Kaisi Yeh Yaariaan

**story of my life **manan ff ( part 34)5/7 pg 138 - Page 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
Like. Ur update...
Especially cabir's line. Padosi Ko aunty nahi...
Plz update soon

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Posted: 9 years ago
manan is ditto manik..
someone got competitor..
it's awesome...manan is like carbon copy of manik...
it's amazing ..plz cont asap
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Very curious to know what happens next!! ;D
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Awsome blossom update !!!
But pls pls pls pls pls disclose it fast to Manik that Manan is his son .. Please if possible in next update .. Cant wait to see his expressn :D 
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And and and.. if possible please update a long one .. U knw its kinda impossible to take the curiosity :P
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Hey !! its awesome...
loved it whole !!
Little manan is so cute...exactly like Manik..just love him..
u penned it very well..loving this one !!
A leap of six yrs...Manan finally met..
I guess now its going to be more fun...
Manik is manan's dad..Am guessing soo...
lets see..waiting for next update..
its fascianting me...update soon.
love,
harika..keep smiling..it looks good on yu
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plz plz plz cont soon..can't wait anymore
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Awesome
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Cont soon
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plz continue soon...read all part in one go...they are aswm...plz update fast :)
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Hey...guyzzz thank u so much for showering ur comments on me...thank u
As everyone is eager to know manan ...it's the time
Revelation
Manbir dry themselves and come out .
Cabir: So..nandini ..we'll leave (looks at Manik)
Nandini is not making eye contact with him
Manik: Sameer!!! Kavya!!!
And they walk outside Manik and cabir leave ...while leaving Manik watches nandini from side mirror of his car...as she is going far from him
At Dhruv 's house,
Sameer: Mukti..maasi!!! (manbir and Kavya to hug her)
Mukti: Hey guyzz...yeh kya haal bana kar rakha hai
They both lie on couch
Manik: Voh..sab chod..how's u..?? And ur tummy ??
Abhi: With lots of tantrums
Cabir: Kya chod manik!!!..today biggest day of our lives especially Manik...kyu Manik
Alya: Kya Hua...
Cabir : We met the nandini Murthy
Alya: What??
Mukti: Kab???
Dhruv: Kaise??
All in unison:..arey bol na..
Cabir: Voh...(and narrates whole story)
Dhruv: What!!! Nandini's son manan..god
Mukti: I want to meet new fab 5...they just represents us...
Abhi: Lets call them...what say???.. We can meet nandini also
And Manik leaves from there
Manik in rooms..he remembers how she meet him today...and all flashback memories how they eloped after fusion concert and a tear falls from his eye..
Manik: It hurts nandini...jab us little monster called u mom..my heart skipped a beat..who just started again beating after seeing u...
According to plan new FAB 5 comes to meet our FAB 5

Next day , evening
Murthy's
Nandini: Manan!!! Come soon
And comes down stairs..nandini is just mesmerized seeing him..and remembers Manik..they walk the same way..adjusting his sleeves
Nandini: Ho Gaya...lets go..
Nandini and FAB3reach over there..
Manik just looks at nandini( whose wearing blue , black and white combination of varli pattern chudidar..
Her hairs left open...just enough to drive him crazy)
Sameer and Kavya meets FAB3
mukti: So here's new Fab 5 ( all of they stand making a angle ..where manan in middle..cavya and Chirag at side and other side Sameer and manyata...and FAB5 also take their position and stand facing each other)
Nandini: So here, newFAB5 meet OLD FAB5
manan and Manik give each other their signature smirk. And leaves...all children are playing outside...while everyone sitting and having a chat
Multi: So...nandini what's ur husband's name?..the lucky person
Manik: Ya..lucky..(murmuring)
Maid: Ma'am foods ready..
Nandini: (avoiding situation) lets have food ..i am hungry
Everyone shift towards dining table
Nandini and cabir are sitting beside each other and Manik in front..
Navya: Hum kuch baat kar rahe they na...
Manik: Ha...navya..nandini's husband...right na nandini
Navya: Ha..Nandini baatao na..when u met him...sab
Nandini: (cross her fingers) actually I am single...
Manik: Spills water ...what??? ( start thinking about manan)
Alya: What ??? Before marriage baby...(and ever head turns towards Manik..and Manik looks at Nandini)
Nandini: Actually...manan mera beta nahi..hai...actually I am his guardian sort of..(Manik relieved)
Manik: What do u mean?
Nandini: Main..sujata ke saath reh rahi thi when she was pregnant with her husband Samarth...after manan was born...she declared me as his godmother..and after 2mths they died in crash...while crash she survived ...and she handover his responsibilities to me..so from the time he hold my hand till now I am his mom...(while saying this Nandini was playing with her fingers)
Cabir observed this as Manik was on 9 th cloud after hearing she was single
Cabir pov: So Nandini..i think u r lying..as Manik told me once u can't lie...kuch toh gadbad hai..
After having dinner they move towards living area
Manik: Mujhe ussey baat karni hai..do something
Cabir: Uff...manik tu bhi na( and spills drink over Nandini)...oops sorry...nandu(Manik gives him anger glare 😡 ) I mean nandini
Alya: U go to washroom...there it is in first floor (and she leaves and slowly Manik too)

In room,
Nandini: (comes out cleaning it and stands before mirror ..manik comes hold her from backside..and kiss her nape) Manik..!! She just moans
He just make her turn..looking at her
Manik: When that little monster said u mom ...my heart just skipped..but I had hope that u still love me..
Nandini: No!!Mr.Malhotra..I don't...know r ways r separate
Manik: Plzz...r u still stuck on Dhruv
Nandini: No!! Dhruv was right at his place at that time...but u didn't say anything u just let me walk away...do u know what I have been through
Manik: Nandini...i went through the same...
Nandini: U chose it...and( rubbing her tears and jerked his hand) it's over between us what we had..seven years ago..(and leaves)
Manik: No nandu...u will be mine again..because we r destine to be together..I'll get u back..
Outside Nandini bumps upon Dhruv
Nandini: Dhruv...actually I am sorry Mai yaha nahi Ana chahti thi...voh mukti...
Dhruv: Calm down..actually I am sorry...i still regret what I did..agar Mai yeh sab nahi Karta...toh u and Manik would have been to ...i am really sorry..plzz get back Manik back in ur life
(Dhruv hears their convo)
Nandini: It's not possible Dhruv..there's something..
Dhruv: Agar tumne mujhe maaf kardiya..toh plzz...accept buddy...
Nandini: Galti tumhare nahi hai...it's his punishment for deciding our fate..and taking decision on own..
And she leaves...and she gets a call
Dr.. Hello nandu...listen voh records Ki file nahi mil rahe...
Nandini: It's on 3rd shelf...just check
Dr. No it's not..plzz come here soon
Nandini:okay ..just chill I'll be there..

Nandini: Guys...I have to hurry some work at hospital...manan...
Alya: How will u go???
Nandini: Actually I was thinking manan ko ghar drop kar dete Hu..and leave.
Dhruv: R u mad..itne raat KO ussey akele...essa karo leave him here...after u finish work give us a call we'll drop him home..
Cabir: That's good
Nandini: Fine I'll leave...aur ha..manyata and Chirag has reached home safely...okay bye. And kisses him

.precap: Manik and manan eating ice cream ..and Manik stays at her house..cabir knows truth about manan...
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So it revelation...manan child is manan...

And thank u. Once again