Hum ne li hai... Shapath

FF : Unspoken :) Updated 29/10/15

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Posted: 9 years ago
Hello all .  I have turned the OS into an FF ..๐Ÿ˜ƒ


  PROLOGUE.
            
                                            UNSPOKEN...

Wind... A strong wind blew over the place. The night was dark with the street lamps flickering for no good reason or maybe there was a reason.The wind... 
The cold chilly winds would make one shudder and freeze at the same time. The wind made the trees sway and sway freely . The ruffling and shuffling sound of the trees would make one tremble in fear but there she walked in the middle of the road which was flanked by the trees. Not a tinge of fear or anxiety on her face, she walked wearing a white gown and her hair left open which came till her waist !! No care in the world , she walked and walked until a car came in front of her and went ahead passing through her.She didnt feel  pain , she felt nothing. She was Abha . Another wind blew in front of her which made her stop. No expression on her face , she stood there with her eyes closed as if absorbing the touch of the wind into her. From the wind he emerged . Anurag. He smiled at her.  She closed her eyes to absorb this moment. Her love , atlast was in front of her eyes . She was happy to reunite with him . What if they were not together in life, they are united after death . No one can separate them now , not life nor death . 
She stepped into the wind and they were gone in a second , to heaven where they would lead an immortal life , where the love and happiness would never be lost,  it would be immortal.   



i hope you liked it . ๐Ÿ˜ƒ 

Characters -

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Abha 
Anurag
Kavi
Kashish
Lara 
Ranveer
Aditya
Mayank
Param (a few appearances)

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PART 10 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/4289536?pn=11

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Posted: 9 years ago
II It's truly beautiful and wonderful dear! Short but extremely sweet. True at times one really doesn't need words to communicate - silence does it best. 

And yes, even I second the philosophy that love goes beyond death, after all aren't we all but a part of the energy, and according to the law of conservation of energy;

"Energy can neither be destroyed nor be created, it can be transferred from one form to another"

Beautiful shot Dinazz!

There are tiny little places where you can improve - as in making your sentences slightly longer with the help of conjunctions which makes the paragraph look less abrupt. :)

Beautiful again :) Keep writing such little pieces ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Love,

Anokhi Di โค๏ธ II

P.S : Yay, me first to comment! ๐Ÿฅณ
Edited by Armagadon - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing it's really beautifull it's short but really amazing 
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Posted: 9 years ago
Very beautiful dinaz

I cried when Anuraag died๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ

I loved the jodi of Abha n Anurag

U united them. I love u darling๐Ÿค—
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Posted: 9 years ago
so here i am . i thought of making the OS into a SS .
that was just the prologue(edited)
PART 1 

She walked towards the target stealthily,a gun in her hand taking measured steps ,she walked ahead.She heard footsteps behind her so she stopped and the footfall stopped in accord. She swirled and hit the man hard on his head with the butt of the gun and he fell unconscious. She walked ahead now at a fast pace but carefully. seeing her target near she smirked but he suddenly turned facing her while she in time hid behind a big pile of hay stack and kept a check on him from the corner of her eyes. She had to hurry now . As soon  as he returned to his former position she went behind him and shot him straight through his heart. the gun shot was silenced by a silencer. She did not know how many targets she had at hand before reaching the captive team. Yes, the team had been captured by a gang of drug peddlers whom they were in search of. They had tricked them and lured them by a drug and kept them in captivity.As she peeped into the door she could see her next target ,2 more goons and with them was the team huddled in a corner,tied up with ropes . She was low on time . a bomb was not gone unnoticed by her while coming it . It would blast anytime now. she had to either save her teams or die fighting. She barged in and took them by surprise . she shot one dead at the center of his eyes ,where his eyebrows met and the next one was dead scared to even move but she could not take chance . She punched him in the face and kicked him in his stomach and with that he lay on the ground flat. She hurriedly went towards the half conscious team ,freed them of the rope and directed them the way towards the exit.. Two minutes was left for the bomb to burst when all of a sudden she heard a shrill cry ,a cry of a child. she ran in not worrying for her life while the team was now almost conscious with all the moving around to leave the place and also passage of time . Time is the best healer ,you know!! 
She searched here and there and finally spotted the child . it was in a paper box. she carried the child carefully in her arms and all of a sudden crashing on the floor with a pair of arms catching her arms and pinning her down . her mind wondered what happened .. she felt uncomfortable and a number of thought ran through a brain . She shuffled but before she could express her discomfort he moved away and shot at a man behind him . all this happened in a span of 5 seconds . qiute fast , she thought. He came towards her and gave his hand as a gesture of help. She was lost in her own thoughts and did not see him wave his hand in front of his eyes. She was brought out by her thoughts when he clapped .. but realized in a spur of a second that there was a baby she had come to rescue and she fell a tug at her         tshirt and looked down at the child lying on her stomach and pulling her t shirt. she hugged the child and then she heard a voice . it said "jaldi chalo yaha se . yaha bomb hai jo kuch seconds mein phatega. jaldi chalo" realization dawned on her and she carefully held someone's bundle of joy and ran out of the place . Just as they stepped out, the bomb blast occured . She ducked down to to reduce the effect of the blast. with the bomb blast pacifying she got up and looked around to see the team safe and smiling at her at her victory but did not find him. Who was he ? where did he go ? she did not know... 

Things blanked around her. She felt withdrawn.She felt as if she was captured in a circulatory motion of the wind. She felt sucked into something ,the power of suction . She felt her body tremble and twist. She felt and saw herself being sucked into a light , a strong silvery-white light . She was going ,going and gone into it. 
She came out of her dream ,her heart thudding in her chest ,so loud that if she was in a still,quiet room her heartbeats would be heard clearly. she was panting and trying to catch breath when the nurse came in and put on the oxygen mask to let her breath just right .. 

done ...
hows it ??
Edited by dinazz - 8 years ago
Laadifan12 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing amazing amazing 
Really really really good
Loved it 
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Posted: 9 years ago
U pictured it very nicely dinazz

Mujhe laga jaise main actual main shapath ki episode dekhrahi hoon

Abha ka goons ke peeche jaana, jaan ke parva kiye bina bacche ko bachane jaana everything

And tht mystery man who just vanished after helping Abha who was he?
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Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by: Laadifan12

Amazing amazing amazing 

Really really really good
Loved it 

Thank you ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by: Nethravathi

U pictured it very nicely dinazz

Mujhe laga jaise main actual main shapath ki episode dekhrahi hoon

Abha ka goons ke peeche jaana, jaan ke parva kiye bina bacche ko bachane jaana everything

And tht mystery man who just vanished after helping Abha who was he?

Thank you ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
mystery man .. keep guessing๐Ÿ˜‰
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Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by: dinazz


Thank you๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
mystery man .. keep guessing๐Ÿ˜‰

Ok darling I'll keep guessing ๐Ÿ˜ƒ