Jenam version of Shakuntala Two Shot last part

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Shakuntala Part 1
Seeing the first Haldi function pictures of Kumud in 'Saraswatichandra' I felt she resembled the mythological character Shakuntala.A few years back star one aired a mythological show called Shakuntala.Still I wish they remade 'Shakuntala' again with Gautam and Jennifer as they would be perfect as Dushyant and Jennifer.So I am writing a Two shot on the love story of Dushyant and Shakuntala.Though the plot is same,scenes are completely my imagination though I took inspiration from the situations in the original story.Since the scenes are different from the mythological one, please don't get hurt.Please take it as a story and enjoy the Jenam version of 'Shakuntala'.



Shakuntala may not be a Princess literally,but she was the Princess of the forest where she lived.
She was loved by everyone.
It was when King Dushyanta visited the forest she bumped into him.
An unknown force pulled them to each other.
A deep eye lock...


S:Are you a King?
D:Yes.Who are you?You are beautiful like a Princess.
She blushed:Shakuntala.
She ran away blushing.
He couldn't leave her and go from the forest.So he made a hut there and stayed there.
The next day his eyes waited for her.Surprisingly again they met each other.
She was surprised:King Dushyant...Still you are here?And like an ordinary man you are staying in a hut?
D:Yes,because I didn't feel like going away from you.
She blushed.
He stood close to her and whispered in her ears:I love you.Tell me...do you love me?
His words sounded magical to her.She blushed.

She ran away.
D:I will wait for your reply.
Hearing that she blushed.

Thinking of Dushyant's words Shakuntala kept blushing.
She shared this with her best friends Priyamvada and Anusuya.
They were very happy.
P:Tell him that you love him.
S:I can't.I am shy.
A:Then write a letter and we will convey him the message.

Shakuntala was hesitant for a long time.Later in the presense of her friends
with a cute smile she wrote 'I love you...yours Shakuntala' on a leaf.

Priyamvada and Anusuya went to Dushyant with the leaf.
They:We are Shakuntala's friends.
They handed over the leaf to him.
Reading the words written on the leaf he couldn't be more happier than this.

Shakuntala was sitting near the Krishna-Radha's romantic sculpture.Dushyant reached there.
Seeing him she blushed.He held her closer.

Dushyant caressed her pinkish skin sensually.
She was lost in him.
 

Coming back to senses Shakuntana moved backward in nervousness.
D:Shakuntala...what happened?
S:I am scared.You are a King.You will go back.My love will be a failure.
S:No...never...I will never ditch you.I will make you my wife.Very soon I will make arrangements for our wedding.
She was very happy.

The next day...

In front of the Radha Krishna sculpture Dushyant Shakuntala accepted each other as their spouse in the form of Gandharva Vivah.
 
He held her closer.

 They sat like Krishna Radha in the sculpture...same romantic posture.

They shared the same love Radha Krishna had for ne another.In that magical moment they became one.

Shakuntala spent her free time before the Radha Krishna sculpture and remembered the sensuous moments she and Dushyant shared there with a blush.

Their romantic moments were short lived.Dushyant decided to go back to his Kingdom which left Shakuntala heart broken.
He wiped her tears:Don't be upset.I will be back soon to take you to my Kingdom.
She was relieved.
Dushyant took out a ring
 and slipped it on her finger.It had their names on it.She was surprised.
D:Bye.
S:Bye.
They bid Good-Bye painfully.

Shakuntala spent each and every moment thinking about Dushyant.
So she did not know Sage Durwasa's arrival.Feeling ignored he shouted at her.
"You ignored me for someone else?I curse you...
The person whom you are thinking about would forget you".
Hearing him shout she came back to her senses shedding tears.
S:Please forgive me...I didn't do it intentionally".
She fell at his feet and begged him.
His heart melted.
He:I can't take my curse back.But one thing I can assure.
If you show that person something he had given you... then he will remember you again.

Her eyes fell on the ring which he gifted her.
She thanked him:Thanks a lot Swamy...
 
On behalf of Shakuntala Anasuya and Priyatama told her foster father Sage Kanva about her relationship with Dushyant.Kanva was shocked.Shakuntala was scared to face him.But he caressed her face emotionally.
He:I will never go against your wish.Your happiness is my happiness.

S:Baapu...you are the best father in this world.
Kan:When will King Dushyant come to take you?
S:I don't know Baapu.But I can't wait to see him.I want to go to his place to see him.
K:Don't worry...I will take you there.
She was very happy.
 
Anusuya and Priyamvada pasted Haldi on Shakuntala's body.
 
A:After the turmeric bath your skin will glow more.
P:King Dushyant won't be able to take his eyes off you.
Shakuntala blushed.

A:But the truth is that already King Dushyant is flattered by our Shakuntala's beauty.
Shakuntala kept blushing.
 
After the turmeric bath Anusuya and Priyamvada dressed Shakuntala beautifully.Shakuntala was wearing her wedding attire as she felt she looked the best in it.
P:You are going to be a Queen.
A:So now itself you need to dress up like a Queen.
Shakuntala smiled.
P:Will we ever meet?
Suddenly they became sad.

Shakuntala hugged them:I will visit you even if I become a Queen.
They tried to smile.
 
On the way to the Kingdom, as Shakuntala was crossing a river, her wedding ring fell into the water. A fish swallowed the ring.Shakuntala and Sage Kanva reached the Palace.Dushyant wondered who they were.
D:Please let me know why you both came here.
They were shocked.
Shakuntala's face were full of tears:I am Shakuntala...your wife.
Dushyant got irritated:What rubbish!I am not married and you are saying that you are my wife.How dare you?
 
Shakuntala was reminded of Sage Durwasa's curse.
She decided to show the finger ring to him,but suddenly she realized that her ring was missing.
She burst into tears.
Kanva:What happened daughter?
S:Baapu...the only proof of our relationship is missing.A finger ring.
Dushyant:A finger ring?Ridiculous.Before creating more drama leave from here.Since you are a woman and the person who accompanied you is an old sage I am leaving you both.
Feeling insulted Shakuntala and Karnva left the Palace.
Their tears made the Palace wet.
Seeing their tears Dushyant thought:Why do I feel that their tears are not fake?

 
 

 
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazing Concept Jasmine 👏👏
I am already loving it.

Saras and Kumud were perfect together, the confession was cute and the became one too but because of the curse, Saras has forgotten her and the ring has been lost too. Aww..Saras did not believe her and made her cry but then felt that their tears were not fake.

Continue soon...
Waiting to know what will happen 😊

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice one.
Thanks for the PM.
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beautifully written..
i heartly thnk u 4 reminding me this story that i had heard in my childhood...
thnks 4 d pm...
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Very well written. I must say that you are a very good writer. I liked the way you depicted the story with jenam as the main characters in it. And the pics you added were perfectly suited with the dialogues and the situation. I have heard this story in childhood but you made it more interesting by taking jenam as the main characters. Thank you for such a beautiful jenam version of Shakuntala . Will wait for more beautiful stories like these.


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Hey Jasmine,
When are you going to update the next part? 
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Shakuntala Part 2
Knowing that Shakuntala was back Anusuya and Priyamvada went to her.
P:Why did you come back Shakuntala?
S:Because King Dushyant is not there in my destiny.
A:Means?

S:He has forgotten me.
They were shocked.
Shakuntala revealed everything right from the Sage Durwasa's curse to Dushyant insulting her.
They hugged her and cried.Shakuntala couldn't control her tears.
P:Don't be weak Shakuntala.You need to live.
S:Yes...I need to live for my child.
They were shocked:Child?
S:Yes.I am pregnant.
They were shocked.

Time passed...
Shakuntala gave birth to a baby boy.He was named Bharata.

One day at Dushyant's palace, a fisherman was brought after accusing him of stealing a ring.The fisherman cried:Please believe me King...I didn't steal this ring. I had found the ring in the stomach of a fish that I caught long ago.
Dushyant was given the ring.He saw the words carved on the ring:Dushyant Shakuntala.
Suddenly he was reminded of his moments with Shakuntala.
He remembered Shakuntala coming to him claiming to be his wife.
His eyes became wet.
D:How could I forget my beloved?She was telling the truth.But I insulted her and sent away.I did such a big sin.God...forgive me.
He cried.

Dushyant gifted a lot of cold coins to the fisherman as because of him only he remembered his beloved Shakuntala.It surprised everyone.

Dushyant rushed to the forest in search of Shakuntala.
He was surprised to find a boy playing with a lion cub. Dushyant went up to the boy.
D:You are so fearless.You are playing with Lion cub.
He:Why should I fear animals?I live with them.They are my friends.
 
Dushyant smiled:You are so different.What is your name?
He:I am Bharat.
D:Who are your lucky parents?
B:Do you know?My father is a King.
D:Oh really?
B:I am the son of king Dushyanta and Shakuntala.
Dushyant couldn't believe his ears.
His eyes got filled up with tears.
He hugged Bharata:My son...I am your father.I am King Dushyant.
Bharata was surprised:Baapu...
Shakuntala came in search of Bharata and was shocked to see Dushyant with Bharat.
Dushyant couldn't control his tears seeing her.
D:Shakuntala...I remember everything now.I got the ring I gave you.I think you lost it.
She was surprised.
D:Will you forgive me?
The sage Kanva,Anusuya and Priyamvada also came.They were shocked to see the sight.
Shakuntala turned back wiping her tears.She shivered.
Seeing Bharata's smile Dushyant became cheerful.
D:I know you still love me.That's why you told our son Bharat about me.
 
Confused about the circumstance she tried to walk away.But Dushyant held her hand tight without letting her go.
 
 
D:First you tell me...don't you love me?
 
She looked at his face.
He came closer to her.
D:I am very sorry Shakuntala.I know I did a sin by forgetting you.
S:No.You didn't do it purposefully.It was the Sage Durwasa's curse.
D:What?
Shakuntala explained everything.
He was shocked.
D:So you are not angry with me?
She nodded her head:How can I be angry with you?
D:So you forgave me?
She nodded her head in 'yes'.
D:You didn't answer my other question.Do you still love me?
She looked at his eyes deeply.
D:Your eyes told me everything.
S:What?
D:That you love me a lot.
She became very emotional.
D:I also love you.
Dushyant and Shakuntala shared a beautiful eye lock.Dushyant took the ring she lost and made her wear it again.They smiled.
They embraced each other emotionally.They hugged Bharat together.
The sage Kanva,Anusuya and Priyamvada were very happy.
 Anusuya:So finally Shakuntala got her King back.
Seeing them Shakuntala became shy.She walked to them.
S:Yes...my true love  him back to me.

They smiled.

Dushyant touched Kanva's feet.
D:Please forgive me...I insulted you very much.
Kanva became sad.
K:Don't do this son.You are correcting your unknown mistake.What more is needed?Now you get up.

Dushyant was relieved.He got up.
Dushyant took Shakuntala and Bharat to his Kingdom.Dushyant-Shakuntala had a grand Royal wedding.

 
The End

 
 
Edited by jasminerahul - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow... too good 👏

The pics u used frm the show were in perfect sync with ur story. Loved it 😊

Big fan of ur writings,keep up the good work Jasmine,looking fwd to more OS's n SS's about jenam n samud.

Thanku 😃


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice update. Loved it.
Thanks for the PM.
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wonderful...
all pics suited well in d story... & d best pic was of bharata...
thnks 4 d pm...