Short Story - Dream a little dream [Last Chapter - P 34] - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
beautiful start
continue soon
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I want to read all your stories. Can you give me the link please. By the way amazing story
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congrats on the new story! Fab update! superbly written! Maan used 2 stay as a tenant wit the Handas! update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
I cannot only nod sagely and agree with Zarin(kaamchorni) and take a piggyback ride on her comment😆


As I was reading this dream all I could think to myself is 'how nostalgic'
Your dream has taken me far back to a past which might as well have been a dream
The glaze of time on the memories of yesteryear makes them seem as if it all happened to somebody else. Now reading this story throws many of those same memories into sharp relief.

If the past holds a stronger attraction then the present, time stands still even if the clock moves forward.
Such seems to be the case with Maan and Geet.

I am really really really looking forward to this story😃




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Posted: 9 years ago
new story👏
lovely start...geet having a secret crush on maan😃
update soon😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
Ms.Veil you know after reading your stories i feel like stealing your journal so that i can read anything and everything that you ve penned down but then what would i do with a journal without the one whose words create such effects
Is there a way that i can kidnap you???
But Princess september 's nightingale had stopped singing when it had been caged.
You ve a great control over writing to express so much in such afew words.
Keep writing!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
lovely part waiting 4 next n plz try to make a thread of all ur story really want to read ur all finished n on going storyEdited by Drashtilove - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
lovely update great start to an interesting ss update soon dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
Beautifully written 
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