DiL Ki BaAt.. ShAyArI Ke SaAtH(@pg 27 on 08/10/2016) - Page 5

Beautiful shayari dear 😃

Kya khub...ji..👏

Thank you so much to everyone...
Mwahh!!! 😳

Today I was just cleaning my almirah...
(actually it has lot of faaltu ka saamaan😆)
but today I found a very special thing there

Dekhna chahtey Ho???
Well its a poem that I wrote after Rantara Propose scene...

Something like if Raghu proposed Antara in dis way to kaisa hota???

Here it go... 😊

(red lines of Raghu and Blue are of Antara)


Yaaad hai Vo din jab hum Miley they pehli baar,
Nazrein miltey hi ho gayi thi chaar,
Magar kismat ko tha kuch aur hi manzoor,
Kyunki tum aur main, dono hi they maagroor..

Vo tujhey paani Ki ek boond bhi na deney k liye
Vo tere parivaar ko ghar se baahar nikaalney k liye
Tujhe har pal takleef deney, aur hamesha chot pahunchaaney k liye,
Apun bahut SORRY hai MISS CALL, tera dard na samajh paaney k liye...


Tumhey apni galtiyon ka ehsaas Ho jana
Tera aur mera dost bankey ek nayi shuruaat kar panaa,
Har choti choti baat pe jagad kar ek dusrey se rooth janaa
Lekin har baar tumhara mujhey manaana...
Tera aksar Vo ek hi dhun gungunanaa
Par har raat tumhara use apne mouthorgan pey bajaana
Vo har pal tere pass hona chahna,
Tumsey dur hotey hi, tumse milney k liye tadap janaa
Ye ehsaas hai kuch Jana pehchanaa
Kehna chahta Hu aaj main ye tumse...

MUJHEY PYAAR HO GAYA HAI ANTARA TUMSEY...


(silence for few minutes was there in the scene. Antara came closer to Raghu and asked...)


Vada karo mujhsey Ki zindagi Ki raah Mein kabhi mera saath to ni chodogey,
Jab zarurat hogi mujhey tumhari to kahin muh to na modogey

Ye vada hai mera,
Na to tujhey kabhi chodunga, na tumhara saath
Ye vada hai mera,
Tere bulaney se pehley, kuch kehney se pehley hamesha har mushkil Mein tere aagey khada rahunga
Ye vada hai mera,
Chahey Teri marzi Ho ya na Ho, main humesha Teri madad karunga...
Ye vada hai mera , his din tu saath chodegi

US DIN MAIN YE DUNIYA CHOD DUNGA...


...and they hugged each other.. 😳

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Soo... This was the silly poem which I wrote for that scene after watching their confession...
Kaisi lagi???
I know that it was too long, 99% possibility is that may be aap so Gaye hogey padhtey huey...
Aur agar Ni soye Ho to please yahan ek comment post krke is choti bachi ko aone vichaar bataaiye... 😆

WAITING WAITING Edited by jollygrl - 8 years ago

Seems like everyone is busy🤔

Aww bacha.. u made my day...🤗
it was a emotional rollercoaster journey to the memmory lane... made me remind of all their encounters, nok jhok, dosti aur pyar.....
Rantara's confession was something unforgettable and u made the memory more vivid...❤️

Love you bacha...thank you to nahin kahe sakti.. but dher sara hug for you...🤗

This content was originally posted by: ifians

Aww bacha.. u made my day...🤗
it was a emotional rollercoaster journey to the memmory lane... made me remind of all their encounters, nok jhok, dosti aur pyar.....
Rantara's confession was something unforgettable and u made the memory more vivid...❤️

Love you bacha...thank you to nahin kahe sakti.. but dher sara hug for you...🤗

Apun Ki taraf se bhi bohot shara huggss hai aapko...
🤗🤗

Love u so much di... 😳

This content was originally posted by: rima4ever

loved it

Thanks dear 😊

Wow! Wow! Wow! 👏
Terey iss poem ne toh mujhey maar hii dala yaar 😳
Kiya likhti ho golu molu...may toh amazed hogayee ji ⭐️
Ek ek line was beautiful 😃
Aysa confession sach me dekhnay ko milta toh kiya hota? Zyada kuch nai hota bass may gir jaati [:$ 😆 sach me yaar what a poem! Loved it from my heart 😃

"ye wada hai mera Jis din Tu saath choregi uss din may mein ye duniya chordunga"

Shivi darling,your poem enhanced the beauty of my Saturday morning!
Thank you! Love you golu molu 😃
Yours sanju DiEdited by Sanju4Rajeev - 8 years ago

This content was originally posted by: Sanju4Rajeev

Wow! Wow! Wow! 👏
Terey iss poem ne toh mujhey maar hii dala yaar 😳
Kiya likhti ho golu molu...may toh amazed hogayee ji ⭐️
Ek ek line was beautiful 😃
Aysa confession sach me dekhnay ko milta toh kiya hota? Zyada kuch nai hota bass may gir jaati 😳😆 sach me yaar what a poem! Loved it from my heart 😃

"ye wada hai mera Jis din Tu saath choregi uss din may mein ye duniya chordunga"

Shivi darling,your poem enhanced the beauty of my Saturday morning!
Thank you! Love you golu molu 😃
Yours sanju Di

Gir jaatey!!!😆
Di, This poem is very special to me also

I have lost it months ago
But aaj Mili to mera bhi Saturday jhakass Ho gya
(normally my Saturdays are worst)
Aur aapka ye comment padh k to your Golu Molu is Dancing like fools on her bed😆
It's 7:30pm here aur I am alone in my house...
Best feeling ever 😃Edited by jollygrl - 8 years ago