naksh ff ** tum mile ** PART 33 on PAGE 59

hey friends i am raina and here i am presenting u all my ff - tum mile for our beloved naksh.
                   INTRODUCTION
AKSHARA- sweet,bindass,hot,modern girl jo life ko khul ke jeeti hai .aur life se apne liye sirf ek vo insaan mangti hai jo sirf use hi pyaar kare.aur vo insaan use mila RITURAJ me. she loves him very much.
RITURAJ - a rich handsome boy jo ki har ladki ka deewana ho jata hai.akshara se pyaar to karta hai par akshara jaisa nahi . hamesha hi apne dad par dependent with great ego.
NAITIK - rituraj ka best friend hamesha he use support karta hai . a pure hearted person jise sirf ek sacche pyaar ki talash hai jo aakar uske jeevan me khushiyan bhar de.naitk zyada rich to nahi par bada dilwala hai .
   to akshara ko kaise mile ga naitik this is my ff
   so ye hai mere ff ke main charecters baki ka intro kahani ke saath .
I WIIL UPDATE MY FIRST PART SOON Edited by rainanaksh - 9 years ago

Please update soon...eagerly waiting

                                                                        PART 1
Aaj poore do mahine ke baad mai ussse milungi pata nahi shimla jakar use kya ho gaya hai ki vo mujhe bhool hi gaya . kya do mahine me koi sirf teen bar phone karta hai ? aaj ek ek baat ka badla loongi rituraj se . tabhi akshara ke mobile ka alarm bajta hai aur vo apni diary band karti hai
ak - hey bhagvaan late ho gayi rituraj college me mera wait kar raha hoga vaise bhi use late aana pasand nahi hai .
aaj mai apna favourite colour pehenti hoon red
ayr jaldi se college ke liye ready hoti hu.
IN THE COLLEGE
all students are going to their classes tabhi akshara ek ladke ke upar gir jati hai
ak - hey bhagvan dekh kar nahi chal sakte kya
boy - oh sorry ( itna kehkar vo waha se chala jata hai)
ak - kaise ladke hai girls ke liye to koi respect hi nahi hai , thank god rituraj aisa nahi hai varna mera kya hota .isliye to i love him very much.
tabhi ak ke peeche se ek aawaz aati hai akshara
aur rituraj vaha aata hai
rr - hey ak i miss you sooo much
ak - pata hai kitna miss kia hoga itna bhi nahi roz ek phone kar le
rr - mai busy tha yaar tum to janti hi ho .khair vo sab jane do ,aaj mai tumhe apne best friend se milata hu . mere bachpan ka dost mera bhai naitik .
tabhi naitik aata hai aur ak ko dekhta hai
both are shock to see each other
ak - rr kya ye tumhara dost hai itna badtamiz
rr - matlab
ak - maltab ye ki abhi raste me mai iske upar giri aur ye janab mujhe attitude dikhakar chale gaye
nk - oh hello madam sorry to kaha tha na
ak - sorry wo bhi attitude wala wah bhai wah
nk - aur nahi to kya haath pair jodu kya
rr - bus karo tum dono aur ek doosre se milo
ak ye hai naitik mera best friend kam bhai zyada
aur naitik ye hai my love my life akshara
ab tum dono ladai jane do aur best friends ban jao kyunki tumhe ab saath me apni study poori karni hai
ak nk saath me - par kyu
rr - kyunki tum dono ke sare subjects ek hai .accha ab friends ki tarah hand shake karo ok
ak nk dono ek dosre se haath milate hai aur ek duje ko sorry bolte hai.
nk - ak aaj tumne mujhse dosti ki hai zindagi bhar nibhaoonga
ak - muje bhi manjoor hai

PRECAP - akshara introduce naitik as her best friend to her classmate and rituraj saw them

this is my first ff so i know friends this part is not so good but definately i will try for good oneEdited by rainanaksh - 9 years ago

nice ff pls continue soon

lagta hai nobody likes my ff but its ok i will definately write next part soon
              
PART 2
rr - so ak tum aisa karo ki nk ko hamara college dikhaoo, mai thori der baad tumse milta hu
ak - theek hai par tum kaha ja rahe ho?
rr - surprise
ak - kaisa
rr - hai par baad me bataunga
ak - ok
nk - agar aap dono ke surprises khatam ho gaye ho to chale
ak - oh ha bye rr
ak nk vaha se chale jate hai
rr - thank god ak gayi ab itne dino baad apni baaki special friends se bhi to milna hai na
ak happily nk ko apna poora college dikhakar apni class me le jati hai
IN CLASS
ak friends antra and varsha are waiting for her
an & vr - hey ak kaisi thi teri holidays aur ye hansome kaun hai , kahi rr ke baad koi aur mil gaya kya ?
ak - nahi yaar ye rr ke dost hai naitik aur aaj se mere bhi dost hai
an & vr - hello naitik
nk - hello
an - kya baat hai naitik ji bade pyaar se idhar udhar kya dekh rahe hai koi girlfriend banane ka irada hai , aur agar hai to mai free hu
ak - bas karo antra kyu sata rahi ho nk ko , nk pls tum bura mat maanna ye aisi he hai
nk - nahi aisa kuch nahi hai mai bas apni seat dekh raha tha ki kaha baithu
ak - uski koi zarurat nahi hai nk tum mere saath baith jao
nk - ok and thank u
    when ak and nk about to sit suddenly ak slips and again falls in nk arms
rr saw them in that position
nk - aap kitna girtri hai akshara
ak - kyu aapko mujhe sambhalna accha nahi lagta hai kya
nk - ye kaisa sawal hai
ak - sawal ye hai ki kya ek dost dusre dost ki madad nahi kar sakta
KAR SAKTA HAI
suddenly rr class me aakar kehta hai - magar ek dusre ki dosti me itna nahi khona chahiye ki koi apne pyaar ko hi bhool jaye
akshara naitik dono ye sunkar shock reh jate hai

PRECAP ak apne birthday plan antra aur varsha se share karti hai aur naitik unki baat sun leta hai
Edited by rainanaksh - 9 years ago

Nice ff raina.. precap is good.. continue soon

Originally posted by: Pragati-naksh

Nice ff raina.. precap is good.. continue soon

thank u dear for incouraging me definately i will update soon

so friends here is my next part but before that i am very thankful to all the members who read my ff and like it😃😃

PART 3
nk - hey yaar tu kab aaya
rr - tabhi jab tum dono ek dusre ki bahoon me khoye hue the
nk - ye tu kya keh raha hai ,he is really shocked
rr - arey yaar mazak kar raha tha
ak - aaj aisa keh diya phir kabhi aisa kaha na to
mai tumhari jaan le loongi
she suddenly runs and hugs rr
aur dono waha se chale jate hai
nk - ye ak bhi na kitna pyaar karti hai rr se ekdum paagal
here ak and rr spend some quality time together
ak - i love u rr
rr - i love u to
ak - par shimla jakar mujhe bilkul miss nahi kiya hai na
rr - tum ab phir se start mat ho jana miss kia nahi kia arey yaar pyaar to karta hu na bas aur kya chahiye
rooz to i luve u bhi bolta hi hu
ak - ok sorry ab dobara sikayat nahi karoongi ,she is slightly upset
tabhi rr ko ek phone aata hai vo kaafi pareshaan ho jata hai
ak - kiska phone hai
rr - dad ka , mujhe abhi jana hoga
ak - par
rr - bye ,aur waha se chala jata hai
akshara became sad
antra aur varsha aakar ak se kehti hai ki rr intni jaldi kyu chala gaya
ak - pata nahi keh raha tha ki uske dad ne urgent bulaya hai , khair jane do chalo hum sab canteen chalte hai ,mai naitik ko bula ke lati hu
an - par nk class me nahi hai pata nahi kahan gaya hai
vr - aare jane do hum friends enjoy karte hai na
ak - theek hai chalte hai
IN CANTEEN
teeno apni chattar pattar me lagi rehti hai
vr - ak tera to bday aane wala hai
ak -ha to ,kya hua ?
an - kuch nahi ye bday to tere liye kaafi special
hoga kyunki pehli baar tu rr ke saath bday manaygi
vr - vo bhi romantic wali ,kyu
ak - ji nahi aisa kuch nahi hai , ha bday to special hai kyunki rr mere saath hai ,aur mai ise special tareeke se   celebrate karna chahti hu
an and vr - kaise ?
ak - tum dono ko kyu bataun ,its secret
an and vr - pls ak bata na
ak - ok , mai chahti hu ki kal ka pura din mai sirf rr ke saath bitaoon , subah subah hum temple jaye waha jakar apne pyarr bhare rishte ke liye prayer kare , phir hum anath ashram jaye .jahan mai un bacchon ke saath apna time spend karoon jinhone apne mummy papa ko kho diya , kyunki unka dukh mujhse jyada koi nahi samajh sakta hai ,aur phir mai sea sight dekhna chahti hu ,waha ki shanti mujhe bahut acchi lagti hai.
rr ke sath waha ganto baithkar apne dil ki baatein karna chahti hu
ye hai mere bday plans
an and vr - wow akshara tu to badi emotional nikli ekdum simple type
ak - aisa kuch nahi hai bas apne jeevan me kuch kushiyoon ke pal pana chahti hu rr ke saath
all three are laughing and talking together
aur idhar naitik un teeno ki sabhi baaten sun leta hai
nk - ak kitni simple aur sweet hai ,bilkul mere jaisi thinking hai inki kaaash...khair jane do
par ek baat hai itni sweet ladki ko rr kaise pasand aa gaya,
kya inhe rr ke bare me kuch bhi nahi pata hai???????

PRECAP nk rituraj se kehta hai to tune kya planning ki hai ak ke bday ki and rr is shocked

Edited by rainanaksh - 9 years ago

ur ff is so nice n read it n kee p continue

Originally posted by: neeru84

ur ff is so nice n read it n kee p continue

loke precap rituraj forget akshi's b'day but natik who as a frnd only rember it its a true love like ur story kee p continue