AlZia SS "The Malik's prisoner wife" Part 10 page 17 - Page 14

Fatima🤗 this long enough to satisfy me😆 i like to write the way the characters r and the dialogues in the lang they speak in the show taaa k feel wahi aaye or else u feel u r reading a new story and the characters appear diff😆

Padha toh kaafi pehle tha yeh SS magar socha comment kar hii du coz this is the only complete semi-long SS of their after marriage scenes... and it was wonderful...ab har ek chapter ka detail mein toh nahi de sakti but i will mention a few things that i can remember well here

Chanda was there here...i was quite overjoyed coz looks like hum sab usko bhool hii gaye...😆 bechari...i miss her waise...

Yaqut ka bloody kitna mention hua...she gets upset at the mention of his name 😕 and uske fav khaane ko dekhke roti hai😡

OOO Altunia was more greyish angryish here...thank u for making him that way 😆 he was a little hard on Razia too ...accha hai...laaton ke bhoot baaton se nahi maante...but we all know what a soft hearted flirt he is from inside 😈 sometimes wild 🤣

My fav was the hamam scene 😈 aap nahane toh wali hai na toh humein laga miyan biwi kyun alag alag mehnat karey 🤣 this was perfect...couldnt be put into better words really...

finally their consummation...amaa tune details kyun nahi diyaaa😆
chal koi nahi apne on going SS mein woh kasar poori kar de 😈 and she calls him IKHU ??? 😆😆 tune kab likhna shuru kiya yeh SS...i guess tab tv pe aaya nahi tha that she calls him Mirza and he calls her Mohtarma...yahan he calls her Razo🤣 hahaha cute...different

and my personal fav line was - hamare che bacche...bas sirf che ...aur nahi 😈

i enjoyed this SS  alot yaar...this was one of its kind...u wrote quite a bit even before we knew so much about them...itna sab tu hii jaanti thi...
👏
i still read this at times...recently i read it was 5 days ago...
Edited by princess200 - 8 years ago

Originally posted by: princess200

Padha toh kaafi pehle tha yeh SS magar socha comment kar hii du coz this is the only complete semi-long SS of their after marriage scenes... and it was wonderful...ab har ek chapter ka detail mein toh nahi de sakti but i will mention a few things that i can remember well here

Chanda was there here...i was quite overjoyed coz looks like hum sab usko bhool hii gaye...😆 bechari...i miss her waise...

Yaqut ka bloody kitna mention hua...she gets upset at the mention of his name 😕 and uske fav khaane ko dekhke roti hai😡

OOO Altunia was more greyish angryish here...thank u for making him that way 😆 he was a little hard on Razia too ...accha hai...laaton ke bhoot baaton se nahi maante...but we all know what a soft hearted flirt he is from inside 😈 sometimes wild 🤣

My fav was the hamam scene 😈 aap nahane toh wali hai na toh humein laga miyan biwi kyun alag alag mehnat karey 🤣 this was perfect...couldnt be put into better words really...

finally their consummation...amaa tune details kyun nahi diyaaa😆
chal koi nahi apne on going SS mein woh kasar poori kar de 😈 and she calls him IKHU ??? 😆😆 tune kab likhna shuru kiya yeh SS...i guess tab tv pe aaya nahi tha that she calls him Mirza and he calls her Mohtarma...yahan he calls her Razo🤣 hahaha cute...different

and my personal fav line was - hamare che bacche...bas sirf che ...aur nahi 😈

i enjoyed this SS  alot yaar...this was one of its kind...u wrote quite a bit even before we knew so much about them...itna sab tu hii jaanti thi...
👏
i still read this at times...recently i read it was 5 days ago...

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SOOONNN
JALDI JALDI...
So exciting SS...

Originally posted by: lionsroar

CONTINUE
CONTINUE
CONTINUE
SOOONNN
JALDI JALDI...
So exciting SS...

Originally posted by: overactor

it has finished

Hehehe.. 😃 😃 😃
Wo kya h na... Ye apke SS k liye nhi tha... Hm arshia k SS pe cmmnt krne k bajay.. Yaha kr diye..!!
😆 😆
HUM CONFUSED KUMARI hain..!!
Idhar k cmmnts udhar krte rhte h...!!
Hehehe.. 😳 😃 😃
SORRY.. 😆 😉
😉
But apka ye As bhi bahut kamal tha... Hmne abhi padha.. Hehe..
😆 😆 😆

From..
CONFUSED RABBIT.. 😆

Originally posted by: lionsroar

Hehehe.. 😃 😃 😃
Wo kya h na... Ye apke SS k liye nhi tha... Hm arshia k SS pe cmmnt krne k bajay.. Yaha kr diye..!!
😆 😆
HUM CONFUSED KUMARI hain..!!
Idhar k cmmnts udhar krte rhte h...!!
Hehehe.. 😳 😃 😃
SORRY.. 😆 😉
😉
But apka ye As bhi bahut kamal tha... Hmne abhi padha.. Hehe..
😆 😆 😆

From..
CONFUSED RABBIT.. 😆

SS*
NOT AS..

Beautiful story. ...

Originally posted by: SWARNA99

Beautiful story. ...

Amazing. ...

Loved it. ..