Destined to Meet- Manan SS

Posted: 8 years ago

HELLO people. I am a silent reader of KY2 forum.

I just got this idea today so thought of writing a SS...

Hope you guyz like it...

 

 Destined to Meet 


Prologue

 

He stood by the door and watched his wife fighting between life and death.

He had seen her being diagnosed for CANCER but never had he seen her crying so badly. The pain that she went through was something that can never be felt by him.

The pain of losing her dear hubby, the pain of going away from her house that had so many memories of theirs, the pain of breaking the promise of always staying by his side and at last the pain of death.

He could not see her like this. He went away and sat on the chair nearby waiting for the doc to come out.

His hands were shivering. His eyes had turned red due to the sleepless nights. He was sobbing.

"Sorry. Mr.Malhotra, we can't save her" was all that the doc said who just came out of the room.

Manik stood up hearing those words. This was not that something unexpected. He knew she will leave him. He knew she would die. But he still expected a miracle to happen.

"She wants to meet you" the doc said patting Manik's shoulders.

He slowly made his way inside the room. He stood by her side and dared not to look into her eyes.

Then she suddenly held his hand and makes him see her. He saw her face which had no beauty left now.

She had lost her knee-length hairs. She had wrinkles all over her face. Her face was pale now.

But that charm in her eyes for which he had fell 3 year ago was still not lost.

The silence in the room broke with her shivery voice.

"Manik sorry" she said.

He was still mad at her. He looked straight into her eyes without a word.

"Manik, I am sorry. I know I should have informed you about this earlier. But I never wanted to see you cry."

He cupped her face. His anger was vanished. He kissed her forehead and rested his heard on hers.

He felt her hot breathe of his face.

He wanted this time to stand still.

He wanted her by his side.

He wanted to go to all his concerts in hand in hand with her.

His wishes were never gonna end...

But they could not be fulfilled.

He suddenly found no hot air on his face.

He lifted his head and saw her still smiling.. her eyes still glistening.

He smiled at his fate and slowly closed her eyes.

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P.S: Please share your thoughts... there's a lot more to this story so please i need your support... 

Hope you'll not disappoint me...

Please like and comment (only if you like)

All sort of comments are accepted

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Edited by harshitha2398 - 8 years ago
Posted: 8 years ago
Edited by harshitha2398 - 8 years ago
Posted: 8 years ago
The prologue was enough to moisten my eyes..
God knws what will happen when story proceeds..
U write really well
Continue soon 😊
Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by pooh2015


The prologue was enough to moisten my eyes..
God knws what will happen when story proceeds..
U write really well
Continue soon 😊

Thank you... will continue soon
Posted: 8 years ago
That was really intense yet soft! I guess  that he'll meet nandini as another incarnation?! Just a guess ;) btw beautifully written :D
Posted: 8 years ago
Continue dear...
it was really so good...there was so intense and yet peaceful..
u penned it very well..
just a small advice..just add MaNan SS above...so that readers can understand that it is a fanfic..
Continue soon..
Love,
Harika..keeep smiling..it looks good on yu..
Posted: 8 years ago
Nandini dead?
Continue soon
Posted: 8 years ago
emotional prologue
cont soon
Posted: 8 years ago
Very good start 👏
So is this girl nandini or will he meet her afterwards? 
Posted: 8 years ago
ITS SOOO GUD M CRYING NOW AWESOME WRITTEN

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