Kaya SS : Beneath It All.. Ch2-3 Pg 15- 15/6 - Page 7

i could totally image that scene playing out in my head. and although you said that the characters were going to be different from the show, your writing goes hand in hand with the character development that has happened in the last few episodes.

You surely have established the relationship dynamics really well.. Whooopieee.. Okay I personally really lik one of the partners going in "leme show you the hell" mode coz that just tends to bring out so many emotions n perspective to the equation they share at a time or one that they could have shared 😳 not that I dun lik "love love" thing but this one makes me more curious,excited everthhn 😆

Kabir dint evn give a look at her.. Shit.. something that bad went past with them.. I see some really good stuff ahead as you progress with the story., N I wud agree to many people out here commenting.. You writing Just Click.. Its never an underdog or overly presented.. Right words at the right time with the right feeling.. 😊 n this is y M all hooked.. Looking forward yea.. And And you are already added to my buddylist.. Am I not showing up in yours??

Read the second chapter...
Edited by Darkchocolate - 8 years ago

Unreserved my comments on pg-8.

Hey the update was very small :( :( 

😲😲 dat was my reaction as "sneek peek" ended before it began 😆😆😆 guess i was too much concentrating on editor saab 😆😆😆😆...
Never mind😛😛😛looking forward to crackling first face off b/w two 😛😛😛...& wanna know, if Mr.Kabir is as unaffected with heroine's comeback as he is showing 😆😆😆 or boy is jumping & dancing in happiness somewhere deep inside to have his budbudati reporter back 😛😆😆

Superb! :D
Btw I have sent u a buddy request.. Do accept it :)
P.s thanks for the pm!
Update soon!

Loved the part I read

Hey Fantasia(or should i call 'an upcoming famous author'?! :P )
I know buttering wont help and real reviews would,so i would try my hardest to give you some interesting inputs..(Am a woman of few words though But i promise they'll motivate an awesome writer like you to give us your much awaited updates!!)
P.s:I have added you to my buddy list :-)
Keep inspiring through your work gurl:-*

Yet to read the blog.. Shall review that as well soon :)