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Posted: 8 years ago
Oh my my ... This update is so in sync with what I had written !! Just the way I had imagined the story to be shaped in future (just that this case mein future ne kuch zyaada Hi time le liya 😛) ...or actually ...even better !!! 
I loved the way the chapter ended ...kalpi's determination & the slight wickedness (positive one ofcrs) was the highlight of this update !!!! 👏👏
Fab job ...😃


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Posted: 8 years ago
This content was originally posted by: _TheBlackRose_

Okay, I updated after a long time, but that doesn't mean I'll get only 2 likes and comments *pout*


Oh rosy ...its not the timing ka issue but the title that confuses ppl ...tell ishani to put in ur name & the date in the title..😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
This content was originally posted by: maarushkaa


Oh rosy ...its not the timing ka issue but the title that confuses ppl ...tell ishani to put in ur name & the date in the title..😊

I pmed her earlier... maybe she hasn't seen yet...
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Posted: 8 years ago
This content was originally posted by: maarushkaa

Oh my my ... This update is so in sync with what I had written !! Just the way I had imagined the story to be shaped in future (just that this case mein future ne kuch zyaada Hi time le liya 😛) ...or actually ...even better !!! 

I loved the way the chapter ended ...kalpi's determination & the slight wickedness (positive one ofcrs) was the highlight of this update !!!! 👏👏
Fab job ...😃


Kisne kiska mind read kiya 🤓 jisne bhi kiya ho, coincidence ho gya 😆
Thank u, thank u... the last part came to me suddenly... as both are oriented towards revenge right now, they'll have their own motive for even befriending each other (dil pe patthar rakhke hi sahi)...
Abt Raghav next person can see to that 😉 
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Posted: 8 years ago
all update is wonderful rose...
raghav moving toward chawl to see pakhi...
so he was going to appoint little kapoor
but best part is kalpi to joined for her advantage...
lovely...
hope we will get next part soon...
by the way who is next..
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome update
raghav want pakhi to join for his advantage and kalpi want to join for her own advantage.
wow both are going to play there own games  lets see what happen next.

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Posted: 8 years ago
usho tune update kab kiya.. Pata nahi chala.. PM to kerna tha na.. Chal koi na.. Acha hua meinei ye post open kiya aur tab pata chala u updated...

Btw Awesome chappy..
So kalpi will xcpt Job in Raghav's company.. Wow..
Eagerly waiting for nxt chappy..
Plzz..
Plzz..
Plzz...
Update nxt chappy..
Who is nxt writer for is FF..
Plz update.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Lovely update. Kalpi wants to use rags ar a pawn for her revenge game tats wonderful. Thanks for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
Fabulous update. 
Let's play revenge revenge 
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Posted: 8 years ago
Wonderful story with 4 brilliant chaps. All the 4 writers have done justice to a superb concept! Please DO CONTINUE WITH THE FF !!!! Thanks