Loved it Rimi
Awesome update dear but after a long time
But I will not complain I know the reason
Well now coming to update ****
I just loved the bond between Sameer & Miss Desilva like a true mother & son
It was really painful for Sameer handling all this
But finally he managed to got out of it
his thoughts & his fears all were written nicely
also they were genuine too as Sameer was at fault
his nostalgic self in the journey was also nicely written
Finally he reached home which was lost now
Arjun too missed his fired & drooped his wedding invite too
loo aate hi Arjun ne joote se swagat kiya 😆
goos he deserves it ... but I loved Samjun here true friends
Sameer parents were really Happy to see him back
even aisha parents were also Happy
now it was the most toough task .. AISHA
but his absence & this seration had made her waek too..
Thankfully Aisha understood everything
Finally Arjun & Aiya and also SASHA got their HOME
Really an emotional story Rimi with a positive end
& your layered writting made it more beautiful
Expression of emotions were perfect & beautiful
Thanks for the PM
& Keep writing 😊
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