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Originally posted by: divazfankau

beautiful update continue soon

Thanks a lot :)

Originally posted by: VENBA

Awesome start..

Very interesting...

waiting to know what will happen next...

Please pm me the next update...😊😊

Thanks a lot :)
Glad you liked it.. 😳

Originally posted by: avni_19

Anuuu... omggg! Brilliant startt yaarrr!! The first two lines gave me an idea of what the update is all about! Uff!

I felt Ishita's and Raman's pain! How sadd! What made them apart!? And Goddd.. that intimate encounter, sach mei I thought that ws for real, but that turned out to be a dream! Shucks! Nevertheless that dream ws hot sensuous! Desire burning couple!

Vihaannn... true villian in their love story.. Raman will not leave this man! Hahahhaha!

Chaloo.. ab addiction, seduction, desire sab hog khub saara! *facepalm*! ;-)

Cont soon...

Hey Suni..
Thanks a ton..glad you liked it..😃
Koi na...real mein bhi ho jaaye shayad.. 😉😆
LMAO..That was such a puttar fangirl na..Lolzz..Fikar not..i am in the same league. Though I am not saying anything about it..🤣 :P 😆

Will do. Thanks for the comment.. :D

Originally posted by: janani_divan

Wow anu hot update.its too hot and touching my soul.ishitha and raman are equally hurted.i hopu u will continue this..:-)brilliantly written .loved it.their desires just awesome.

Thanks a lot :D
Will surely continue. Glad you liked it.. 😳

Originally posted by: dochdoe

oh oh oh I sooo need a cold shower, you have me literally adicted to it and its just the first chapter ... sigh...
I just hope I'm never in the position Ishita was... that was one hell of embarassment...
wonder what Raman did :o
Is this ss similar to the storyline of yhm or is it a different story altogether?
P.S: you are such a gifted writer that you had me hooked to it right from the first word to the last. I'll be damned if I don't follow this story...

Hey Riya..
awww..I am so glad you liked the part.. means a lot.. :D
I would never want to be in the position she is in.. its too embarrassing..😆
As for the actions..will slowly reveal them too.. 😳

Well, it had nothing to do with YHM as of now. 😳 Its on a different track! :D

Awww..thanks a lot.. I really hope you enjoy the rest of the story too!! 🤗

Anu  Di S's starting is superb and dream was damn  hot ☺️ Di continue it soon

Itna Hot Dream...
This is awsome and interesting..
update soon...

Wow, hooked to this amazing storyline from word go👏 You're so right, it has such a mix of emotions, desire, pain, love and passion all rolled into one. You've also kept the right amount of suspense also! Kept us guessing as to why they cannot be together when it's clear that they both love each other. Loved it that you showed the POVs from both sides. Will we get an update as our Sunday treat?

Anu you start with love passion and pain at the same time. So well written about their feeling desire and longing to be with each other. What will be the reason for their seperate and hurt will wait for next update dear. Thanks for the PM. Have a wonderful weekend dear.🤗

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