Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee

MG SS:Salaam e Ishq#2 *|| Part 57 @ Page 141 ||* 27-Sep-2020 - Page 54

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hope you are fine ..well its raining like heel here in my city and so I couldn't go to my office today and here is ur update consider this as an eid gift from my side ðŸ˜³ðŸ˜³

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MG SS Salaam e Ishq


Part 32


maan walked out of the shower drying his hair when he heard someone call his name ..

kahan khoyee hu maan ..??

maan stared at his own reflection and walked out not bothering to answer the questions only to see the same reflection in the mirror 

kya baat hai maan sab theek hone ke baad bhi itne pareshaaan kyun ho ??

maan tunred to see his own image in the mirror staring at him with a smile and talking to him ..

tum phir ..

mien tu tumhara hi hissa hoon maan ..tum dadi maa ke sawaalon aur geet ki nazroon se bhaag sakte ho mujh se nahi ...

han bhaag raha hoon mien ..bhaag raha hoon geet se kyun ke ...kyun ke jis tarha dekhti hai na mujhe wohh.. darr lagta hai mujhe 
uski ankhoon m jo pyaar hai ...jo dard hai nahi dekh sakta mien ...usko takleef di mene itna dard diya ..aaj bhi ...aaj bhi chehre par dekh raha tha mien deserve nahi karta ...nahi deserve karta mien ke geet jaisi lakri mujse pyaar kare ...meri zindagi mien shamil hukar sirf takleef milegi usko sirf takleef ...

5 saal se tum usko khud se door karne ki kushish ki par kiya aisa hua ..?? tum maan kyun nahi lete ke geet k bina tum nahi reh sakte ...

Yeh sab tumhaari galti hai ...pata nahi kiya kiya bolwa diya geet k saamne ..

Mene nahi maan tum ne kaha wahi kaha jo tumhaare dil m tha 

U know what mien soone jaa raha hoon tum bolte raho jo bolna hai ...

**^^**

Geet entered the corridor towards the girls' room and heard the girl whispering ..

Yeh tu kya keh rahi hai sonia ?? pari ma'am and veer sir wohh dono tu humesha larte hi rehte thay ...

Rehne de mene khud kal sona tha veer sir ne pari ma'am ko I luv u bola ..

Phir ...

Phir kya DD aagaye and he sent us all away from the love birds ..obviously pari ma'am would have said yes ...growth and success ka iss se acha chance aur kya milega unko ..

What are u talking ..

Wahi jo sach hai this is corporate world meri jaan aur success ke liye log kuch bhi karte hain ...pyar bhi ..

KYA HURAHA HAI YAHAN PE ...😡

Geet ma'am aap ..

Iss liye aate hain aap dono yahan ...aap dono se character certificate manga kis ne hai pari aur veer ka ..

Ma'am hum tu bas ..//

Hum tu bas kya ..?? ek aur baar mene tum dono ko yeh fazool batien karte huye dekha tu seedha HR mien jaakar complaint kardungi aur phir discipliniary actions ke tyaar rehna tum dono 

Nahi ma'am hum tu ..//

BAS ...ek aur lafz nahi jao apne apne station par aur kaam karo ..chalo jao yahan  se abhi ...

Both the girls left seeing the feisty angry side of geet and geet exhaled trying to shake off her anger when her eyes met they 2 misty brown ones standing across the corridor ...

Kis kis ko rokogi geet ...aur kab tak ..jo tamasha ban'na tha wohh tu bangaya mera kal hi ..

Pari ...//

But she left towards the girls' room and geet followed her in there only to see her crying in front of the mirror ..

Pari kya kar rahi ho yeh tum ...aur itni kamzoor kab se hugayi tum ..tum tu humesha mujhe himmat deti thi ..aur aaj tum hi ...///

Tu aur kya karoon geet ..suna na tum ne ...poora office aaj yeh hi baat kar raha hai ..

Suna mene ...bura laga mujhe bhi but pari tumhare khamoosh rehne se yeh log chup nahi hujayenge inko chup karana parega .. kahin aisa tu nahi hai k yeh log kya sochenge iss hi liye tum ne kal veer ko koi jawaab nahi diya ..

Geet please ..//

I am sorry shayad mujhe yeh sawaal karna ka haq nahi hai ..but pari tum meri dost ho aur apne kisi bhi dost aise takleef mien nahi dekhna chahti mien job hi hai tumhare mann mein ...please share karo use husakta h tumhara mann halka hujaye I promise mien tumhain judge nahi karungi ...

Pari looked at the girl standing there utmost concern in her words melting her heart ..she stepped forward and hugged her ...

Mujhe buhat darr lag raha hai geet ..papa ke jaane k baad buhat mushkil se mene yeh life achieve ki hai ...mien isko spoil nahi hune dena chahti ...kal veer ne itne achanak itni baari baat kehdi ..mujhe tu kuch samajh hi nahi aaya ..sab log pata nahi kya kya soch rahe hain mere bare m... veer ke bare mien ...yeh sab ..///

Geet held her in a friendly embrace speaking softly to calm her panicking self ..

Pari mien samajhti hoon pari tumhaare darr ko ..par pari log kya sochte hain iss se farq nahi parta ...farq iss baat se parta hai k tum kya sochti ho ...

She parted and held her shoulders looking straight into her eyes ...

Tum btao mujhe kyat um veer se pyar karti ho ..

Geet ..//

Nahi pari yeh mat socho ke log bahar kya keh rahe hain ...sirf iss sawaal ka jawaab do ...tum pareshaan kyun ho ..?? veer ne tumhare saamne apni feelings confess ki hain now either u love him or u don't ..yeh saari situation tumhaare ek jawaab se solve hujayegi ...tu bolo kya jawaab hai tumhara ...

Pari stood there still thinking of all the events since last 24 hours and the 4 years before that with veer ..how he had always been irritating her ..how he always flirt with other girls ..his annoying ways of solving things ..everything 

Mujhe nahi pata ..aur meri kya baat kar rahi ho tum ..veer se pocha tum ne ..tumhain pata hai na wohh kaisa hai ...2 din rok jao kisi aur ko I luv u bol rha huga wohh dekh lena ...I can't love him ..infact I don't love him ..har larki k saath flirt karta ,..har jaga center of attention banta hai ...koi sense of responsibility hai uss me ..mujhe sochna hi nahi iss bare mien ..tu bhi mat soch samjhi ..

She left from there while geet stood there smiling ...

Pyaar tu tum karti ho uss se pari ..tumhari chuki wohi nazrien iss baat ki gawah hain aur mien tumhari zubaan se yeh bolwa ke hi rahoongi ..😉😃😃

**^^**

Geet was working on a file along with pari when adi entered in her cabin ..

Geet tumhare pas veer ke ghar ka number hai ..??

Han landline number huga mere mobile m but aapko kyun hahiye adi sir ..?

Arre woh veer se kuch kaam tha uska mobile switch off aaraha hai ..

Ohh wohh .. koi faida nahi hai aap kal call karlieyega lag jayega ..

Mien samjha nahi ..

Adi sir veer wapis london chalagaya hai ..

geet glanced at pari from the corner of her eyes and as expected she had stopped working listening to her only ..

What !! but uska trip tu 3 din ka tha na ..

Tha tu but wohh 2 ghante baad ki flight se jaaraha hai tu airport p huga abhi iss hi liye uska phone switch off aaraha hai ...

Oh I understand kal jo hua ...//

Geet mujhe kuch kaam hai mien baaqi ka design finish kar ke tumhaare paas aati hoon ..

Hmm sure ...

Pari left and geet noticed maan standing by the door of her cabin and she stood up shocked hoping maan won't say anything to he rin front of pari ..

Maan sir aap ...

Kyun adi mein yahan nahi asakta ...

Ehe hehee hee he ... aap bhi kya ..mien aata hoon geet ..aata hoon abhi ..

Geet(st): yeh adi sir bhi na bachane ki time par sher ke saamne akela chor kar chale gaye ..dekhlungi inko tu ..par abhi dusht danav ko kya boloon ...

Tu geet ...veer London jaa raha hai ..?? mujhe tu pata hi nahi tha ..

Umm wohh maan sir wohh kya hai na ke woh ...

Maan entered and stood infront of her looking straight at her while she kept looking else where ...

Geet meri taraf dekho ...

Maan sir ..

Mene klaha meri taraf dekho ..

And she glanced up apprehensively like a 5 years old caught stealing the cookies from the jar ..maan almost smiled at her puppy face expression but then controlled himself ..

Kya hu raha yeh ..??

Maan sir wohh mien ..

Geet mujhe dekh raha hai tum kya karne ki kushish kar rahi ho but hum kisi ko force nahi kar sakte kisi se pyar karne par ...veer understands that and tumhain bhi ...//

Maan sir aapko yaad hai aapne kaha tha u trust me ..

Yaad hai but ..//

Trust m ifs and buts nahi hute ...aap mujh trust karte hain ya nahi ..

han par ..//

tu bas please iss baar mera saath de dijeye .. please sir 

Geet baat sonu meri ... yeh jo tum kar rahi ho yeh sahi nahi hai ..unn dono ko apne decision khud lene chahiye ..

Mana sir decision unka hi huga mien bas ek try kar rhai hoon pari ko uske feelings samjhane ki ...dekhiye agar yeh plan fail hua na tu I promise mien iske baad kuch nahi karungi but please abhi mera saath de dijeye please maan sir ek baar ...

Geet looked at him with so much hope he could hardly say anything ..


Usne manga itne pyar se pehli dafa 
Kehti jo agar
kardeta aaj woh khud ko bhi fanaa ðŸ˜³
(verses by me please don't copy it without permi)

bolo kya karna hai ...

geet smiled that dazzling 100 volt smile thankful for his support ..

thank you ..thank you so much maan sir ..so plan yeh hai ...


**^^**

An hour after that ..

Maan sir aapne bolaya mujhe ..

Han pari betho mujhe geet aur tumhare kuch project ke bare me baar karni thi..

G bataiye sir ..

But before maan could continue romeo entered the cabin stroming in without even knocking ..

Remeo yeh kya tarika hai ..

Maan sir ...maan sir aapne ..aapne news dekhi ..

Mein yahan kaam kar raha hoon romeo TV dekhne office nahi aata ..

Sir ...sir news mien aaya hai ke airport par London jaane wala plan take off ke waqt crash hua hai n kuch passengers seriously injured hain ...

Pari; WHAT ...afternoon flight m tu veer London jaaraha tha na ..geet tum ne yehh hi kaha tha na Adi sir se veer London iss hi flight mien tu ..
Oh my god ..

Maan sir humien jaana chahiye veer ke bare mien pata karne airport ..

Han ek kaam karte hain abhi chalet hain geet chalo nikalte hain abhiu ..

Mien bhi chalungi ..

Pari tum ..
Geet please ...maan sir please mien bhi aap logoon k saath chalungi ..

Theek h chalo nikalte hain ..

**^^**
While geet was chewing on her nails in the lift and maan was wondering if he did the right thing by agreeing to this stupid filmy plan of geets' pari was continuously blaming herself ..

Mene itna sab bura kaha usko ..nahi bolna chahiye tha mujhe ..pata nahi kya soch rahi thi ..geet wohh theek tu huga na ..

Han pari tension mat lo wohh theek hai ..

Maan glared at her and she realized what she said ...

I mean I am sure wohh theek huga ...tum tum tension kyun le rahi ho itni ... hum jaa rahe hai na ...

Yeh lift itni slow kyun chal rahi hai ...

10 floor se neeche jaa rahe hain pari ..

Pari looked away irritated while maan shook his head wondering what was he even thinking agreeing to help her in this ...

And just as the lift opened pari ran outside only to see veer entering in the parking area ...seeing him she went towards him crying ..

Veer kahan chale gaye thay tum ...mene kuch keh diya iska matlab hai hum sab ko  chor k chale jaoge tum ..han bolo ..

She pushed him back with her hands ,still crying ..

Samajhte kya hu tum apne aapko ...agar kuch hujata tumhain tu ...socha humara kya huta ...

Kya huta pari ..kyun farq parta tumhain ..u don't even love me do u ..??

Han karti hoon tum se pyar ..but tumhain kya ..tum tu jaa rahe thay na ..tum ne ek baar bhi anhi socha tum chale jaoge tu mera kya huga ...

Kya huga ...kya huta agar mien humesha k liye chala jata ..

Mar jaati mien ...tumhain kuch hujata tu mar jaati mien veer .. 

Veer kept on looking at the crazy girl who was hitting him with her fragile fist shoving him back .. declaring her love in most absurd kind of a way ..pounding his fist on his chest ..

U moron ..idiot ..stupid samajhte kya hu tum apne aap ko ...mien tumhain ..

Veer held her wrists and jerked forward hugging her tight in his embrace smiling through tears with her ..holding he rin his embrace whiel maaneet stood at a distance smiling seeing them ..

Pari still hit him on his back crying in his embrace ...

I hate you ...I hate you veer khurana ..

Veer smiled parting and held her face in his palms leaning his forehead on hers' ..

But I love you beautiful ...I love you today tomorrow always and forever ..😳

Pari looked at him trying to calm her nerve still trying to tell her heart that he is fine and standing in front of her ..and stepped back wiping her tears away ..

By the way mien kahan jaane wala tha ..

Jhoot mat bolo mujhe pata hai tum London jaa rahe thay ..pata hai uss plan ka crash hugaya take off ke waqt hi ...

What..!!  mein London ..pari mien aaj London nahi jaaraha ..kal jaane wala tha ..

But geet ne tu kaha ,..

Pari turned and geet held her ears ..
Sorry ...but iss se pehle k tum mujh se naraaz hu think about it calmly agar mien ais anahi karti tu tum kabhi apni feelings nahi samajhti ..after all jab koi cheez kho na do uski keemat pata kahan chalti hai ,...

Geet ki bachi ill kill you ..

Geet ma'am ill save u forever ..(he held back pari in a bear hug)

Geet chuckled ...

Mana bhai iss hi liye aapne mujhe yahan bolaya ..

Maan shrugged ..

God itna sab ..u two are the best ..

Pari shook her head in disbelief ..n jerked off veers hand off her 

I don't believe this ..

And she left ..

Arre pari suno tu ..

opps ..sory veer abb yeh tumhain sambhaalna parega ...

maan walked upto him and stood infront of him ..

veer pyaar se bara aur buhat gehra trust huta hai vishwaas ..4 saal mien tum ne pari ko khud par trust karna ka koi mauqa nahi diya but this is ur chance ..jao aur usko sincerely apne dil ki baat bolo ..no swag ..and no showoff ...make her trust you veer so that she may trust her own feelings as well ...

I understand bhai ..mazaak aur masti mien shayad mene pari feelings ko kabhi socha nahi ...but apni stupidity mien mien apne pyar ko nahi khone dunga ..and now that I know she loves me I won't let her go ..

Good luck brother ..aur khuranas ka naam mat dobana ..

Veer hugged maan and ran off to search pari while geet stood there seeing another aspect of the tough MSK ..

Geet(st): jab bhi mujhe lagta hai mien aapko samajhne lagi hoon aap phir se ek paheli ban jaate hain maan sir ..kitne roop hain aapke ..kab kya sochte hain kya karte hain kyun karte hian mujhe kabhi samajh nahi aaya ..shayad kabhi aayega bhi nahi ..

Hello ..Ms. Hoshyarpur ..?? yahin hain aap ya kisi aur planet pe ..😛

Uhh sorry wohh mien ...//

Apki match making hugayi hut u office wapis jaakar kuch kaam karlen ..

G ..??

Chalo geet ..

And he went past her caliing the lift when she turned shaking her head at her bewilderedness but happy to know that at least someone is going to have their love story completed ...


PRECAP :-
Major twist in tale ...😉😉


hope you all enjoyed it ..waiting for your responses 

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Posted: 6 years ago
Fantastic part. So loved it. Geet's plan worked and now hope something works for maaneet as well. Maan has to overcome his fear that her life with him will not be happy.
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Posted: 6 years ago
Awesome update..
Waiting for next update..
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Lovely update geet confronted pari and asked whether she loves veer or not but pari is confused though she loves him geet could see that so geet devised a filmy plan of making pari realize her feelings for veer and even include maan in it and as expected as of fear pari confess her love to veer hugging him geet apologies to pari but was happy that at least she could complete someone lovestory maan making very understand that he needs to make pari trust his love only then she will accept him every day geet gets to solve a new puzzle in form of maan 
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Posted: 6 years ago
thanks 4 updating! magnificent update! well written! Geet gets Pari 2 confess! Maan advises Veer! update soon 
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Posted: 6 years ago
Nice update dear 
Loved it!!
Pari was confused with her feelings for veer and didn't want to acknowledge her feelings and thoughts.
Geet plotted a plan to make pari confess her feelings and maan supported geet in her plan. Geet's plan was successful and Pari confessed her love for veer .
Nice precap!!
Thanks for the pm !
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Posted: 6 years ago
toh maan kab apne dil ki baat zuban per ayega...

lovely update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 6 years ago
Very interesting. Wish someone can telll maan yo practice what he preaches and listens to his heart. He knows he loves her but feels he does not deserve her at all. But why does he not see how she is without him

Glad pari and veer at least will be together. Who is going yo help maan to open his eyes now

Or rather what needs to happen to make maan see what he is missing