A Spring Time Tale- New chap updated [Short Story] - Page 6

Hey Mimi,

Thanks for PM.. Just read the prologue.. Plot sounds interesting... I loved your choice of words.. and specially lyrics of song used in the end of prologue... looking forward to read part 1 soon and will share my comments on that soon...

 

Keep up the good work..😊

res!
Edited by FeistyQueen - 9 years ago

Originally posted by: riti4u

Hey Mimi,

Thanks for PM.. Just read the prologue.. Plot sounds interesting... I loved your choice of words.. and specially lyrics of song used in the end of prologue... looking forward to read part 1 soon and will share my comments on that soon...

 

Keep up the good work..😊

Originally posted by: FeistyQueen

res!

I read it.. both chaps.. but didn't gt time to comment.. 

I shall comment this weekend...

life kinda hectic due to colg 🥱

PS: its me Gayatri! again new username 😛

wonderful update. Really captivating! so there entered Mr.Unknown and the drunk hero!

Beautiful update Mimi. I loved Ved's line I can't relate to Homo Sapiens
And Ved's situation after getting drunk spilled out the truth that once was hidden inside his heart. And now I am waiting for Priyam's reaction and what incidents will happen after he gets out of drunk situation.
And thanks for the PM and sorry once again for delay in replying.

Hi Mimi, login after a long time

Superb concept 

Originally posted by: kalyani_shiva

Beautiful update Mimi. I loved Ved's line I can't relate to Homo Sapiens
And Ved's situation after getting drunk spilled out the truth that once was hidden inside his heart. And now I am waiting for Priyam's reaction and what incidents will happen after he gets out of drunk situation.
And thanks for the PM and sorry once again for delay in replying.

thanks Kalyani.
n congrats girl 😉

Originally posted by: monikasaxena05

Superb concept 

Both d parts r amazing

Room nd priyanka bond was really nice..

Ved confession to priyam was really funny

Beautifully written..

Continue soon

Nd pm me too...

thnks a lot Monica