A Yudi -Arjuna OS (The farewellls-on Pg 10) - Page 9

very nice update

thanks for pm

Wow this is beautiful!!
You have depicted  Arjun-Yudi relationship so wonderfully and the writing is so engaging...
And you have made the relationship of Drau with her husbands so natural unlike our StarBharat😊
Really enjoyed reading this truly enjoyable OS

Wow di never knew that yudhi was Arjun's guru plz do continue soon

My hands just stopped on this keyboard, Varaali di and Urmi di!


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Wow!! This is such a wonderful OS.. Why didnt I read it before
Loved how you explored this side of Arjun-Yudhi relationship.. true.. very less is written about their bond! great job Varaali di 👏👏

The brothers bonding. The dutiful Arjuna... beautiful depicted. Super job

Your writing style is amazing 😃

I wanted to reply you for a long time but I could not. Sorry for that. What a skill of creative writing and g ood understanding of the epic you have! You really have done justice to those divine characters. Your sense of balancing all the characters with all their qualities and dignity deserves wholehearted appreciation and encouragement. You have also proved that in depth understanding of the epic characters can make even a fiction almost as genuine reconstruction as the original story. Why have you stopped writing suddenly? There are many more interesting stories about pandavas and draupadi in the epic after this episode on which you can write. So please update soon.