YEH DOORIYAN-A SEHAN-SAHIL SS-COMPLETED-PARTS-1-15+EPILOGUE - Page 10

wreeti

@wreeti

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Posted: 9 years ago

Oh my god, did not expect this... But awesome.
Love how u have integrated Saahil and Sehan story. And love it how Aahil ans Sehar's relationship is portrayed. I wish they show similar bond between them in the actual series as well.

Continue soon...,

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kalyani

@kals82

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Posted: 9 years ago

o h.. god...

this is the best buddy...

the story and twist...

they have done all the three bases...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

now i could see where seher.. thoughts actions comes from..

iirespective of time.. and space...

she claims him to be hers...

nothing is going to change...

did really rehaan crossed the line...

nice..

update soon

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667059

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Posted: 9 years ago

What a nice update.Please continue it soon...

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Tannu

@Tannakstar

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Posted: 9 years ago

Oh. Em. Gee.

What. How. When. I can't absorb this. THEY SLEPT TOGETHER?? OMG.

Rehaan and Seher. Ahhh I am seriously hooked onto this.

I LOVE SEHER. When she was discussing the differences between bases and levels to Sanam, I was cackling like a witch!! You write Seher so well, she is such a fantastic read. Esp when she was disgusted by the way women throw themselves at men to get ahead - WOOHOO SHE'S A FEMINIST TOO!

And Rehaan sounds so hot in your FF. On screen he's adorable and cute, but in this he sounds sexy. Esp in the kitchen scene with his biceps. WHOA. I could just imagine

And now Aahil is in on the secret.

This is amazing. The best. I love it.

Tannu.

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Pagalpinky

@Pagalpinky

Goldie

Posted: 9 years ago

Wow that was amazing

Loving hearing about rehan seher

I kept wanting to scream: yes danger zone! Yes danger zone!
Then the ending I was like: oh yehhh! They've been in the danger zone

Uff loving your story
Thanks!

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Mandy

@MrDarcyfan

IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Tannakstar
Oh. Em. Gee.
What. How. When. I can't absorb this. THEY SLEPT TOGETHER?? OMG.

Rehaan and Seher. Ahhh I am seriously hooked onto this.

I LOVE SEHER. When she was discussing the differences between bases and levels to Sanam, I was cackling like a witch!! You write Seher so well, she is such a fantastic read. Esp when she was disgusted by the way women throw themselves at men to get ahead - WOOHOO SHE'S A FEMINIST TOO!

And Rehaan sounds so hot in your FF. On screen he's adorable and cute, but in this he sounds sexy. Esp in the kitchen scene with his biceps. WHOA. I could just imagine

And now Aahil is in on the secret.

This is amazing. The best. I love it.

Tannu.

Thanks! Even I love Seher. She is a kickass girl. But she is vulnerable inside. She really loved Rehan and she was very hurt when she found out he didnt tell her who he really was to Tanveer, and it all came as a big shock.

More will be revealed in the coming chapters. Yes I am having fun writing this version of Rehan. Well he IS like the Rehan from the show, but he is older, wiser and hotter now! :)

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Mandy

@MrDarcyfan

IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Pagalpinky
Wow that was amazing

Loving hearing about rehan seher

I kept wanting to scream: yes danger zone! Yes danger zone!
Then the ending I was like: oh yehhh! They've been in the danger zone

Uff loving your story
Thanks!

Yes their previous visit to the danger zone IS one of the major issues and a cause of huge angst! I thought the 'history' element between them will make the story more interesting.

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Mandy

@MrDarcyfan

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: kals82
o h.. god...
this is the best buddy...

the story and twist...

they have done all the three bases...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

now i could see where seher.. thoughts actions comes from..

iirespective of time.. and space...

she claims him to be hers...

nothing is going to change...

did really rehaan crossed the line...
nice..

update soon

Yes. Seher cant quite help being a bit territorial of Rehan. She tries to deny it, but she still has feelings for him and that is the problem. They didn't separate because of lack of feelings. More like the opposite. In cases like that, it is very hard to move on. Because you were in love and then it's like you just had to "turn off" the feeling like a tap? How do you do that? Circumstances sometimes force you to.

That is one of the things I want to explore in this story.

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dumas

@dumas

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Posted: 9 years ago

Loving the update and loving Aahil and Sanam knock jokes so cute when he was riling her up love Sher doing her best to take Sanam from her innocent talk loved how she was teaching her about the third base and crap she slept with Rehan no wonder she felt betrayed awesome update thanks for the pm.

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nawshi

@nawshi

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Posted: 9 years ago

Hey, just read all five parts in one go and i have got to say i am absolutely loving it. loving all the different relationships that you are showing in your story and cant wait to read more. OMG, that ending proper shocked me, i thought she was gonna blurt out to ahil that she loved him but u surprised me with that ending. Looking forward to next part. Pls continue soon 😊

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