Hey, im kind of a silent reader of your story, although i have commented once before on your previous thread, a while back! :) I absolutely love this story, I have been following it diligently and get excited everytime i see you've posted a new chapter. You are an amazing writer and the progress you have made in this story, the way you have gradually developed characters as well as the different relationships, esp Zain And Aliya's, is just amazing!
This chapter was no less! I had a huge grin on my face throughout, the kids are too cute and that last part must have been so embarrassing for them, their kids saw them kissing!
You write romantic scenes really well, i absolutely loved your last chapter (chap30), would love to see more romance between Zain and Aliya :D
I hate Jon, but I am sure eventually Zain will take good care of him and save Aliya from anything bad Jon might be planning on doing!
Looking forward to the next update! :)
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