Zara,
First; Congratulations on the new thread! π
This was so heartbreaking update a number of reasons;
Mohini - mother's pain is huge when something like this happens to your child. For the first time I was truly sorry for her.
Sunheri - sad and desperate, probably ashamed of what she did. She must be feeling awful.
Aman - love of his life, Sunheri. He is worried over her, but he can't marry her. It is very reasonable considering how close he was with Paro. I can understand why Aman is angry with Rudra. Makes sense.
Two old friends - Aman & Rudra. This whole situation is unsustainable. It is sad that this seems to be the end of friendship... Loved that part!
But there is a one thing that I am glad; Aman & Paro spending time together. Maybe she starts remember something...
Complicated people, complicated love, complicated relationships... this story is everything that the original story was missing. Probably that is the reason why I like this so much. π
Amazing writing! Continue soon!!
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Edited by Fimiramak - 9 years ago
Zara,
First; Congratulations on
the new thread! πMany thanks :))
This was so heartbreaking update a number of reasons;
Mohini - mother's pain is huge when
something like this happens to your child. For the first time I was truly sorry
for her. Yep I'm glad I conveyed that mother's heart across, especially from the likes of Mohini.
Sunheri - sad and desperate,
probably ashamed of what she did. She must be feeling awful.Yep attempting suicide is a very very stupid thing to do, no matter what situation or hardships anyone has in life. Sunheri in the old show gave me that impression that she was fictionally a little more immature and irrational when it came to matters of the heart. The affair with Shantanu confirmed that and how she was willing to run away with him.
Aman - love of his life,
Sunheri. He is worried over her, but he can't marry her. It is very reasonable
considering how close he was with Paro. I can understand why Aman is angry with
Rudra. Makes sense. Thank you! I absolutely do a face palm when I write something and someone doesn't get what happened or understand what's going through someone's mind when I spell it out in the chapter. *hugs* thank you for saying it makes sense!π³
Two old friends - Aman &
Rudra. This whole situation is unsustainable. It is sad that this seems to be
the end of friendship... Loved that part! I agree. When I was writing this scene it felt the most real. Aman and Rudra's scenes weren't really developed on via the friendship route much by CV's but I honestly feel this scene would have been great to see.
But there is a one thing
that I am glad; Aman & Paro spending time together. Maybe she starts
remember something...You'll see
Complicated people,
complicated love, complicated relationships... this story is everything that the
original story was missing. Probably that is the reason why I like this so
much. π Yay! Thank you for keeping upπ. I sometimes feel it's too complicated but then again there's no fun if things were easy.π
Amazing writing! Continue
soon!! Will try many thanks for your constant support. π³*hugs*
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