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You know, I had this bookmarked and finally read all the chapters today.. My heart was literally pounding on the last part.. I was definitely not expecting this end; Khushi dying and Arnav going into shock.. But you can't possibly end there you know.. Even if Khushi is dead and Arnav's life is ruined, I still want the justice to prevail.. This story is not just about Arnav & Khushi is it.. There was crime.. There was murder.. Multiple now.. Hence you couldn't be leaving it where you left :)
I had imagined the DA had retrieved it before Arnav and would capture Aman & his cronies and Arnav & Khushi living happily ever after.. Alas.. I'm still reeling..
Anyways this was a fantastic SS and you are a charming story teller.. Even though you didn't mention the location, I had a feeling this story was set in California..
Please please write an epilogue.. I just want justice for Khushi's stupid & idiotic act or heroic may be as she had best intentions in mind and Arnav's helplessness despite his efforts to not put her in that situation..
Or can I ask you to write an alternate ending? HAPPY one?
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