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Solitary
You have shown beautifully the inner turmoil of three people who really need each other... My heart went out for ranjan in this chapter ... He is the one who has lost the most in the scandal he lost his wife(whom I feel he loved n respected a lot) and his kids...there is something that seems out of place in the scandal story... That's the power of your pen NISHA ... Once people. Start to feel for your character s that is the time you know that you are the BEST at what you are doing
Brew and burnout
Loved to see the interactions of the characters... She giving him the cold shoulder... Ranjan talking to ishita about the marriage proposal... I think he was reaching out to his son through II... As he said parents always think about the best interest of their children... Appa is also thinking about his kid... How can a parent think about marrying their kid in a family where women r not respected... But marrying her off to a family like MURTHY's is extreme...π
Strangers on a subway
Loved the way he was following her like a. Lost puppy... Talking nonstop just to make her talk... As if one look from her would warm him up... That was sooo romantic ... N I think ishita took the bait right.! Is there a confrontation before him going of to Dubai... Is she gonna drop his STUFF at MALCHA MARG?
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Phew this is the longest post ever for me ... Wrote one before it got deleted... Do reply if you have time... I know u r a busy girl... ;)
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