A Rat's tale- SS (A fun story of Manik and Nandini)-Part 3 updated - Page 7

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Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by: basket_101

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Okies... update soon..I am waiting... 😃

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Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by: Muggle_Diaries


Thanks sweety...🤗

Because that is what they do, Monster and mini-monster! They forget the world when they are together, tho rat kya cheese hai!!! 😆 Poor Mr. Cheesebuster...

I usually write serious stuff. But this was change of pace for me.
Glad you enjoyed it...

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Haha, if I get to read awesome stuff like these, Anytime...🤗

Haha...SO, so true...They forget EVERYTHING and Everyone when they are together, or around each other...

Oh, then I going to find everything you wrote and read it...!!! 😃 lol
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi Hinal dear...
Thanks for this...🤗

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Originally posted by: basket_101

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Hey Di :D
Finally back to comment 😆
A little sad when I found out it's the last part, but it's okay.  An end is inevitable :P

--Yes...I will miss Mr. Cheesbuster

Handsome, sexy rat.

I was imagining this everytime Mr. Cheesebuster talks btw.  Just thought you should visualize it from my pov too ;) hahaa

--Awww...sooo cuuute...Now I am feeling sad for the end!!!! 😭

Smart rat though.  Padhaaku 🤓😆  The descriptions you have given are so epic.
Honestly I loved reading the first bit so much for that reason
It was hilarious!! 

---Thanks...🤗

Coming to Manik-Nandini; un dono ka kuch nahi ho sakta *facepalms*
Definitely doesn't get "juicer" than this, to quote Mr. Cheesebuster 😉

--Yeah.. always fight each other and forget the world, perfect tom and jerry. I enjoyed writing the scenes...I would imagine them, laugh first and write...😃 

Awwh, can't believe seeing them like this made him tear up.  so cuuutee 😆
But he should know our Monster Manik and Mini-Monster Nandini aren't the normal couple
lmao
Bichaara xD
Behosh ho gaya, and bichaare ki zindagi kharaab ho gayi
Khair, at least he didn't die
That would have actually been sad 

--Yeah...he may find his ratess one of these days. I wanted to cut off his entire tail..but that would be too much of dark humour...so thoda sa hi kiya...I just love dark humour... 😃

SUCH a cuteee part 😆
So hilarious!
Loved it <3

Manan ki fights mein bhi maza aaya.  Although iss baar someone else suffered cause of the fights 🤣

Anyway, can't wait till you write something else
:D
Will be waiting

Thanks sweety...😳

Lots of love,
Hinal 🤗

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Posted: 9 years ago
I'm so infatuated with Mr. Chessebuster. He's such a fun guy...err. Rat.
And you made HP reference. Love you for that. See, even rats can't resist awesomeness of HP.
And it's whole tail...err tale is so innovative and creative.
I ship rat and ratess now. My next OTP.😆
I wish you continue. 
I miss Rat already.😭
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Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by: Fenice

I'm so infatuated with Mr. Chessebuster. He's such a fun guy...err. Rat.

And you made HP reference. Love you for that. See, even rats can't resist awesomeness of HP.
And it's whole tail...err tale is so innovative and creative.
I ship rat and ratess now. My next OTP.😆
I wish you continue. 
I miss Rat already.😭


Thanks Fenice...🤗
I am missing Mr. cheesebuster too...
And of course, no one resist HP... toh rat kya cheese hai!! 😃

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Posted: 9 years ago
I just read the whole 3 parts in one go and WOW 👏 girl u are awesome..Its completely different and i just love the way u write 🤗 amazing i enjoyed reading it ..😉 A rat's point of view? ! who would have thought abt it? Brilliantly written 👍🏼
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Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by: Chocomaniac

I just read the whole 3 parts in one go and WOW 👏 girl u are awesome..Its completely different and i just love the way u write 🤗 amazing i enjoyed reading it ..😉 A rat's point of view? ! who would have thought abt it? Brilliantly written 👍🏼


Aww...thanks a lot...😳🤗

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Posted: 9 years ago
Ohmigosh this was hilariouss 🤣 🤣 🤣
The sexy tail references have got to be my favouritee! 😎
Loved it! <3

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Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by: xxDaydreameRxx

Ohmigosh this was hilariouss 🤣 🤣 🤣

The sexy tail references have got to be my favouritee! 😎
Loved it! <3


Thanks..😃
I loved the sexy tail too..😆

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