Originally posted by: adyaaHi,, to amazing ... .well biggest fannn ... ...awww... Well I love this BOLD Pragya πWish to see in the show ,,,, would love to rad more frm u ...
Originally posted by: kdsubsOh my god Rani!! I was slammed with work and MIA for days, only to come back to this utterly ravishing piece of work. (I don't mind more such crazy work days if i can always come back to awesome writings like this one π).
That had to be one amazing concert (I mean the one you heard - will check the album out. Thank you). Not a big fan of attending live concerts, so i haven't experienced the in-the-moment crowd craze (which is precisely why i don't attend concerts). But i totally get that moment of Pragya's when the music was in her and she didn't know if what she was feeling was from the beat or from something else. Or both.
You know, both as a reader as well as a writer, i maintain that sex is a very powerful tool in the craft of writing. But i am not a fan of smut for the sake of it, as we get so often. But when i read something like this piece, or your other one (Vulnerable) - now these are perfect examples of using the sexual act to tell the story.
Wonderfully written. Thank you for sharing.
Originally posted by: simsim25RES! YAY RANI, YOUR BACK WITH A STORY!! <3
Unres! Wow! Rani the start with Pragya's thoughts was great, beautifully written and then Pragya's boldness as Abhi arrives, great work Rani! The way you write is fantastic! π
Originally posted by: indiRavishing the Rockstar!!! How appropriate a title!!!!
Mind blowing ... so beautifully scripted and tastefully done to reflect the beauty and depth of their feelings for each other!!! Powerful writing indeed π!!!!
Thank you!!!!
Originally posted by: kubareRani...beautiful beautiful beautiful...it was just mind blowing-ly awesome...
The way you described her feelings...the way she felt and her wanting to be with him in that space...just awesomeA very apt title and loved it...the whole sensuality of it...was just perfect...blend of her emotions taking over...and sex is a way to shown one s feelings and emotions with out words...beautifully done...loved it..
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