Originally posted by: ...Anushka...So well.. Mine is the first comment here!!! Yea.. and we know how! right?πCan I just do a small yippe dance!! akele...akele? Of course I can!! Yeah! I know how much crazy things I did, just to comment first here..! But still, I feel its all worth it!π³ obviously!π
I mean can I just fall in love with each and every word you typed out! awwie!! I am waiting for yours! β€οΈ As it is, I've always been a fan of your writing.. Like I am a fan of yours?π but now.. like seriously, it has improved and spectacularly at that!π It feels so great listening that πI wasn't really thinking to comment now, you know, how lazy I am..π Yea! I am now quite habitual with this.π But then, can I stay away from this story of yours??!! β€οΈ I love you!π€ I love you more! β€οΈNow, I really don't know what to say.. I've gone through the chapter again right now so that I don't miss out on any point..But you have missed two points...the CPR one and the 'syphilis' one π and I have like zillion things to say!! But but.. I don't know how to say them..π I feel tongue tied! really!!π² I hate you for that!!π²π²π But I've promised you my biggest comment ever.. soo.. here it goes! Ready for a long lecture??!!π I am also promising you mine biggest comment on your new one! β€οΈSo the story starts off with the diva, the girl who is obsessed with popularity, the ever ready argue girl.. Shivani! π She is like ahaanaπSo well, I am not really a fan of her..but yeah! I like it how she is crazy for her makeup! Quite good for a 16 year old!π Yep! make-up is normal for a girl whose obsessed with popularity. π
Okay yeah.. the daddy of all is here!π An over-protective dad who is scared that someone will impregnate her daughters πNow how can YOUR story miss out on fun? That 'I delivered a set of twins to a teenage girl.. and do you know what she said? Do you know?' Oh god.. it was π€£ And it that was ROFL, then Shivani's reply- that protection one! Oh god! What do I say?!! It just made my stomach hurt!π€£ Oh my goodness!! I hope it was not that badπ I was already having headache and now stomach ache too! I hate you!π I love you too β€οΈNow to my fav.. the ever frustrated, mysterious Jodha Sharma, 17, smart, sharp tongued, and sarcastic!! This is the first time I have made my Jodha like this.πI mean I love her ever ready for a fight kinda nature... I don't know why but she resembles me.. and you too!ππ Yea...mixture of usπSo there is practically no similarity in the sisters, except their haughty nature, and of course, the no dating rule!π yep! you got it!π So yeah.. I love daddy for this!π 'First rule- no dating till graduation .. second rule- no dating till graduation!' Oh god!π It was a good one..right?πNow I am sitting here with my laptop, dad's crying watching some show.. and its totally funny here.. !ππ what?πGod! I forgot to bow down to you for your extensive research on the streets and corners of London! Tu es le meilleur! (You are the best in french!)π I know a lil bit of FrenchπI mean Greater Manchester, Boston, Brentford ( if thats what it is π) Like seriously? I told you...I want this story to be my best.πOkay now.. to the lover boy Ryan!π So he was a treat to read! And Daniel too.. what was his full name? Yeah! Daniel Gingell.. π Gawd!! I hate his surnameπI mean I loved it.. he just fell for Shivani.. love at first sight!! like wow!πThe 'you're welcome' thing was awesome!π And Shivz being Shivz didn't even utter a thanks then! Way to go, girl!π She's somewhat like you!πWait a second! Did Ryan wet his pants in second grade?π²π² Gross!π seriously!! Yukks!πShivz, best of luck babez!π now do I need to say something for the mysterious bike rider and the haughty Jo? Their first meet was fantabulous! Like purrfect! π³ Oh my goodness!! So much of praises. I am flattered.πA question now.. is Ross your personal favorite when it comes to last names?π Devin Ross, Ashley Ross.. woah!π Wait. Katherine Ross in UL.πNow comes the Barrett siblings.. Sofia and James.. creepy!π Haww.. You are in the bad list of Sofia's. πI mean what do I say for Sofia? She's one arrogant head... and James.. modern version of Shariffudin!π€’ Ah! I liked this...modern shariffudin!π I mean yeah I don't like Shivz but so what? I won't let her destroy herself with this guy! Ryan is her prince charming! Yea! the guy who wetted himself in 2nd gradeπThe library thing was funny.. Jodha was literally boiling.. like about 6 seconds away from slapping you so hard that your teeth will bleed.. woah girl!π So me!π And the way Daniel got scared like a kitten... Ryan just guessed it that she is her sister! That's what I call, the genes... Jodha and Shivani have the main things same, okay at least some of them!π They are polar opposites.πOh my god! Jalal was naked in the basketball court! Not naked! Half naked!π Seriously that guy, and flirting with a 40+ lady, He wasn't flirting, just having fun.π whats more, a counselor! I am sure he's got hit on his head by a basketball!π² A bad guess!πDetention was deserved..π How much Jodha nd Jalal like each other naa!ππ Like really!π 'Stupid Girl'π I would say Jalal was right there! What? You called her stupid! πNow now what's left! Oh yeah! Shivz's acting skills!!βοΈ Kudos to you girl! Her mascara, cockroach thing. The car thingπ. how about joining the theater group at your school?π popularity and Shivani are synonymousπ Correct! πTwo silly girls are together now! Shivani and Sofia.. S,S you see!π I seriously don't see the point of Shivani going with James, I mean a boy she just met!π² The story is taking place in London.π but then again, she's crazy.. and a teenager.. and teens have the right to do anything!π Correct!πSo now comes the climax, at least of this update!π Jodha is such an awesome sis na!π Way too nice! π immediately spilled the beans.. my ever frustrated lady!π The perfect word for herπShivani would have been like what the hell when she told her dad..π²π²π you know what, I kinda like this daddy.. π he's funny!π Yea! The dad is hilarious.πSo yeah.. this is it, I guess... I am so glad you started this story yrr!π€ Thenkew! For you know trusting me β€οΈ I remember when you were sceptical about starting it, and now I am soo happy that you did! Everyone's loving it!π₯³ I hope so!π So the update was like... oh god I am short of words!π² Oh come one! you weren'tπ I mean every one in school thinks I'll never be short of words.. and here... urrgh Aisha!π‘π I love you!! β€οΈ πAnd the thing that you think I am worthy of being cherished.. oh god.. I am so in love with you!π€ Save it for your price charmingπYou are a wonderful friend and person.. and I hope you'll always get the best not because I want it to happen, but because you deserve every bit of it!β€οΈ Aww!! that was so sweet of you! β€οΈ Btw. I too think I am a deserving person. πSo was it long?? Extra largeπGod I am really hoping it was.. wait I didn't say much about Jalal.. haawπ²π² so yeah! I loved him.. he's awesome and really cool!π (like me!π) Me tooπJust day (or nightπ) dreaming about them being together..! both are so crazy, what will happen when they come together!π²π Oh god!ππ You are dreaming a lot!πNow update soon... because I really can't wait anymore! π³ But yeah! Its UL's turn and lets be fair.. I want a shayari in that one basss...π‘π‘π‘ I am confused regarding it!!!πotherwise!π‘ Then feelings and then this one! Wow! everything is scheduled by Ms. Anushka Agnihotri And yeah! I know you are confused.. how will you manage three stories?! Don't be.. your heart wanted it to be the way it is now.. I know how excited you were for this one. . so just leave it on the future! Thanks! β€οΈ like dil seπ everything will fall in place!βοΈ Just be calm, and crazy like you are always!!πNow what.. I love you a lot!π€ me more!β€οΈAnd yeah, take care and update soon!π (oh god, soo cliche linesπ) Naah!πNaam pata hai na?π Erm...Anushka?π
Originally posted by: rima4evercongo for new story
thanks for the pm
amazing start
Originally posted by: deepa_chauhanawesum start .love it.
continue soon..
Originally posted by: jansijodhanice story aisha
continue soon
but update feelings nd upl too yaar
we are waiting!!!
Originally posted by: jansijodhathnxs for pm
Originally posted by: 1357rakshaCongratulations foe ur new ss
awesome start...waiting for next chapter nwnd tq for d Pm...
Originally posted by: cuty1997aisha finally you pm me. after i read whole update and and also comment here. π
Originally posted by: sireesha76Congrats for new SSπ₯³
Originally posted by: meeramiss18Hi dear first of all congo 4 the new ss it is vry interesting i liked jo's charecter she is vry bold and jalal is naughtyπ good start continue soonπ
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