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Nice update aww Shlok has fallen in love with his enemy, now can't wait to find out what he does about it now
He's a man of actions. Sadly he's a bit lost whos now his enemy and who is his friend😕
Thank you for your appreciation😃
Nice update aww Shlok has fallen in love with his enemy, now can't wait to find out what he does about it now
lovely update
shlok is in love
loved bros conv
n way u described his feelings
his inner voice was beautiful
Originally posted by: sathuraj
Lovely update Jane...
U have wrote Shlok feeling soo well...Loved the convo between Shlok and Varad...Shlok got attracted to Astha...what is Astha's reaction to the unexpected Kiss...Will he confess to Astha...what is Astha going to do...will anjali accept it ...but i know paro and varad will be happy...Thanks for the wonderful treat...waiting for the next part...
Originally posted by: DEVU.NAIR
another awesome update jane👏
shlok's inner thoughts are written beautifully❤️finally our shlok is in love😳missed astha in this updateegerly waiting 4 next updateupdate soon...
Oh you bet ur description that accurate. .sometimes I couldn't put my own feelings in words this beautifully. .hhm next time I should consult with you b4 saying somebody. .
Originally posted by: DJakaDesiJames
Shlok's POV,..hmm..very interesting..I always like to read the guy's POV since most of the writers including me write from the female's POV. Guess that comes naturally being women ourselves 😊. But this so well written and needless to say I loved it 😛. Shlok is already falling and the poor guy he is totally helpless...I think Astha is simply going to go over him right royally...Shlok is completely going to be at the mercy of this little bombshell 😆😆. All the best Shlok! 😆
Originally posted by: sreekailas
Wow wow wow!!! I'm at loss of words... Oh god!! I never imagined that shlok would think like this..he's so madly n deeply in love with her!! When varad talked to him abt love their convo was literally like one b/w blind n deaf.. But now shlok has started seeing sounds n hearing colors!!
your welcome 😊, can't wait to see what happens now
He's a man of actions. Sadly he's a bit lost whos now his enemy and who is his friend😕
Thank you for your appreciation😃
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