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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey guys... I am so new to this forum you won't believe me
so I am gonna write a Praja OS of the scenario I wish happens when the next
episode airs... plz guys read an reply...




Part 1- Pg 1
Part 2- Pg 1
Part 3- Pg 2
Maha Episode Part 1- Pg 3

So after Pratap has finished fighting all the Afghans
and freed Phatta, Ajabde comes and claps. She claps so slowly that Pratap looks
at her confusingly... she is so stunned that Pratap is still lieing to her...


Ajabde: Kya baat hai... Itni achi tarah se joh aapne
unn Afghanon ko dhul chatayi, aap toh hum sab ki bahut sahayta kar sakte hai...


Pratap: Jiii shukriya...


Ajabde: Arey aap kyun dhanyawaad de rahe hai,
dhanyawaad to hume aapko deni chahiye... Akhir Mewar Ratna, Kunwar Pratap joh
humari Bijolia mein padhare hain...


Pratap: Ji aap yeh kya keh rahi hai...


Phatta: Jija aap yeh kya keh rahi hai...


Ajabde: Hum, sach ke rahe hain phatta, yeh hi hain
Kunwar Pratap... Aur unke who mitra, joh inke saath aaye hai woh kaun ho sakta
hain... Kunwar Pratap ke toh ek hi mitra the joh Jyotish Vidya mein saksham the...
Chakrapani Mishr... Kyun sahi kaha na humne, Kunwar Pratap...


Pratap: Aap humare baare mein itna kaise jaanti hai...


Ajabde: Iske baare mein aapko nahi sochna chahiye.


Phatta: Jija aap yeh kya kar rahi hai. Aap jaanti hai
ki yeh Kunwar Pratap hai. Aapko kaise patta challa jija.


Ajabde: Inke ladne ke dhang se...


Pratap: Aapne hume ladte hue kab dekha, joh aap keh sakti
hain ki hum kunwar pratap hai...


Ajabde: Hum tab bache the, jab aapko pehli baar ladte
hue dekha tha... Bache the, dil kho baithe... Par ab sab samaj aa gaya hai hume... Aap
chittor ke guptchar nahi waha ke Kunwar...


Phatta: Aapki himat kaise hui yaha aane ki, jab aapne
humari Jeeja


Ajabde: Phatta... nahi...


Phatta: nahi Jija aaj nahi, aap ki himmat kaise hui yahan
aane ki jabki aapne humari Ajabde Baisa ke saath who kiya joh ek nirdai bhi naa
karein...


Ajabde: Phatta aap yeh mat bhooliye ki ek baar Ajabde Baisa
ko patta chal gaya ke aap ne Kunwar Pratap ke saath aise baat ki toh who aapse
kitna naaraz hojaengi... Aur aapko patta hai ke Kunwar Pratap Baisa ke baare
mein kuch nahi sun sakte... unhe hum par vishwas hi nahi hoga... Kunwar Pratap Ajabde
Baisa se sirf nafrat karte hain... Haina Kunwar Pratap?


Pratap: Aap nahi jaanti ke aap kis vishay mein baat kar
rahe hain...


Ajabde: Hum
ache se jaante hain ki hum kisa vishay ke baare mein baat kar rahe hain..


Pratap: Kuch nahi jaanti aap..


Ajabde: Hum sab jaante hain ki aapko kaise lagta hai ki
Ajabde Baisa ne aapki RaniMa ko Mehel se bahar jaane ke liye vivash kar diya... Hum
jaante hain ki kaise aapne unnpar bilkul bharosa nahikiya... Hum jaante hain ki
kaise aapne ek baar bhi nahi socha ke unhone aapko vachan diya tha ki veh aapke
zindagi mein teesre sthaan unka rahenga aur veh RaniMa ko utna hi samaaan dengi
jitna aap dete hai... Aapne ek baar bhi nahi sochaa ke who apna vachan kabhi
nahi todti... Kaise unhone aapse vachan liya tha ki aap kabhi vyaktighat bhavon
se nirnay nahi lenge... par aapne fir bhi vahi kiya... Hum sab jaante hai... par
shayad aap nahi jaante ki Ajabde Baisa pichle das varshon se aapki RaniMa ko
dhundne mein asafal rahi hai, kyunki unhe lagta hai ke agar aapki RaniMa Chittor
mein waapas aagayi toh sb thik ho jaayega... Aap toh humari inn baaton par
vishwas bhi nahi karenge... Aap toh yeh bhi nahi maanege ke veh aapke liye har
karva chauth rakhti... Ke jab aap kissi yudh par jaate hain veh kuch nahi khatti...


Phatta: Jija... Aap mat roiye...

Ajabde: Aap kuch nahi jaante...

Pratap: Aap jhooth keh rahi hai...

Ajabde: Hum jaante the ki aap humari baaton ka vishwaas nahi karenge... Humara aapse nivedan hai ki aap Chittor laut jaaye... Aap toh samasya jaan chuke hai... Aur hum yeh bataa de ki aap ab humari sahayta ke liye kuch nahi kar sakte...



i will think about next part...



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Posted: 9 years ago
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it was good...plz pm me when u update
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Posted: 9 years ago
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its really good..
plzz update and pm me.. 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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this is maddd cuttteee!!!! plzzz plzzz plzzz write more on PrAja!!! update asap!😃👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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very nicely written! thanks for sharing, I wish this happens!! lol, but i doubt it, but no harm in wishing right? hehe!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Here is the next part guys... Hope you enjoy it...

 

Previously on Praja OS

Ajabde: Hum jaante the ki aap humari baaton ka vishwaas nahi karenge... Humara aapse nivedan hai ki aap Chittor laut jaaye... Aap toh samasya jaan chuke hai... Aur hum yeh bataa de ki aap ab humari sahayta ke liye kuch nahi kar sakte...

Pratap: Lekin humari baat toh suniye...

Phatta: Dur rahiye aap...

At that both Phatta and Ajabde sit on their horses and ride back with Pratap following them. Their Chakrapani is hell worried about Pratap. He is a Jyotish afterall, and can predict things. As Ajabde and Phatta reach their Chakrapani asks them where is Pratap.

Chakrapani: Arey baisa aapke saath Pratap nahi aaye?

Pratap: Chakrapani, yeh humare baare mein sab kuch jaanti hain.

Chakrapani: Par yeh kaise sambhav hai BaojiRaj.

Pratap: Inhe humare ladne ke dhang se patta challa ke hum Pratap hai...

Phatta: Jija yeh wahi chakrapani hai jinki wajah se baisa aur Kunwar Pratap ki Vivah hua tha?

Chakrapani: Haa hum wahi hai... Paruntu aap unse yeh kyun pooch rahein hai...

Phatta: Phir toh aapki Jyotish Vidya kissi kaam ki hi nahi... Jin do logon ki kundli aaapne milai who dono aaj khud kitne alag hain...

Chakrapani: Dekho tum meri Jyotish Vidya ke baare mein kuch mat bolo... Hum bahut ache se jaante hain kundliyaan milana... Aur humne aaj tak BaojiRaj aur Ajabde Baisa jaisi milne wali kundli nahi dekhi...

Ajabde: Shaant ho jaiye aap sab log... Humne aapse kaha naa jitna jaldi ho sake Bijolia se nikal jaiye...

Chakrapani: Par hum ek baar Ajabde Baisa se milna chahte hai... Hum dekhna chahte hai ki who kaisi hai...

Phatta: Ji nahi aap unse nahi mil sakte...Aur shayad agar mil bhi sakte toh bhi hum aapko unse nahi milate...(All these while looking at Ajabde)

Chakrapani: Par aap Ajabde Baisa ko Unke pati se bhi nahi milne denge?

Phatta: Ajabde baisa se unke pati jab chahe mil sakte hain... Par who mar chuke hain...

Ajabde: Phatta yeh aap kya keh rahe hai... Aap pagal toh nahi ho chuke hai...

This conversation was seen by Pratap... He was so observant to both of them...

Phatta: Sahi toh keh rahe hum Jija... Kunwar Pratap Ajabde Baisa ke pati nahi ek aise vyakti hain joh kabhi unpar bharosa nahi kar sakte...

Chakrapani: Aap kyun kuch nahi keh rahe hain BaojiRaj?

Pratap: Kyunki humaare paas kuch kehne ko hi nahi hai...

Chakrapani: Lekin humare paas bahut kuch hain kehne ko agar aap aagya deh toh mein keh doon?

Pratap: Chaliye aap hi kuch keh dijiye...

Ajabde: Nahi aap kuch nahi kahenge, aap jab kuch kehte hai toh logon ki sachai bahar aajati hai...

Pratap: Kahiye Chakrapani< kya kehna chahte hai aap?

Chakrapani: Yeh aapse bahut darti hi BaojiRaj... Aapse hi nahi yeh humse bhi bahut darti hai... Inhe dar lagta hai ki humko patta chal jayein ki yeh aakhir hain kaun... Yeh ek vivahit stri hain jinki vivahit stihiti thik nahi hai... Aur yeh roz subah tulsi ko jal chadati hai.. Inke upar bahut saari zimmedariyan, inki nahi, inke apno kiii...

Pratap: Aap hai kaun..

Phatta: Bas chaliye yaha se Jija...

Chakrapani: Rukiya kunwar Pratap nahi toh aap humari toh Ajabde se bhet karwa dijiye... Saubhagyawati unhe bahut yaad karti hai...

Ajabde; Sach keh rahe hain aap...(stammers a bit) humara matlab hai ki aap dona abhi saath hai...Humara matlab hai ki nahi aap unse nahi mil sakte...

Saying this she leaves from there...Phatta following... Leaving Pratap to think who is this girl?

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Posted: 9 years ago
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really nice update
plz plz plz update soon waiting... for next part desperately
i just wanted to see if pratap will be able to recognise her ajabde or not
plz update fast ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#8
awesome update...eagerly waiting for the moment when he would get to know that this girl is Ajab...plz update soon nd thnx for the pm.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#9
OmG I desperately want to read more... please pelase pelase continue sooon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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amazing storyline..
👍🏼