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Unique Love #3 : Ishra - Do You Hate Me UPDATED 4th OCT pg 58 - Page 7

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Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by: MysticRiver

interesting..


Thnks dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
very emotional update
rohi adi all bhalla missing ishita
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Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by: divazfankau

very emotional update
rohi adi all bhalla missing ishita

Hey dear... 
😳... 
Next update will be tomo... 
I promise it will have a mixture of all emotions...  Not only saddy... 
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Posted: 9 years ago
so emotional update yr.. waiting for nxt..!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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so emotional update yr.. waiting for nxt..!!


I'm just working on the update...  Will update it to night... 
The update is also a but emotional...  Bare with me please... 
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Posted: 9 years ago
hey guys I'm back with 3rd part...
Hope you like it... 
Its a bit emotional but eventually it has Ishra Moments too...πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰
almost all of you commented it to be emotional one... Just to make you feel the pain of separation... 
This was pretty much needed, to make the base of this story...
I promise to give lots of Ishra moments...
Do shadiyan abhi baki h mere dost...😳😳😳 

with respect to the suspense of their separation or anything regarding to that... you have to wait...πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰


without further delay... Here's  the third part...

Part 3 Unique Love πŸ˜³
-Shravs😳😳😳

"Ishita... Mere bachche ko sone do... " , 

"Ab maine konsa disturb kiya..Aphika bachcha mujhe sone nahi de rha h... " ,

 "Arey Hadd h... us bechare ko dosh mat do... " ,

 "Raman mujhe andar se bohot ajeeb lag rha h... apka bachcha bohot tang kar rha h... mere pet mein..." ,

 "huh... mere bachche ke bare mein kuch nahi... " , 

"Haan haan... mujhse konsa pyaar h... bas bachchon se pyaar h... " , 

"Hadd hai...Madrasan... Chup hoja.. mera kal presentation h... jitna bolegi... utna jyada tang karegi meri beti... " , 

"mujhe yakin h... mujhe beta hi hoga... " ,

 "woh tamanna h... samjhi..." , 

"Aaahhh... " , "Kya hua... " , 

"huh... kuch nahi... gud gud ho rha h... pet mein... " ,

 "chup hoke so jao... mujhe aise mat darao... warna.. hospital mein dakhal krwa dunga abhi se.. " , 
"kuch bhi bolte ho... Mujhe papa-beta ... dono milke pareshaan krte ho..."

"BHaiii... 😲" , "..."

Romi patted Raman's Shoulder...

"hmmm.. " , "BHai woh... client pohoch gaye... apki meeting h abhi... 😑😑"

Got up... and headed to the client's meet... without replying anything to Romi.. while Romi smacked his forehead for expecting his reply...

Raman completed his meeting and headed to his room... Went near a Portrait of Him and Ishita...

"Meri Galti mujhe samjh gayi hai Ishita...  tumhe apni galti kabhi samjh nahi aayi... tum bhi hamesha yahi karti ho...  Tum kya chahti ho... ???

Abhi alag hoke, yun mujhe kya dikhana chahti ho tum...
Mere saath toh fir bhi bachche hain Ishita...

 Aur woh bachche jo mere saath reh kar bhi tumhara jikar karte hain...  Tumne unse unki happy family ka sapna chin liya h... unse unke Ishima ko chin liya, unse unke papa ko chin liya h...

 Tum jab wapas aaogi... kya tumhe lagta hai... tum unhe woh sab de paogi... jo unhone miss kiya...

Jis din tum gayi , Us din se apne ghar ki saari khushiyan bhi kho gayi Ishita... 
Tumne Ek baar bhi yeh jaan ne ki koshish nahi ki... main tekh hoon bhi ki nahi... "

Tears Trickled down his eyes...😭😭😭

"Main tekh nahi hoon Ishita...  Mujhme ab aur ladne ki takat nahi h... Tumhara Ravan kumar  ab Ravan Kumar nahi rha...  dekho... baat baat pe yun rone lag jata hu...  aur yeh main kisi ko jata nahi sakta...  main aajkal pehle se bhi battar ho gya hu...

Mere Khushi  mujhse bhagwan ne cheen hi liya ishita... ...  

Tumne ek baar bhi nahi socha mera kya hoga... apne bachchon ka kya hoga... naahi humare pariwar ka... Tum kab se itni selfish hogayi ... Mujhse dur reh ke kya samjhane ki koshish kar rhi ho...  har subha mera ek hi sapna hota h...  tumhe dhund nikal ne kaa... Kahan chupi ho tum...

Tumhe jis din dhund lunga naa... usdin... tumhe nahi chodunga...  Mere pyaar ko kabhi tumne samjha hi nahi... Main akela ho gya hu... Sab hai mere saath fir bhi mera idhar koyi h nahi... Mujhe kuch samjh nahi aa rha h... yeh kab tak chale ga... Mujhe milne ki ichcha nahi h tumhe... Yaa mujhse dur reh akr khush ho tum..."

He closed His eyes with that... He couldn't imagine her living happily without him... Mentally smacked himself to even have thought something like that... looked into the photo that was kept on his table by Ishita... that was of their children...

"Tumhari Ishima ko main dhund nikalunga... "πŸ˜•

He got up... took his car keys and headed to home...

When he opened the door... he saw the photo of a very happy go family... his frown returned...  Ruhi noticed him first...😊😊

"Paapaa...App aaj jaldi kaise aa gaye... " , "Ghar pe kaam h...Adi exam dhang se likha ya nahi... " ," haan papa... " , "Mujhe disturb mat karna... kaam h... dono homework karo aur time pe sojana... "

"Puttar... tu inna jaldi kaise aa gya ghar... " , "Kaam h kuch... " , " beta khana khale ... " , "tang mat karo..."

He was angry on him for replying his mother that way...😑
He couldn't keep himself happy... He couldn't define his happiness without Ishita... 

"Ammaa... Kya hua... appa ne bataya aaj apne lunch nahi ki... " , "Nahi raman... maine dhud piya beta... khana khane ki ichcha nahi hui... " , "Amma maine kaha hai naa... Ishita ... " , "Mujhe uske bare mein baat nahi karni... meri bas ek beti h... aur ek beta h... Vandu aur tum... "

Raman didn't know what to say... He managed to make his amma eat and sleep... He was the only person who could tackle amma after Ishita had left... He didn't understand her anger on her daughter... But then he got to know; it is truly said... Anger is something which comes only on the person whom you love... and eventually he realized his anger with respect to Ishita was also the same... And he let that anger out on his children...  He was guilty within but didn't know... How to get out of this...

He just got a way to get out of it... that was nothing but his work.. He started distancing himself from the family...especially his children...

Mihika had some of the qualities of Ishita... who helped his family and children...  But then she couldn't replace her sister... still her emptiness that she had cause couldn't be addressed...

He couldn't understand any of his behaviour himself to let know others why he was like that...
With these thought he was heading towards his home... when he opened the door...
Romi and Mihika were busy talking to each other in their own lovey dovey way...

"Romi movie kitni romantic thi...😳😳 " , 

"Miku use jyada romance to tera pati karta h ... " ,😳😳

 "tum bhi naa... " , "Kya nahi karta main... tum hi ho... jo mere mood ka band bajati ho... " ,😳😳

 "Kab maine band bajaya... im ever ready... "😳😳😳

Mihika Bit her lower lip... (st)"ab toh gayi beta tu... yeh insaan aur nahi chodega..."

"ohhh hooo... Kudiye... yeh ki dass diya...Meri biwi mere rang mein rang gayi..."πŸ˜‰

Saying so he nears her and back hugs her...😳😳

"ab kitna kaam karogi chalo naa... " ,

 "Romi mummyji kehti hai... ishu akka hamesha kaam khatam karke jaati thi... " ,

 "Bhabhi hamesha sabka sab kuch krke jaati thi... " , πŸ˜­

"Ohhh hooo...  fir tumhare biwi ne tumhare romance ka band baja diya... " , 

"hihi... isiliye toh keh rha hu... jaldi karo... " , 

"ab tum jao... room... mera kaam jaldi hoga warna yun tum mujhe kaan nahi karne doge... "πŸ˜†

She pushes him back a lil bit...  He  tightens his grip saying chalega... is romance mein thrill hai...

Raman unknowingly leaves the door and it bangs making noise which actually disturbs them...  while raman mentally smacks himself and Mumbles a sorry and leaves...
Romi and Mihika gets embarrassed...  

"Raman... kya h... aap jaake so jao naa... Main bas aa hi rhi thi... Aaj neelu nahi aayi naa... toh kaam bad gya... sorry baba... aap please jayiye naa... I promise I will make for it... " πŸ˜³πŸ˜³

, "Maine kuch bhi nahi kaha yaar... mujhe room mein bore ho rha tha toh idhar aa gya... ... ohhh ... madrasan waise bhi tumhe makeover karna nahi aata... toh... mujhpe chod do... " ,πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰

 "Ravan Kumar... ab toh main... chodungi nahi apko... " ,😳

 "rehene do... bhegi billi... " , πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

"Khadus insaan...Mujhe kaam karne do... hamesha khud ka bhala sochte ho..." ,

 "Hann toh bhalla hu naa isiliye bhala sochta hu... Sab ke liye... Tumhare sivai... " ,πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

 "huh... " ,😑

 "aur kitna kaam karna h yaar... chalo bhi abhi... " ,πŸ₯±πŸ₯±

 "aap jao naa raman main bas peeche peeche pohochti hu... " ,πŸ˜•

 "Kyun ... chalo naa saath... " , πŸ˜²

"main bachchon ko ek baar dekh ke aati hoon... " ,πŸ˜›

 " arey kya hai.. yaar sukoon se so rhe honge... " , 

"haan toh usi cheez ko mujhe dekhna hai raman... " , πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰

"Ohhh madrasan ab senti mat hoja... chal saath mein dekh te hai... " , " chalo... "😑

She switched off the lights headed towards their children's room; found them peacefully sleeping...  Raman and Ishita both twined their fingers into each other's and watched them ...

"Bachche kitne achese so rhe h naa... " , πŸ˜³πŸ˜³

"sab tumhari wajah se... " , πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰

"kyaaa... " , "Tumne unhe ek happily family life di h... " ,😳😳

 "huh... ab aap itne senti kyun ho rhe ho... unhone jo mere liye kiya... uske hisab se toh maine unke liye kuch bhi nahi kiya raman... " , πŸ˜­πŸ˜­

"ab chalen room yaa... bachchon ko utane ka irada h... " , "chaliye... Kuch bhi hojaye... " , "Kya..." , " chaliye..."😳

They walked to their room... 

"Toh madrasan... Makeover karna h tumhe yaad h naa... " , "mujhe makeover karna kaha aata h... "

(Raman's ST) Bhalla khud ka bhala sochle... Khud ke pairon pe is tarah kulhadi nahi marte... chal patale madrasan ko...😳😳

"Arey Madrasan... Haar maan gayi woh bhi itne jaldi... " ,πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

 "Jeet ke kya faida... " ,

 "we will get a romantic night madrasan... wo bhi kya kam h... " , 

"Rehndo aap... fir bologe.. maine kiya hi kya h... " ,

 "ohhh natak mat karo... " ,

 "Maine kya kiya... main aaj se couch mein hi sone wali hoon... aur apne jyada bag bag kiya naa... toh bachchon ke saath shift ho jaungi... jao aap... sukoon se so jao... " ,

 "achcha tekh h... tum couch mein so jao...😳😳main... tumhare upar so jaunga... " , 

" excuse me.. " , 

"You will never be excused for this Madrasan...πŸ˜‰ " , "huh... "

They reached their room...

"Toh... " , "Kya toh...", "peeche peeche kaha aa rhi ho😲😲... Couch naa use kehte hai..." ,

 "ohh thankyou mujhe ab tak pata hi nahi tha..." , πŸ˜‘

"Pata tha toh jao.."πŸ₯±

Saying so he throws pillow and quilt on the couch...

😑😑  Ishita Glares at  him... and Mutters to herself  (ST) Main bhi toh dekhun kab tak mujhse dur rhte hai...πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰

"woh ho.. kya gus pus... kar rhe ho... jao..."πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰

Raman turns and switches off the light...  πŸ˜³
Ishita sleeps on Couch...😲😲😲
 Raman smiles sheepishly😳
... and mentally smacks her for being so innocent... πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰
Before Ishita could even think of anything to go back to bed... 
He comes and sleeps over her...😳

"Ohhh Madrasan... who bed bohot bada h yaar... Usme.. maja nahi aata... Yeh compact hai.."πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰

Saying so Raman makes her sleep over him... and comfortably occupies the couch...

"Yeh kya kar rhe ho... bed pe chaliye... Apko back pain ho jayega..." , πŸ˜²πŸ˜²πŸ˜²

"yaar main budhdhaa nahi hu... stop treating me like that... " ,πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

 "Raman please... chaliye bed pe... whatever you say I will do.. aap abhi josh main tekh rhte ho... but subha apko bohot taqleef hoti h... Chaliye... uhtiye... " , πŸ˜†

"huh...Romance ka band bajana koyi tumse sikhe... "πŸ˜†

He gets up... takes her in his arms and goes to bed...

"khush... " , "hmmm..." , "neend aa rhi h... " , hmmm... " , "So jao... " , "par apko... " , 

" mujhe pata tha... Mihika ke dress purchases main busy thi tum... main toh yun hi ched rha tha..." , 

"sorry raman... aaj Mihika ne... mujhe aur romi ko itna pareshan kardiya ek shadi ka joda select krne ke liye... ki pucho mat..." , "achcha... " ,

 "par pata  h Raman... mujhe saadi ke jode wahan dekh ke... bohot majaa aaya... mujhe bhi pehna h... " , "le leti naa pagal madrasan" , "Mummyji ne kaha woh... khud le ayenge... " , "kab... " ,
 "humare sal gira pe... " , "Waah madrasan... toh mujhe meri dulhan mil hi jayegi haan... " , "ab bhi aap hi ki hu... " , "fir bhi tumhe woh dulhan ke jode main dekhna h mujhe... " , "achcha... " , "kyaa baton mein lagi ho.. so jao... warna sone nahi dunga... "

He kissed her... She hugged him tight... 😳
After their kiss... She rested her head on his chest... and mumbled sorry...for the nth time...  He held her tight and Mumbled I love you... and both slept in each other's arms... 

To be Continued...😳
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Edited by shravsss - 8 years ago
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i didnt get dis -- "Do shadiyan abhi baki h mere dost..." kis ki shadi..? πŸ˜•
 updte was mindblwng.. πŸ‘πŸΌ 
lykd d way Raman cares 4 amma.. nd amma sayng "meri bas ek beti h... aur ek beta h... Vandu aur tum... ""  now i'm more curious 2 knw d reason behind seprt... πŸ˜† bcz amma b bahut gusse mai lag rhi h... πŸ˜†
thnx 4 ishra scenes.. β˜ΊοΈ loved dere convos.. specially last 1.. πŸ˜†
Dis was super funny.. ["yaar main budhdhaa nahi hu... stop treating me like that... " ,πŸ˜†πŸ˜†  ] πŸ€£  πŸ€£  πŸ€£  πŸ€£  πŸ€£  πŸ€£  πŸ€£ 

but yar suspense ka raj kab tak khuelga..? abhi tak koi hint b ni mila ..!!  wats d reason behind separation...!!!?? πŸ˜•


continue soon plzzz.. πŸ˜Š

Edited by SuryaIshraholic - 9 years ago
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waitng


perfect timing anu...
hope you find it interesting...😳
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it was too cute di. and the concept of story of also gud. loved it a lot but eager to know the suspense behind sepration, please update soon and open the suspense. can't see ishra in pain
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perfect timing anu...
hope you find it interesting...😳

yeah it was intrestng.. πŸ˜‰