's weird i always love your comment LOL
I am adorable!Heart

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Posted: 09 May 2015 at 5:09am | IP Logged
I am also promising you mine biggest comment on your new one! 
@Aisha- Replace the word 'new' with 'little'.. my little one!Day DreamingLOL

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Posted: 09 May 2015 at 8:31pm | IP Logged
Very nice concept Aisha ... Smile
Loved the way Ryan and Daniel r scared of jodha n her killing threats LOL ..
N not to forget jalal the " naked theory by councellor" LOL .. Bechara even remembers his punishment LOL
Loved the sisters fighting .., soo common between two sis... LOL

Continue soon dear.. N thanks for pm Smile

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