{MaNan Drabble 16+} Fifty Shades of Manik |pt one out pg 5| - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice one...waiting for the story and loved the banner...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice concept...
It seems very interesting... btw awsumm banner!!!
Fifty shades of manik...great
Eagerly waiting for update
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by: mishaarshi

i just knw dat the hero was a creep in dat novel/movie...so here too is manik's characterization b same? pls no creeps...or abusive types...i luv reading ur OS so saying this..dont mind

nope it is not exactly like that πŸ˜ƒ he is not so like that . πŸ˜† He is just a normal person with different moods . Plus I do not remember writing any os !πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by: manya_189

I like the concept but i hope you stay pure to MaNan's relationship...

sorry I did not get , pure ? πŸ˜• There are going to be adult stuff but will not keep so much😊 I will stay off that one . 
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Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by: Nikki_Titli

gr8 start...plz continue soon n pm me too plz

thansk and off that add me in ! πŸ˜ƒ Add this account πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 9 years ago
OHo Sam kya baat hai!!!!
Asum hamere patti dev ka sides dekhane walli ho!!!
Yay Manik n Only Manki!!!
Kya Batau Interestin concept!!
LOvely n creepyyy!!!
nyc title hope it is as hawttt as d book dear!!!
N 16+ ki title ko live up karna warna😑 πŸ˜‰
Hawttt n very hawt!!! hai!!!
N manik ki sides padne main majja aayega!!!
Coming to d intro!! 
Kya batau Wala!!!!haha
Aur awum super se bhi uupeer!!!
Yay kisses lyk der iz no 2 morrow wow wish I was lucky enough 2 xperience dat!!!!
Aur manik toh hain hai lajazab king of xpression king of all hearts my hero!!!
Kukkad kamal da n handsome hunk srk romantic salman body n hahaha d list is on n on!!!
Lov u dear awsum 3 som cconcept par complete karna n update jaldi hw abt aaj!!!! LOL
LOng 10 pg waali update karna tume aarya ki kasam!!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome intro!!! keen to read more!
plz continue dear!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Update it now. ... i want to read.. plzzz 
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Nandini POV 


Shade one 

Part one

January 14 2014 
                                     
  ~Meeting him , a fate game , an unexcepted turn in my life ~ Manik as a Stranger 

Today I don feel like doing anything ! 
I just wanna lay in my bed ! 
Got to mood to pick up the phone
So leave a message at the tone 
Cause today I swear I m not doing anything ! 

Bruno Mars was singing out my wish and the  plan of the day . But only if life was that simple ! Uff !  I had already planned that I would just linger around my flat today doing nothing but watching some movie and then maybe order some fast food ! Only had planned not m actually doing it. 
Oh by the ways I said so much but sorry I forgot to introduce myself ! I m Nandini Murthy . A South Indian living in Mumbai to make up my career . 

Talking about making my career , let me say my career and my passion , Music ! And I m on my way to build the dream of my father of me becoming a great classical singer into reality .
 So right as we were talking earlier ! Today!  yes ! Today is Sunday and I have a holiday and had a perfect plan to spend my day off . But then my idiot half crazy bestie Cabir called and gave me this work . He had some interview to take and as he was sick and lying somewhere *ugh ! * he requested me to take the interview . Not actually request though ! 

At first I did not say yes but then he was like so pleading that I finally agreed *oh all lies the real thing is that when I heard the celebrity I was to interview then only I agreed . It was none other then Manik Malhotra ! Oh my dream guy ! He is a cute singer and yes of course famous and very rich ! Every girl goes flat on him ! So do u think I would reject him ? Even if it was to reject a whole day for myself I was ready to go on interview * so I was like "just bring it on boy ! " 

That's how I ended up spoiling my perfect Sunday plan into something more exciting and fun ! And now I m here nervous *sweating* and shaking and shivering *of course I m also bitting nails * sitting in the cab waiting to reach the door of my love ! 

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I reached the place , his studio . "Malhotra studios" was written on the board  . Oh how I love the surname already. ;)

A lady escorted me inside . She was well dressed with a tight black skirt and a blue shirt . Looking at her dress I remembered the one I was wearing . Nothing special *haha I m joking it is totally special!  it took three hours to chose this dress * 
I was in one of my best dressed days . I m wearing a long pink floral skirt and a white tank top with a small half pink waist coat . I had tied my hair in one single shot and was wearing a matching earring . To add to the beauty I had a pink shawl over my shoulders . 

If chacha was here then he would have said that I m looking like a fairy ! He would happy to know that I finally got to meet the person of whose I would read interviews for hours and hours and listen to his voice reapeted . *sorry correction , whose interview I would read repeatedly and of whose voice I did not mind to listen for hours and hours * 
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I sat in a red couch waiting for him to come . Aja aja main hu pyaar tera , the song played in my mind . I guess I waited for half and hour and then started to feel bored and kept yawning . 

I was fidgeting with my shawl as the door spammed opened . In a hurry I got up from the red velvet couch and adjusted myself . 
I looked up at the most mesmerising sight and the person I had always wished to meet . 

A young man of 24 came in walking stylishly . He had worn a red shirt , white coat and vans in his feet ^yes ,yes I even noticed his shoes ^ simple yet so sexy with dark black shades . He walked in confidently companied by two huge men wearing black suit and their eyes were hidden under black glasses . 

He looked around and turned his head at me ! Oh god he was looking at me ! Manik Malhotra ! The big singing sensation  , the man who was always in the cover of teenz magazine , the person who just won his fifthy 'singing teenz national music award ' a week ago , the inspiration of every other teenager who wanted their names in music history , the young  top 10 eligible bachelor of India and fantasy of every girl ! He was looking at me ! Me ,a stranger , a normal girl , me a struggling singer , me Nandini Morthy ! Aiyaapa is this a dream ? 

His eyes were fixed at me for sometime then he turned away . He signalled the guards to give us some privacy and go out . Oh mere murugan ! I m alone with Manik Malhotra ! This is a dream come true . Just for my heart's sake I pinched myself to make sure this is not a dream but reality . 

'What are u doing , standing here ? Go and greet him !'a part of my mind ordered me and listening to that part I hurried towards the man of my dream forgetting that my shawl had stuck to the nail of the small decorative table kept near the couch . The stuck part of the shawl stopped me from moving further and when I moved my step a bit the shawl got freed and somewhat pushed me and then I tripped over a small tea table and losing my balance was left to fall down and touch the floor ! 'I m very down to earth u see ! ' 

See my perfect dream tuning into a nightmare ! I closed my eyes waiting for my bones to break and worse to come but then two strong arms caught me . 
I felt somewhat safe in those arms . A feeling of home , a feeling of security , a feeling of lost love caught me as I lay in those arms . I felt as though I was always welcomed in those arms . 

I opened my eyes and saw him . Yes Manik was holding me . I got statued there for sometime . I did not know how to react ...my arms snaked around his silk smooth neck as my eyes looked onto his hidden eyes . His lips was half opened and his expression was an unreadable one . I closed my eyes again not knowing what to do next . 

I still was there is his arms feeling just perfect when I felt something in my shoulders and hair . I opened my eyes just to find him still in the same position holding me tight . I looked at him and saw some rose petals  in his shoulder and some in his hair . I moved my head slightly and from the corner of my eyes saw some rose petals on my shoulder as well . 

Don't tell me that like in every Hindi movie in the first meeting of the hero and heroine flowers were falling ! It is so just filmy and romantic too! 

I just stayed there in his arms waiting for more to come ...aiyapaa what's next ? ? 

---TBC--- 
Hope u all like it and do comment back your opinion. 

Edited by Texie-Shady - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
So you choose cabir, pleasently suprised
Nandu dressing to impress, i am sure she could wear a potato sack and he would still be mesmarized

Bad manik never make a lady wait, however you totally redeemed yourself with the end, how can she fall when you are there to catch her

The last part was super, i loved it the most