ARAKSHI:MERE HUMDUM. (chap 5 updated, pg 10) - Page 2

Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by NATURESHIVANI


It's fantastic dear ...😳
Loved the characterisation os SAKSHI n arjun in a poetic way ðŸ˜ƒ
Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by NATURESHIVANI


Loved the characterisation os SAKSHI n arjun in a poetic way ðŸ˜ƒ
THANKS DEAR
Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by khanmisha28


THANKS DEAR
😳
Posted: 9 years ago
                        MERE HUMDUM

                                                     CHAPTER : 1 

A huge building and right at the door a  black car stops and watch man  run to open the car door.A  girl in mid twenties get down.

Girl :(before he say any thing)Ram Ram  kaka.Kese hain ap or ghar main sb theek.

Watch man: (Smilingly) Ram Ram bitiya.Kaka bhi ache hain or ghar main bhi sb theek  bs ap ki or  upar wale ki meherbani hai.

Girl :Nhi kaka  sirf  uperwale( GANNU JI) Ki.Ap per bhi or hum per bhi.

She then enters the office and greets every one with smile.
Girl : Good Morning.
Staff : Good Morning.

IN CABIN:
Girl : Neeraj(sec.) aj koi meeting line up hai.

Neeraj :Nhi koi meeting nhi hai aj maam kuch papers sign krne the ap ko.Or meeting coming Monday ko hai maam with Raheja's.

Girl : Hn mujhe yad hai do din pehle ek bar phir yaad dila dena.

Neeraj:  Ap aeingi maam  meeting se pehle. Nhi tum mujhe call kr dena.Wese koi problem hia mere ane se.

Neeraj: Nhi  nhi maam ap k ane se  kya problem ho skti hai.sb khush hi hote hain.ap itne ache se baat  krti hain sb se.Kam krna bhi bura nhi lagta.
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In ETF:                                
Shree and Chotu were watching movie Ayesha comes from behind them and touch their shoulders, they both scream outAyesha turns on the news where the reporter is criticizing the police again. Shree turns off the news in irritation. Then lights go off, Ayesha then tells them that there is crime journalist coming to cover ETF.

Chotu jokes about the appearance about the so called reporter on one side while on the other side a girl is shown entering the ETF office, totally opposite of what Chotu thinks what the reporter will look like.

Lights comeback  Chotu stares at the girl with an open mouth in shock. Shree, Chotu and Ayesha keep starring at the girl as she walks towards them. Girl introduces herself as Shakshi Anand.

Shree keeps staring at her, totally lost in her beauty and then when Ayesha calls out his name he comes out of his trance and stammers out his and Chotu's introduction. Liza enters the room just as Shakshi asks what Shree does and taunts Shree's computer skills. She does compliment Shree at the end though.

Liza introduces herself to Shakshi.

Shakshi tells she is happy to meet them all and can't wait to meet rest of the team. Aisha tells that the other members are Rathore and Arjun. Shakshi gets excited and says I have heard so much about Arjun Rawte and ask where his cabin is located.e Arjun inhis office in deep thought twirling his pen around his fingers. Shakshi extends her hand and says hi, Arjun checks her by running his eyes up and down, Shakshi introduces herself and says hi again, Arjun finally shakes her hand 

Arjun ask what she wants, Shakshi says I don't want anything but the home minister wants me to shadow you so that I can show the public what ETF does. Arjun calls her publicist Arjun then says we are not film stars we don't need media coverage, you are in a wrong place.

Shakshi nods her head then pulls out her phone and extends it to him and tells him to call the home minister and tell him this. Just then Rathore enters Arjun's cabin and says there is no need, DIG had called to tell him she was coming. This irritates Arjun.

Rathore introduces himself to Shakshi and mentions that she is a famous crime reported.Sakshi says it will be fun to work with you, Arjun immediately says who. Shakshi takes it as a joke and says she will take their leave now. 

A new case comes.A taxi driver dump a suitcase in an area.In the suitcase there was a dead body. Rathore puts Chotu on task of finding the taxi driver.

Meanwhile Arjun takes a closer look at the suitcase. Sakshi joins him. Arjun finds that bag is expensive.and sakshi says the same. Chotu and Ayesha arrives at the taxi driver's place where he and his wife are trying to leave. At the ETF office husband and wife is talking Rathore and Arjun. Taxi driver and his wife. Driver explains how he got the suitcase.

Outside the interrogation room, Sakshi asks Ayesha if there is been a missing persons report on a girl, Ayesha says no, Sakshi concludes that the girls parents must not be local. Ayesha is impressed by Sakshi's skill.

In the forensic lab, Liza tells them about what she found on the body and in the suitcase. Sakshi thinks it's a love bite, which brings smile to everyone's face except for the two ACP

Sakshi tries to lighten the mood by telling one of her past story and she irritates Arjun and they continue to discuss the case..

In the ETF car, Arjun, Rathore and Shakshi are together. Shakshi keeps looking at Arjun through the rearview mirror. Arjun notices and says what?

Shakshi says she was thinking about the case, she then moves forward and recaps the case, she then taps Arjun on the shoulder, which earns her a glare from Arjun and it amuses Rathore.

Arjun then says anything else, Shakshi says, don't you ever smile, ever since I met you, you are wearing a serious expression. Rathore has a hard time hiding his smile.
Shakshi then says at first you seemed khadoos to me but I see something else behind your serious face. Arjun looks at Shakshi in the rearview mirror with a surprised expression. They stare at each other for a moment and Arjun again says what? Shakshi says pain, leaving Arjun stunned and Rathore looking out the window.

Everyone leaves, except for Shakshi and Arjun. Shakshi says Amit looked so calm it didn't even seem as though he took a life. Arjun says the need for revenge is bigger than temper and pain and that can make person do anything. The need for revenge increases as the pain of loss increases. He surprises Shakshi. Arjun further says that until and unless the revenge is complete there is no peace.

Sakshi say, who know this better than you Arjun. Arjun walks away as Shakshi looks on.


Edited by khanmisha28 - 9 years ago
Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by skrafty


Nice update
Continue soon
 
thank you very much...
yes I will😊  
Edited by khanmisha28 - 9 years ago
Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by rajeeviansonai


mind blowing concept.
thank you very much.😊
Posted: 9 years ago
                         MERE HUMDUM

                                            CHAPTER 2

A new day a new case and Team ETF:

A girl was kidnapped and  parents were asked to pay ransom to see their girl again.At the victims house team reaches and asks about  details Arjun asks shree to take  and find number and address.They come back to ETF headquarter after assuring them that they will find their baby as soon as possible.

In Arjun's cabin:
Sakshi : Arjun ye lo tumhari chae.

Arjun : Hmm  (pointing towards the table) rakh do.

Sakshi : (mischievous glint and her smile was unnoticed by ARJUN as he was reading  information brought by Shree)Piyo to thandi ho jae gi.

He look at her and picks  cup and take a sip.His eyes shot open and  throw the cup in anger.
Arjun: ye kya hai Sakshi  bachpane ki bhi koi had hoti hai.ye ETF hai  yahan mentally matured log ate hain agar tumhara mental status yehi hai to tum jaa k school main nursery main  admission lo yahan ane ki zaroorat nhi hai.and storm out of the cabin.


In cafeteria:
 Shree:Ye sher ab kyun dhaar raha hai.Ab kya kiya  re sakshi.

SAkshi : main ne kya kiya.

Chotu: tera moun latka hua kyun hai tujhe kya hua.

Sakshi : sb na us Arjun ki waja se main to use hasana chahti thi bs isliye main ne us ki  chae main  namak mila diya or wo ulta mujh pe chillane laga.
Shree spits out  coffee.

Aisha : Chae  main namak.(Staring at her)

Chotu : BAS.

Shree : Sakshi dekh abhi bhi waqt hai baaz aja.kisi din na is sher k hathon na shaheed ho jae gi    tu.
Liza : oye mechanic  shubh shubh bolo.


After long investigation they find Arushi  and put culprits behind the bars.Their inhumanity was prominent on Arushi's face.They slap her when she cried.

 Arushi was in Sakshi's arms on the way to home.The case and the day was over and now Arushi is in deep slumber in her mothers embrace and moon was spreading all its light as if it is too very happy on her reunion with her  family.

                           Aa Gaya Hay Khasa Insan Men Haywaniyat Ka
                                                        Nikal Chuka Hay Janaza Insaniyat Ka

                          Kaleja Phat Jata Hay Zamen-O-Arsh Ka
                                                        Insan Be-His Dayhkta Hay Tamasha Insaniyat Ka

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Man : (phone was ringing) Ab is yamraj se kya boloon.

Otherside : mar gae the kya.ek bar main call uthaya kro.ek bat das bar nhi samjhaoon ga. kaam      hua.

Man:  Nhi sir main ne to de diya tha magar us bewaqoof larki ne kharab kr diya  warna...

Otherside : chup.bilkul chup.ek kam nhi hua tum se.agar  kam ki qeemat di hai to na hone ki le bhi  skta hoon wo bhi sood sameet.

Man. nhi sir ho jae ga ho jae ga kaam.



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Hall was decorated beautifully with fresh flowers  and fairy lights and many tables were arranged in rows.Many dishes are kept on table.Every nook and corner was scented  with fresh flower's fragnance.Neeraj was giving some last minute's instructions,and she was waiting for guests to  arrive.

   
                                         
Edited by khanmisha28 - 9 years ago
Posted: 9 years ago
Wonderful updates dear loved the cafeteria scene 
Continue soon 
Posted: 9 years ago
omg
cid me etf
interesting
arakshi kaha he
good start
continue soon

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