Okay, so first- Hi😆 I mean I know I never unres, but you know, I am so excited for this story! I mean yeah, the title itself is so cool. 'the deal' how did you think it up?!😲And well, yeah, I love the way you write, it has that special touch which I guess very few have. It's different, and in a good way. And I love that. I mean I am so glad I've been there with you as your writing improved, and now, I mean I can't believe you've become so.. so freaking awesome!😲👏⭐️
You're a star. A Cool one.😉⭐️
Girl, its you who deserves the tag 'best-est'. You rock your stories!😎 And well, yeah! Coming to the chapter, let's begin from the very first thing. My life, my choices. All I can say is, the title totally totally suited Jodha. You know, I never liked it when anyone (girl, anyone) tries to tell the other 'don't do this, don't do that' I mean I just typed up an fb status and posted it to vent out my frustration (before you started). I just find these people freaking silly!😕 Like they've got some modern means to predict the future😆
But here I can understand (or at least try) that her dad's worried about her. London to Germany is quite a bit and I guess its only natural to feel that way. And as I said in my comment for the very first chapter, I like this dad. So it's alright😆
Now, yeah! Jodha is writing a book!! Gosh, that's exciting! She won't show us also till she finishes it, kya? 😲😆 But wait, I mean I know her, its not going to be a love story. But it's her story, and its gonna be just as exciting and interesting, if not more, than a love story.❤️
Warning- my comment will mostly be on Jodha and Jalal. And well, the villains too😆 Don't know about Shivz, okay she should be there, too!😛
I mean I don't know why, uhh! How on Earth can Sofia like Jalal, no! That's only our right!😲
Shivani said, trying to seek Jodha's attention, who was ignoring her, really well.- that's funny😆 Shivani ki beizzati ho gayi😆 Oh god, again goes Shivani.. you know I am not 16 yet, but like you said, its normal for a 16 year old, so I am trying NOT to be amused by her.😆But yeah, I can't deny this- I find it funny when she is all 'I want to date! I want to date' and Jodha, god, I really love how she supports her sister. (Sarcasm, of course😆)
The sisters fight, that's something to watch out!😆 And well, the way she said, I am always there for you, freak! I laughed so hard😆 I was like, yeah! I know.. Shivani is sooo lucky to have you!😆 Oh my goodness!😲 Her father actually recorded that teenage girl thing!😆 Gosh, the old guy's something!😆 Shivani wants to be a cheer leader?! 😲 I was like.. sofia ki chamchi😆
The best thing was, Shivani's my life is not worth living. And Jodha's replies.. yeah you should wear a burka!😆 I mean god, how come these things come in your mind?!😲 And well, I loved the way Shivani would ask her sister to speak English whenever she'll not understand what she is saying. She is so funny.😆
Uh-huh. Here's the modern Shariffudin. I mean eeeww. I am damn sure that guy is jealous of the time his 'adorable' sister spends thinking about Jalal. I mean removing him as the captain, gross! That is so, mean..😲 But it was also, I don't know, entertaining? What am I saying?😲😆
Anyways, Jalal stuck it back to James, with that cigarette throwing thing. Okay, no one's a fan of cigarettes, but I liked the way Jalal threw it on him. I mean that guy deserved it!😡 Ek toh Jalal ke saath badtameezi and Shivani pe line maarna!😲Wait a second, when did Jalal hook up with Sofia?😲 James is seriously nonsense, (even if I love 'James' name!) Did Jalal pat his cheeks, that would have been quite a scene!😆
Okay, well, Shivani didn't really need to worry, the stupid-est girl ever was her friend, so yea! she would definitely make it. *rolling eyes*🤓 Uh-uh. I don't like Sofia, I mean she's urrgh.😲 Except she is sometimes funny, but that's a different thing!
What the, you know, I mean James is so freaking eeeww..🤢And our madame Shivani is not even noticing her real guy, Ryan! I love this guy, he's totally a prince charming for Shivani, that is, if she ever realizes that. By the way he talked about her with Daniel, it was so clear he loved her!❤️ And I, am a fan of love stories!😳
Jodha is being, errm, strange? I mean she came to the cafeteria, to listen to music? But then she's different. And awesome!😉 The biology thing was the funniest, and I mean that. It was crazy😆
I mean that guy came in biology lab wearing a sports jersey, god!😆 He's totally, mad!😆 Okay, so Jodha doesn't like frogs, I mean that reminds me of my favorite cartoon, Ninja Hattori😆 Hattori never liked frogs, either.😆 Me neither. They are scary!😲
Locating its heart? Gross. I hate bio! Who does that to a poor soul? 😲 I mean, eeeww..😲
But Jodha being Jodha, the ever ready to argue girl, got worms instead of a frog. Phew! 😆I was seriously like-😲 and then 😆 when Jalal dissected that thing without flinching. Way to go.😆 Without gloves!😲 Eeew😆
Jodha ko dekho, she did everything systematically, seeing the diagram, pinning the worm, poora halal karke kaata use😆Wait what? Jalal found it fun!😲 I mean what do I say?😆 I better change my thoughts about frogs😆 Jalal's really so.. I don't know. He is something!😆 Isn't it becoming a habit for Shivz to go around with that stupid Shariffudin and his sister? 🤓
But wait, it was funny, I mean shivani was just so desperate to stay in Sofia's good list she was all praising her.. gosh!😆 you look amazing in the light, you were pretty when you screamed. such lame things!😆 Jodha went out of her way to trouble her sister, how damn caring!😆 I don't have any words for James, I mean he winked at Jodha too? Just wait for some time bro, let Jalal fall for Jodha, tab dekhte hai how will you wink?😈 I am dreaming, a lot. I know, but I can't wait for Jodha Jalal to get together! I mean the type of people they are, so contrasting, they would totally rock together!
I guess Jodha is hurt, with that pearl necklace thing. I mean she was close to her mother. It must be disheartening!
Next was the germany thing, I mean like I said before, its natural for her dad to react that way, but I mean, she should be the in-charge of her future. She knows what she's doing. Anyways, I can just hope he lets her go, but wait, as you said, its after her summatives, so they should be together by that time, okay?😆
And now, coming back to the book! Okay, so.. I am damn excited for her book. I get excited the moment I hear someone's writing something, but I guess that's natural, so I can't wait for her to finish it. You have to post some excerpts right!
And yeah, the 3 rules! how can I forget!😎 The first and second, I totally agree. As for the third, all I can say is, I am waiting for the moment when they both will together strike off the word 'never'!❤️ That would be the best moment!
You know what! I love you Jodha. She's inspiring, and I don't know in what way but I love her spirit. That spirit to never give up, to stay true to yourself, to trust yourself and yours goals- that's not something everyone has. I mean, I just wish I can be like her!
So yeah, I am saying the same thing to you, eat well, sleep well, and update UL soon😆
But well, you're an amazing writer and I seriously feel privileged to read your work! I am so sure you'll achieve a lot in your life, and I earnestly want to be there with you to celebrate it all!❤️
Now you know my name, so I won't repeat 😆
Edited by ...Anushka... - 8 years ago
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