Originally posted by: IArmageddonI
Hola dear!
Liked what story behind your updates :) A sweet welcome back home is one of the effective remedies for any problem!
Right ..π
There were issues in the way the chapter was formatted, not just in style or anything but then you said you wrote from the mobile - I understand :)
Yes.. You are right .. writing from the mobile makes the work look haphazard.. but laptop is repaired just right now (wasn't working previously) so now i will use it effectively..
Just an advice, better to use your laptop or a device which comes out to be more comfortable for you, it reflects in the story otherwise.
Nonetheless, really loved the blossoming love between the leads, darn cute <3
I hope it will blossom more in the future tooπ
Ah, isn't there someone who always sniffs on the love before the main leads realise themselves! π
Yes true , it happens always ππ
By the way, edit your title so as to people can understand you have updated!
Done!
For the second half update, I really wish there was more of Aabha Anurag than Mr. Biryani.
I know .. when i wrote i felt that the biryani was becoming kabab mein haddi.. but i was too lazy to change it.. i will try best next time .. and will try not to be lazyπ
The spices did leave an effect on our leads π Also acted as an interrupter for the kiss π
Just a tip, if you want to show cooking romance, you really don't have to write so much about the dish. Honestly speaking :) Focus more on the characters and their simmering chemistry :)
Yes .. i will improve on it if i wrote cooking romance in the future..π
Btw, biryani made me hungry π π π
same here Chalo yaar, great update! Looking forward to what you write next!
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