Originally posted by: simpleAnnaHammie hammie hammie hammie hammie hammie hammie hammie hammie, hi taz...your nagging has brought me here.. waise thanks for being my reminder..
fantastic chapters, all of them.now finished chapter 6. really? so much into it? or you have much spare time at your hands?
its really interesting.so far ur best after wedded bliss.or its a tie?mmm let me finished first.
wedded bliss.. thek tha... FA is more to my liking..
π€£ i cant stop laughing. waise i wass going to give comment on 3 chapters.but ye hasi nehi rokta , Dutta telling nakku he left job to save his n seema's ijjat. π€£π€£
it seems pure dunia is after dutta's izzat.hope he lives with his izzat.
hummmπ.. and i tell you he is the strong ,silent type.. the kind who fascinates chicks.. all want to thaw his hard exterior..
hain , dutta is going to doc supriya for psychotherapy sessions????? ye thoda unlike dutta nehi hua? cz dutta is not that type to listen to someone and open himself to ayre gayre...
welll tu dekhna... why its important..
nakku-dutta bus riding sessions, so much middle class romance, a girl like me can relate to this.bravo to ur imagination.πwhen dutta says idhar aa nakku n nakku winces in pain i thought dutta is on that don mood. lol.fir baad mein samajh aye k dutta was helping her ride on that bus.
erhhh.. who is the unknown namoona who waits at the bus stop for you? eyes down! ,hope you not allowing any tom,dick,or harry to sit by you taz?? whats wrong with your car?
Dutta's nightmares r as mysterious as u Hammie.but gradually unfolding through flashbacks. bits n pieces of memories...very beautifully portrayed.amazing...
story is getting darker, some blooming Don want's to use Duuta's damn care attitude to establish his rule over patil niwas...and u brought Shabbir as a chota mastan khabru, ππ ye revenge hain kya, digu is there...hahahahaha.hammie ji ap bhi na...ek writer can write anything, haina?
haaan! it was my frustration.. tried to give vent in a round about way.. mind you SA.. is proving he is still a star.. respect him.,i do.. only watched one of his shows KAYAMAT or some name.. Sanju was with him,she too was superb..
u have cleared verry beautifully why dutta is miffed with his motherr.basically he is miffed with himself for gifting her widowhood.the scene brought tears in my eyes where dutta tries to cup her face , and caught in the act by baji and leaves the room.hayeee waiting for the ice to melt.
welll... Laagi theme extended.. my way.
Hammazingly beautiful story.what a refreshing change after the ideal life in PR to the dark, doomed story...
Keep writing.
PUBLISH UR WORK.I WANT TO BUY UR BOOKS FROM BANGLADESH.π‘ ..bart felt the same way as you do.. those were the days.. but you taz has churned up the past.. thank you avid reader.. carry on reading... yours hammie
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