Virika OS Collection *new* upd on pg 9 - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
Thanks for the update
U loved the Os
Very touching
Loved the way of describing jeevika's character
Great
Continue soon ๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing os
Loved virika so much <3
I just really love it...How they waiting for each other after 2 years...True Love
Fantastic
Thanks for the pm :)
Looking forward to read some amazing os in your next update :))
Update soon :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing OS...!!
Looking forward for the next one...!๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Such a sweet OS!
I loved how you put in the condition
it shows how virika could wait for each other forever
you portrayed the characters really well :)
Can't wait to read more!!
Update soon!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
res ๐Ÿ˜Š
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honestly speaking i have read this OS already before!!
and let me tell you though the name was not viren & jeevika i had thought them as viren and jeevika๐Ÿ˜Š
but but but... i read this OS again๐Ÿ˜ณ
because koi virika pe OS ho aur mai na pdhuin no way! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜†
i love this OS so much!
from viren fallinf love in first sight
to how he supported jeevika!
and i love this man ๐Ÿค—
mujhe bhi viren chahiye โ˜บ๏ธ
i love jeevika too here
the innocence ,shyness everything โค๏ธ
loved it 
do update next one soon๐Ÿ˜Š
i cant wait now๐Ÿ˜›
and you both should update one bonus too as iyou posted very late๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
Edited by sweet_aayushi - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome os... love it... I love the way viren fulfill jeevs wish,the way viren kiss her,the way viren signal manvi not to came with them,the way jeevs confess her love everything just awesome... last part was sooo sweet.. all in all love it :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb update! !!! Loved each and every part of it!!!plzz continue soon! !!n thnkzz for the pm! !!!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Eeekkksss
This OS is tooo good. And Kinda very different also.
You Guys Rock .
What an update , Clearly , You guys are Superb in everyway.

Woahhh , Black Anarkali , wowww , Virika's first meeting was quite different and I loved it.

Each and Every word , phrase , Moment was so lively , every thing seemed so real , I was totally engrossed in while reading.

True love never dies , they waited for two years , without any contact..This one was splendid.

You both are doing fabulous Job.
Thankyou so much for this OS.

Thanks a lot for the Pm.
Continue soon.
Love You

- Riyu
Edited by riyakryan - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
REs
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Awesome update
Love you behna's
So awesome OS
Loved the concept
This viren was quite different from the other stories and jeevs too...๐Ÿ˜ƒ
The sacrifice virika did was ๐Ÿ‘
I too want a lover like viren who can wait till his last breath๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜‰
Totally superb
Continue soon with loads of long OS ๐Ÿ˜†
Edited by MyKryan - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow!!! totally exceptional OS hai yar.
enjoyed it so much.
keep writing yar.mwahhh