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sory guys i want to update now but kya karu meri ghar ke saamne ka tranformer burn ho gaya hai aur mrnings se ghar me power nahi hai .. mobile and lapi dono bhi off hogaya hai.. so i need some time .as soon as power ccome i will update.

Originally posted by: ishani12

sory guys i want to update now but kya karu meri ghar ke saamne ka tranformer burn ho gaya hai aur mrnings se ghar me power nahi hai .. mobile and lapi dono bhi off hogaya hai.. so i need some time .as soon as power ccome i will update.

its OK ishu take your time
we wait for your updated

Swara when will You update mariee joint ssEdited by jiya007 - 9 years ago

Originally posted by: jiya007

Swara when will You update mariee joint ss

tomorrow morning jiya
muze vakt chahiye in maharathiyose match na sahi par unke pas puhachane ke liye   🤣

Originally posted by: swara2504

tomorrow morning jiya
muze vakt chahiye in maharathiyose match na sahi par unke pas puhachane ke liye   🤣

It's ok dear take ur time and even I also need time

Hi everyone so here is he names who are participating in this joint ff .
here is the order in which we are updating.tank u all for being part of it .
and readers please feel free to give feedbacks.
ishani12 (me)
...neha
swara2504
_TheBlackRose_
chahat4u
Cute_Kate
Aru18
mariee
zindgidilse
jiya007
mounishree (i knw di I nt asked u but I knw u will nt say no to me)
-AriaRai-




part 1:

IN PANCHGANI HOSTEL
kalpi:chill guys .u all behaving as I am going on some wanwas .u all also going ur home so me too .
ahil:but ur home is not like ours.u will get only hurt there.we cant see u hurt.
ahbi:ya he is right.y dont u stay with us in our home.
kalpi:oh my god .how many times should i say these idiots that kuch purani kam poora karna hai (I need to do some old work).
kabir:ahil , y u wasting ur energy.?? u know na she will do only that which comes in her mind. and y u worrying tht much she will be in mumbai and even we will be.
rachu:but kabir u know how her aai is. she will be hurt by her.
kalpi:oh my god... plz dnt make me weak now. we will go as per plan. u know na our main aim is to expose that kapoors .that prem kapoor who told me a theif I have to show him wt I am.that paki and neetu I have to show them the real place.
ahil:but u can do it by being a partner in our company na.y u want to hid it from all.
kalpi:ahil pls nt now. u knw na how my aai is.if she come to knw I am destroying paki family means she will nt let that to happen .so its my promise that till I say should nt say anyone that kj is me.
kalpi:k gov me a hug and meet u all in mumbai as kalpana jadhav.
all hug her and give leave to her and they went in car.

IN AMERICA
raghav:is all set to go mumbai.?
sammy:ya bro all set. just we need to go there.
raghav:mr.kapoor u r bad time starts now .the way u cheated my family I will make sure u get punishment for everything.
sammy thows a photo on desk
sammy:this is paki kapoor .only one weakness of mr.kapoor.
raghav:paki kapoor ur gone now.
sammy throws one more pic on desk
sammy:its kalpana jadhav.
raghav heart beats fast by listening by name.
raghav got up as he dnt wanna see pic.
raghav:then sammy wts next plan.
sammy:raghav I found that one company called AK2 Also behind that kapoors.so I think we need to join them.
raghav:sammy u firstvfindout wts their intention in destroying kapoors
lets the game of revange begins.

hush finally done .
I am done guys now its ur turn to give fedbacks.I knw thoda bakwas hai. par age mere pyare writters ise correct kar denge.




Edited by ishani12 - 9 years ago

ishu its so lovely update  update soon really nice story line

Nice start ishani! Raghav and AK2 ( reminds me of AK47😛) behind kapoors. Ab aega maja😆

brilliant start ishu
so kalpi is the partner of AK2 and raghav want to join him
nice update dear.
one one thing i like most kalpi all set with her paltan (abhi, ahil , kabir and racchu(? ) )🤣
wiating for next part