NiBir in unknown Wonderland SORRY [NOTE on PAGE8] - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by: amashraheja7

It was amazing. Pls update soon. Can't wait for the next part.



Thanx!!! 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice stary dear
Very different concept loved it
Continue soon and do pm me

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Posted: 9 years ago
It's really interesting.Please continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Really nice ðŸ˜Š Update soon.
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Personally am a huge Harry Potter fan...witches and broomsticks take me to Hogwarts...it would be great to see some magic in kabir and Nisha's life...who knows maybe it takes a witch to make kabir realize his love in the show too...seems like it's going that way there

Nice concept dude
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice

Yes typing is very tough
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Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by: lgr007

Personally am a huge Harry Potter fan...witches and broomsticks take me to Hogwarts...it would be great to see some magic in kabir and Nisha's life...who knows maybe it takes a witch to make kabir realize his love in the show too...seems like it's going that way there

Nice concept dude



Hehe 😆 thanks!
Even i am a huge potterhead
hogwarts...sigh!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by: Chahanya

Nice

Yes typing is very tough



yup! Hands go numb
and thanx! 😊
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Thank u sonal30, janvi0513, roseflower_07 and amaya07!!!
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PREVIOUSLY: 
Nisha and Kabir  find a bewitched broom in the middle of the night.
Upon touching it they become unconscious.


CHAPTER: 2

Nisha woke up to a sobbing voice. Someone was crying. She opened her eyes.
A bright light reflected on to her eyes. 'No, this is not my home... where am I?' she
thought as she looked around her. The whole room was a clean white in colour.
The walls, the tables, the ceiling fan, even the bed that she lay on; except
 2 things- herself and the man beside her... Kabir. Nisha immediately sat up 
and saw that his eyes wre red and swollen, probably because of crying.

N: Kabir, tujhe kya hua? [looking around her] Aur yeh hum kahan hain?

K: [wipes his eyes and manages to whisper in a hoarse voice] Tu kabhi mera 
     vishwaas nahin karegi

N: Kabir bol naa. Please? Main tujh par vishwaas karti hoon.

K: Achha? Toh kya tu vishwaas karti hai ki hum kisi tarah ke fairyland mein aayein
     hain?Ki kuch pariyon aur ajeeb dikhne waale logon ne humein kidnap kiya hai? 
     Ki  tumhare parivaar  waalon ko kuch raakshason ne bandh karke rakha hai? Aur 
     meri maa... [in a low cracked voice] unhein kahin chhupaya gaya hai?

At first, Nisha looked scared. Then she burst out laughing.

N: KYA? Tu paagal ho gaya hai kya? Apni acting bandh kar aur mujhe 
     ghar  leke jaa.

K: [losing his temper] Vishwaas nahin hota naa? [grabbing Nisha's hand
     and taking her outside the white room] Mere saath aa. Abhi prove karke 
    dikhaata hoon.

He leads her outside the room to a huge hallway which is fully isolated.
Taking a few turns, he opens a door leading to a room fully covered in 
red and pink items. And on a huge, cushioned chair sat a lady. In fact the 
prettiest lady Nisha had ever seen. Her face was as white as snow, red flaming hair,
a perfect face. The lady stood up. Thats when Nisha got a shock. The lady had 
WINGS! She was a FAIRY!
Nisha rubbed her eyes, but the illusion wouldn't go away. Seeing her reaction, 
the fairy smiled. 

Fairy: Hello, Nisha.I am Stella. I know you must be surprised. But dont worry. I have told 
           Kabir everything.

N: Wh_ WHAT? What did y y you tell Kabir? And how do you know my name?

Stella: Well... the story somehow goes like this...
           Our enemy, the queen of war and blood had apparently once come to 
           your planet Earth to buy some jewellery from 'Gangwal Jewellers' 2 months ago. 
           You see, she wanted to explore you place.
           Later she came to know that a man named Sumit gave her fake jewels and 
           cheated her. So  the queen'Darcy' her name is,  kidnapped him and all your
           family members to get revenge. She tried to kidnap you both also, but
          there was some kind of power which protected you both. So she declared a war
          which will be fought 6 days later. She placed a deal- if she wins, she gets to... well
          ... kill you all and if we win she will let you go back to planet Earth.

 Nisha didnt reply. She had no words. She couldn't believe what she had just
 heard... that too from a fairy!!! 
Seeing hers and Kabir' s  blank expressions Stella sighed. She waved her hands in 
an intricate pattern. This would show them the truth...

TO BE CONTINUED


Hello friends! I know there were no nibir moments.
But do tell me how was the update.
Even harsh comments are welcome.