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Posted: 17 years ago

Part Three

Jai sits down and they all eat breakfast. Pia still stayed over and told Pushkar that she'll come tomorrow as it was really late and all her stuff was with her.

Pia comes down with tears in her eyes.

Bani : Pia, idar aao aur nashta karo phir office bhi jaana hai

Jai [[smiling ]] : tum aur PUshkar yaha bhi resak thai ho.

Pia takes this as an invitation and smiles.

Bani : aaj mujhe Tarun se milna hai divorce ke papers kilyeh.

Jai : teek hai. lekin jaldi anaa.

BAni smiles as Jai and PIa get up to go to the office. Jai takes his car but as soon as PIa reaches the front porch she sees he's already gone so she has to take another car.

Tarun's Office:

BAni: kya Saahil ko yeh maalum tha ke woh kis company se loan manga tha?

Tarun: mujhe nahi pata lekin humko kisi se thara Jai ki company ki shares wapas lehne parege.

Bani: itna saara paisa kidar se aayege?

Tarun: main kuch sooch tha hua phir tum phone karoga. teek hai?

Bani: ok. main aap ko phir milti ho.

BAni leaves and goes home. Raashi and Rano are in the kitchen and Jigs is on the phone as usual.

mausi : aao beta.

Dadi: ab tu kidar thi? har waqt kaam hi karti rehti ho. bilko Jai ki thara.

Bani laughs and they chat about stuff. Jigs is just staring and working on a new scheme to get Jai to move money into Saahil's name cuz he helped him.

Jigs: kya tumne Tarun se milke sab divorce ki baatein settle ke? aur kya paisa tumhare hi naam hai?

Mausi: iss duniya mein aur kuch bhi hai paisa ke siva  jaise tumhare paas koi fashion sense tho hai hi nahi. aur jaise tumhare paas koi pati bhi nahi. tum uspe nazar rakho ... Jai ke paisa upar nahi.

Bani and Dadi look  on as Jigs looks disgusted and walks away. Bani says let me go and check in the kitchen.

Bani[smiling]: khana khel yeh kya hai?

Rano: Di, aap kil yeh kuch nahi lekin mere jiju khelyeh sab kuch hai

BAni: jiju ki chamchi, di ab kuch nahi hai?

Raashi laughs. and Jai walks in.

Jai: ab mein itna good-looking hu toh iss mein Rano ki kya galti hai? woh toh sirf apni jiju ki kathir khana banhari hai?

BAni [smiling ] : acha? app ko kisne kaha keh app good-looking hai?

Rano: mein ne kaha !

Jai: yeh kitne smart hai . saahil toh lucky hai.

Bani: ab mujhe khana hai?

Raashi: mein aap thi ho.

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Posted: 17 years ago
awwwwwwwww i just read 3 parts.. amazing.. luveddd it.. wow pia and jigs - two women who r gettin on my nerves.. haila her and pushy gonna stay at the walia house.. hmmm.. luv jai - he changed fo sure.. and rano - aye haye.. so coool.. luved d last bit. kitchen scene 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago

no more comments ?

i'll continue tomorrow. too busy today. sorry

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Posted: 17 years ago
👏 👏 awesome parts
please do continue soon
thanx 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
wow...its great...funny...how cute...jiju and sali...the correct relationship...masti...not like pia... 🤢 ...doing a fantastic job... 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey hunnii..

read ur 3 parts! and its fantastic!

plz do continue!!


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Posted: 17 years ago
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Love how Rano is calling Jai jiju
Thank god that Pia is shifting to puskhar's house
plz write soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
this is really good
cont. soon