PrAja SS-Ab maaf bhi kar de mujhe kyu door itna hogayi(part 10 on pg19

Pratap was sitting in his room holding a talwaar which his ranimaa gave him..chakrapani enters..
Chakri- Baojiraj..!!
aaj yaha aise udas kyu baithe hue hai...waha rani dheer bai ji aapko dhoond rhi hai...
Pratap-kuch nhi chakrapani bs ranimaa ki bahot yaad aa rhi hai hume...

chakri-hum samajh sakte hai aap kaisa mehsoos kar rhe hai baojiraj...itne varsh ho gae,ab apko 1 baar phir maharani sa ko chittod wapis aane k liye 1 aur baar unse baat karni chahie...
pratap-parantu chakrapani,ranimaa to hume dekhna bhi nahi chahti..pata nahi humse aisi kya bhool ho gayi hai jo hume itna bada dand mil raha hai 😭

chakri-Baojiraj apse koi bhool nahi hui hai..zaroor mehal chor k jaane ka koi aisa kaaran hoga jo sirf maharani sa janti hai..
chakri- parantu baojiraj,ajabde aisa kyu karegi..ve bhi to ranimaa ka bahot samman kart ithi..
pratap- (angrily) jo kuch kiya hai unhi ne kiya hai..!! unhone hamari ranimaa ko humse china hai...aur iske liye hum unhe kabhi shama nahi karenge...hum unse ghrina karne lage hai.😡
 (saying this pratap leaves)
chakri-ab apko kaise samjhaye baojiraaj...aap jaisa soch rhe hai vaisa kuch nahi hai...zaroor koi aur karan hai iske peeche...😔

Pratap was doing sword practice in dangalsthal..remembering what DB said when jaiwanta bai left the palace...all because of ajabde...US comes there..)
US-aaj ap bahot krodhit lag rhe hai kunwar pratap..kya baat hai..?
Pratap- Dajiraj,kya hum 1 baar phir ranimaa ko wapis laane k liye jaa sakte hai.?
US-Kunwar pratap ap jante hai na ki ve apki nahi sunengi...kai baar unse baat karne k baad bhi ve wapis aane ko raazi nahi hui..to ab kaise..
pratap-hume 1 baar aur prayas karne dijiye dajiraj,ho sakta hai iss baar ve maan jaaye..
US-Thik hai Kunwar Pratap..jaisa apko sahi lage..
(saying this,US leaves from there..pratap prays to ekling ji)
(on reaching vrindavan)
pratap-he ekling ji...hume ashirwaad dijiye ki iss baar ranima ko hum mana paaye..
(Jaiwantabai was sitting in front of lord krishna..
(pratap smiles as he saw his ranimaa)
pratap-Ranimaa..!! 
(JB turns behind)
JB- Kunwar pratap.!! aap yaha .!!
Pratap- Ranima,ab to aap humare saath chittod chaliye..itne varsh ho gae hai...aap yaha akali hai..waha Dajiraj apki pratiksha kar rhe hai..
JB-nahi kunwar pratap..hum nahi aa...
pratap-to hum bhi aapke sath yahi rehenge...
JB-agar aap aha rehenge to mewad ki sena ko kon shashakt karega..
Pratap-hum nahi jaenge..ranima aap samajhti kyu nahi..sab apko kitna yaad karte hai...choti maa,bjai jagmaal,humari behen chand...veshesh rup se to choti maa aad karti hai apko (VB)
(hearing VB's name,JB remembers that how VB said her to leave the mehal...)
pratap-aur sabse badi baat,apke apradhi ko mehal se nikaal diya gaya hai...vo kabhi wapis nahi aaegi chittod me.
JB-(Confused) humare apradhi.?? kiski baat kar rhe hai aap kunwar pratap.??

pratap-Ajabde ranima..! unhe mehal se nikal diya gaya hai...ab unka mehal me aana a unka naam lena apradh mana jata hai...ab to aap cha hi sakti hai..
JB-(Shocked)
      kyaa..!! ajabde ko mehal se nikal dia gaya..parantu kyu.??
(pratap explains everthing that DB told him..how US insulted her soo badly...how he scolded her abd sais he hates her)
JB-(shocked and almost cring)
       kunwar pratap,hum abhi rana ji se baat karna chahte hai...isi shan...(saing this she leaves for chittod mehal)
(pratap seeing his mother ready to go to chittod,he gets excited...bt he doosent have an idea about what is going to happen next in chittod mehal )

Precap-JB's getting extremly disappointed and angry over  every1 ..jb teling everyone about the actual letter she worte for ajabde and telling everyone that all that was a plan to thorw ajabde out of this mehal 
pratap's and US's reaction...



friends tell me how's this...should i continue or not...
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its fab stry..gud strt..waiting 4 nxt update..more excited 4 nxt1..

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