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THAT ONE CRASH~~THREAD 2~~ part 40 updated

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THREAD 2

thank u soo much guys,without ur overwhelming comments and strong support i won't be able to reach this much,i really thankful to all who read my ffs and appreciate it,i love IF a lot and i find it to be another family of mine and only i know how i retained myself from coming here during exams,and its all because of u guys,the love u guys shower on me is amazing

AND YEAH SILENT READERS,DO COMMENT TO SHOW ME THAT U GUYS R WITH ME...❀️❀️


thank u soo much guys

love u all soo damn much

pariπŸ€—


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INDEX

part 1 to 17-thread 1
part 18-scroll down
part 19-page 8
part 20-page 13
part 21-page 19
part 22-page 25
part 23-page 34
part 24-page 40
part 25-page45
part 26-page 50
part 27-page 55
part 28-page 63
part 29-page 69
part 30-page 75
part 31-page 80
part 32-page 85
part 33-page 88
part 34-page 92
part 35-page 98
part 36-page 101
part 37-page 104
part 38-page 105
part 39-page 106
part 40-page 107
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Part 18

Sanyu-kaka mein ghar wapis jaa rahi hoon,dad ne bulaya hai...

Now rd's expression changed from confusion to shock then he again becomes expressionless

Kaka-lekin beta abhi to sirf 1 mahina hua hai to phir abhi kyu jaa rahi ho

Without allowing sanyu to say anything rd says

Rd-ok

Saying so he goes to his room and comes after 10 mins wearing a jeans,white t shirt and

A black jacket,he goes near sanyu and slides his hand again under her and lifts her

And takes her to his room,he was not looking at her and sanyu was confused at

his behaviour and his face was as always emotionless...a gasp escapes her

Mouth when he lowers her on his bed 

Sanyu-sir mein apne bed pe...

She was cut off by his cold voice

Rd-soo jana,abhi chup chap yahi pe raho aur u wanna go home,right?

Sanyu nods

Rd-give me ur phone

Sanyu-huh?

Rd-i said give me ur phone,i wanna talk to ur father

Sanyu[shouts]-kyuuu?

Rd glares at her

Sanyu-ammm mera matlab app kyu baat karna chahte hai

Rd moves towards her and bends and comes near her face

Rd-do u think u can fool me miss aggarwal

Sanyu[confused]-huh?

Rd-tumhare dad ne wapis nahi bulaya na?

On hearing his statement her eyes widens in shock and he brings his face more 

Near to her face

Rd-i m right,isn't it miss aggarwal

Without thinking she nods absent mindedly and rd smirks

Sanyu[coming to senses]-nooo

Rd-no use miss aggarwal

Saying so he withdraws his face and continuous

Rd-so just stay here and have rest no need to come to the sets for 3 days but after 

That i wanna see u at the right time,did u get me?

Sanyu[not meeting his eyes]-i m not coming

Rd-i don't like to repeat myself

Sanyu-me too

Rd-fine,i m sorry

Sanyu-on one condition

Rd-what?

Sanyu-i want my three wishes granted without u grumping

Rd- who do u think i m miss aggarwal,a jin to grant u three wishes

Sanyu- fine thn i will go back and arpi will be angry with u[she shows her tounge]

Rd[clenching his teeth]-fine,what r the wishes

Sanyu-so u r granting me three wishes right?

Rd nods

Sanyu-ok,time ane par pooch loongi

Rd without saying anything goes from there and sanyu rests her head on his pillow

And it was filled with his scent which was very enticing to her and she unknowingly

Smiles thinking how much he loves arpi and for her he even apologized to her

Then her mind drifts to the reason why all this happened

Sanyu[looking at the ceiling]-hmmm,sir harsh uncle se intni nafrat kyu

                           Karte hai,kuch to karna padea

Thinking for some remedy she drifts off to sleep absorbing his tantalizing scent

After 3 hours

She slowly tries to open her eyes on realizing a sensation on her leg and 

Finally when she opens her eyes she finds kaka undressing her wound and she 

Sits on the bed with a jolt and withdraws her leg from his hands

Sanyu-kaka yeh app kya kar rahe hai

Kaka[smiling]-beta meine socha ki yeah bandage badal deta hoon

Sanyu[smiling]-thank u kaka,lekin mein kar loongi,app yeh sab mujhe de dijiye

Kaka-lekin beta

Sanyu-offo kaka,dijiye na

Defeated kaka hands over the bandage and all necessary things to sanyu and

Was going to the door and on reahing the door,he turns and says

Kaka-beta mujhe yeh jankar bohot khushi hui ki app yaha aur rukoge

     Aur thank u beta bade sahab ke liya itna kuch karne ke liye

Sanyu just smiles and kaka reaches for the door knob when she calls kaka

Sanyu-kaka

Kaka-ji beta

Sanyu[biting her lower lip]-ammm,kaka,sir harsh uncle se itna gussa kyu rehte hai

Kaka just stands there without answering and sanyu gets tensed

Sanyu-its ok kaka agar app batana nahi chahte mein bura nahi manoongi[smiling]

Hearing that kaka comes towards her smiling and sits on the chair near the bed

Kaka-apko pata hai beta zindagi mein pehli baar rd baba aur bade sahab ne kisis aur

     Ke liye ladayi ki,apko pata hai bachpan se rd baba aise bade hue hai jaise

     Puri duniya unki dushman hai

Sanyu nods

Kaka-apko pata hai jab rd baba ko pata chala ki unki behen iss duniya mein

      Ane wali hai tab woh zindagi mein pehli baar khushi se phoole nahi

      Samaye the,bade sahab aur mem sahab se zyada toh woh khush the

      Aur jab arpita bitiya aayi toh unhone school jane se bhi mana kardiya

      Bolne lage ki woh apni behen ke saath rahenge[hearing that sanyu smiles]

      Lekin ghar mein jhagde khatam hi nahi hote the,har din jhagde hamesha

      Maar peet,rd beta apni maa baap ko ladte dekh woh bohot rote the,lekin

      Jab arpita beti badi hone lagi to woh unko rota dekh khud rone lagjati thi

      To unhone unke samne rona bhi band kar diya

Sanyu-lekin kaka sir ki mom

Kaka-apne renuka sanyal ka naam suna hoga

Sanyu[shocked]-ji...woh sir ki mom hai,lekin unhone to...

Kaka-dusri shaadi kar li

Sanyu nods

Kaka-aur rd baba apne ghar ke tootne ka zimedar bade sahab aur unki sharab ko

     Mante hai,lekin beta unko yeh pata nahi hai ki bade sahab apna dukh uss

     Sharab ke peeche chupate hai,apko pata hai unko machino se bada pyaar tha

     Aur mem sahab hamesha unse bolti thi ki woh bade hoke unhe mechanical

     Engineer banaegi...lekin jab woh bade hue to unko machino aur apne maa

     Baap se hi nafrat ho gayi...woh duniya ko dikhate nahi hai

     Lekin woh andar se toot chuke hai,unhe meine doosri baar khush hote tab dekha 

     jab parth baba aur arpita bitiya ne shaadi ki aur ab to woh iss baat se khush  

Hai ki woh mama banne jaa rahe hai,unki zindagi mein sirf gini chuni khushiyaan 

hi hai aur woh sab sirf arpita bitiya se judi hai,unki duniya hai arpita bitiya

Sanyu was hearing everything quietly,resting her chin on her left knee and

Arms circled around that folded leg and a tear drop involuntarily falls onto

Her knee and she rubs it

Kaka-beta agar gusse mein unhone kuch galat bol diya ya kar diya ho to maaf karde unhe

     Woh apna dukh uss gusse ke peeche chupane ki koshish karte hai

Sanyu-lekin kaka parishaniyon se bhagna to koi solution nahi hai na

Kaka-unhe bhi pata hai ki yeh koi solution nahi hai lekin bachpan se jo unhone

      Dekha hai woh ladte ladte thak chuke hai,apko yaad hai pehle din

      Jab appne baba ka bed theek kiya tha to apne mujhse poocha tha ki 

      Woh pillow geela kyu tha

Sanyu nods

Sanyu-haan kaka,phir doosre din bhi woh geela tha,woh roz geela hota hai

Kaka[smiling sadly]-woh baba bohot roote hai aur apne pillow ko apna sahara

                  Bana rakha hai,unko lagta hai kisi ko pata nahi aur mein bhi

                  Nahi jatata ki mujhe pata hai,mujhe nahi pata beta baba ki

                  Zindagi kab badlegi,kab unki zindagi mein inn dukho ke alawa

                  Khushiyaan bhi hongi

Sanyu-hongi kaka zaroor hongi,sir bohot acche hai aur acche logo ke saath

      Bhagwaan hamesha acch hi karte hai[smiles]

Kaka returns the smile

Sanyu-waise kaka,sir abhi gaye kaha hai 

Kaka-woh pata nahi,bola koy script sunne gaye hai

Sanyu-accha

Kaka-beta khana laga doon

Sanyu-nahi kaka,bhook nahi hai

Kaka-thoda khalo.diwayi khani hai na

Sanyu[smiles]-ji kaka,lekin sir nahi aenge

Kaka-pata nahi beta kab aenge

Sanyu-mein unke ane ke baad khaalongi

Kaka-lekin beta

Sanyu-pls kaka

Kaka just smiles and goes out and sanyu undresses her wound and dips a cotton

Ball in dettol and starts blowing air to the wound without placing it on the wound

She closes her eyes and was proceeding towards her wound with the cotton ball

But before it touches her wound she cries and thats when someone says

S-yaar very courageous haan

She lifts her face only t find rd leaning on the door with hands folded in front of his chest

And smirking but now for sanyu this smirk was no more annoying...

YOHOOO,I M BACK GUYSπŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†,KAISA THA...ACCHA LAGA KYA?

PLS DO TELL ME,WAITING EAGERLY😊😊😊


guys i,ve PMed everyone on my buddylist,i m sorry if anyone didn,t get the pm,it might be because their inbox is full😊

 

Edited by pari1995 - 9 years ago
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Lovely update
Congratz for 2nd thread
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Congo shongo yr for new thread
Party tym



U truly deserves


The update was superb
I so luved it yr


Rd so very well knows sanyu
He ordered sanyu to stay
Bt sanyu b kam ni h

Usne three wishes ki condition rkh di


Kaka told everything abut rd past

Feeling very bad for rd
He suffered so much

He hides his pain behind his anger n ego

He luvs arpi so much


Kaka wish to see rd will be soon granted
Sanyu will make everything perfect


Sanyu is so kiddish


Cnt wait for next
Update soon


Luv u
Keep smiling
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Congo shongo pari ji 4 new dhaaga...lol...thread ...
and
awesome update ji ...
keep smiling ji ..
update soonish ji:)))
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lovely update
thanx for the PM
glad to that now sanyu knws everything about rd and will help him to get out of his past

keep writing 
will keep appreciating itπŸ‘ as u deserve it.
waiting for the next update nowπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ can't have enough for itπŸ˜‰πŸ˜†

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Firstly bada wala congratulations to u dear !!πŸ‘πŸ˜ƒ
now coming back to ur update I hv only one word to say and that is 
awesome!!
really gud job dear keep it up!!πŸ‘
and thanks for the pm !!πŸ˜›
one more thing plzz update soonπŸ˜†πŸ˜Š

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Posted: 9 years ago
its a mind blowing ff.
i vry much like it .
😊
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Congratulations hai celebrations lalalaalalaa πŸ˜ƒ
Hello pari ji congos shongoss thread 2 ha good going yaar chalo ab pizza party but dont forget chocolates
warnaaa 😑
bomb se uda dungi bomb se uda dungi bomb se uda dungi πŸ˜†
coming to update yaar maar daala kttl kar ditta tune aaj mera
πŸ˜†
bata nhi sakti kitne time se moi is update ka wait kar rahi thi
Ki kab sanyu ko rd k baare me sab pata chale
N finally *phew* it happened now i can sigh in relief
Last update me to moi shock me chali gayi sanyu goin
Frankly moi ko koi tension nhi hui cuz i knew rd wont let her though iss tensed situation me bhi ma mind was going all mad moi was expecting some paagalpanti frm rd's side but i forgot its rd i m talking rd is like antonym of fun
wht to do me n ma paagalpantis ahhh chuck it
Whoa rd the genious he knew sanyu is lying
😳 πŸ˜›
Wooow he let her sleep on his bed
n sanyu ka heart bhi singing *kuchh kuchh hota hai*
😳 πŸ˜†
he is doing this out of guilt i guess thats sad πŸ₯±
but he cares for her all his gestures proves it hai na
finally truth is out i was waiting for it sooo desperately 😊
Sanyu sad for rd but she covered it
now sanyu is determined to make rd happy go for it gal n rd beware of sanyu
i loved the part when sanyu threatens rd saying she will go back
n then her three conditions now i m curious wht r they 😲
pariii 😑 kya yaaar curiosity k maare moi ki band baj jaaegi update soon yaar
rd k past k baare me sunk moi too sad ho gayi 😭
Cuz of his parents he hates machines
arpita is the only source of happiness in his life 😊
luved the bonding u showed bw them in their childhood
But now sanyu is in his life like a sunshine to brighten it
πŸ˜ƒ 😊
Ahaaa she wont eat without rd something something is going onn i can feel it πŸ˜†
And the ending our tom n jerry are back in action

wooow yaar mera comment tere update ko v peeche chhod sakta
*pats ma back* i m proud of u priths
now pritha the shaayar is here to present u the honour of reading ma shaayaris
irshhaad irshhaad
ahem ahem
"Hum readers se tum writers comments ki demand karte ho like hell
hum readers se tum writers comments ki demand karte ho like hell
jaante bhi ho mehengaai ka zamaana h behen n comments are not in sale "
*Not applicable for me*
πŸ˜†
*sees u with a gun*
"U- prithaaa aaj moi tujhe zinda nhi chjodungi ab tu dobaara se poetry ka murder karne k liye bachegi nhi
*runs to save ma life*
UPDATISHHH SOOONISHHH WARNA AAPKE FF ME HONGI POEMS KI BAARISHH