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Posted: 9 years ago

def interesting story

like how uve not gone for typical storyline

hmm let me think ...

story starts with shyam n khushi being married n having kid

he wants a divorce n is going to a madames house for s*x

from something the madme said n the state of the girl im thinking shes khushis look a like n shes drugged so she doesn't show any signs of digust or anything when he touches her

I think he still likes khushi in his own sick way but his greed for money n his rejection from khushi not loving him is making him go for divorce

I have bad feeling once khushi gets close to Arnav Shyam will try to use khushi n his kid to get money from Arnav since he doesn't have Anjali in this story it seems a good way for him to get what he wants including khushi

as for Arnav him not remembering khushi is not such a impossible thing his subconscious remembers but she didn't register enough on his radar for him then she was just a neusance who stood up to him n who he taught a lesson

it was always her eyes that caught his attention

now that she haunts his dreams shes a challenge n puzzle to be solved which will soon turn out to be a rubx cube which he will never get enough of

nice to see u made payal n Akaash meet I so liked how she wasn't all shy n quiet n gave him a piece of her mind

as for Ashu n Aayan how sweet they've already formed a bro sis bond

I cant wait to see what happens at the party n whats Arnavs reaction when he finally remembers khushi n realizes she wouldn't have met n married Shyam if it wasn't for his revenge

looking forward to lots of twists n surprises

u were right I do like to try to get into authors heads n predict whats comin next so let me know if im close

would love to keep reading so plz keep the pms comin my way

sending u buddy request now hope u accept

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Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by: Heatsha8176

def interesting story

like how uve not gone for typical storyline

hmm let me think ...

story starts with shyam n khushi being married n having kid

he wants a divorce n is going to a madames house for s*x

from something the madme said n the state of the girl im thinking shes khushis look a like n shes drugged so she doesn't show any signs of digust or anything when he touches her

I think he still likes khushi in his own sick way but his greed for money n his rejection from khushi not loving him is making him go for divorce

I have bad feeling once khushi gets close to Arnav Shyam will try to use khushi n his kid to get money from Arnav since he doesn't have Anjali in this story it seems a good way for him to get what he wants including khushi

as for Arnav him not remembering khushi is not such a impossible thing his subconscious remembers but she didn't register enough on his radar for him then she was just a neusance who stood up to him n who he taught a lesson

it was always her eyes that caught his attention

now that she haunts his dreams shes a challenge n puzzle to be solved which will soon turn out to be a rubx cube which he will never get enough of

nice to see u made payal n Akaash meet I so liked how she wasn't all shy n quiet n gave him a piece of her mind

as for Ashu n Aayan how sweet they've already formed a bro sis bond

I cant wait to see what happens at the party n whats Arnavs reaction when he finally remembers khushi n realizes she wouldn't have met n married Shyam if it wasn't for his revenge

looking forward to lots of twists n surprises

u were right I do like to try to get into authors heads n predict whats comin next so let me know if im close

would love to keep reading so plz keep the pms comin my way

sending u buddy request now hope u accept


Wow heatsha...thats quite an analysis you have done there! Am impressed 😃
Have sent you a buddy request...do accept!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Its really a nice teaser
So Khushi is going to know Is Arnav Appu's mammu
Waiting for full update eagerly
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome Shalu, For the first time, I am seeing naughtiness in Khushi in this FF, Same old Sanka devi we all know and love. 


Jaldi update karo
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Posted: 9 years ago
simply amazing
loved itc
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Posted: 9 years ago

Dedicating this update to a dear friend- Princess Zahiraah. 

Princess, I know this is long pending dedication...but I was waiting for the right chapter...read on to know why!

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CHAPTER 9



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Your turn!

This update was so difficult to write...with all the family members sharing the space! And I also realized that we are reaching the fag end of this fiction...wait a minute! Did you really think so? You are not even close!! ðŸ˜†

Okay, so what do you think of this update? Please share your critique and feedback via comments if you want the next update soon!

Chapter 1 of The White Rainbow is UP!

Buddy me for PMs...

Adieu!

Edited by TwisterGirl - 7 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
story is too amazing... i so desperately wait for it..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Again arnav n khushi missed der meeting. Why did he take lavanya out.. waiting fr der date n shyams retrn..
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Posted: 9 years ago
nice update
thanx fr d pm dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
Lovely update... I am waiting for arnav n khushi face off...!!! Thanks for pm